In dedication to a friend's innocent wonder at seeing fireflies for the first time. ^_^
Make Myself Believe (Fireflies)
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ZaCloud
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Make Myself Believe (Fireflies)
In dedication to a friend's innocent wonder at seeing fireflies for the first time. ^_^
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seasons
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Re: Make Myself Believe (Fireflies)
Not bad, some of it flowed really nicely and was relaxing to watch and achieved the effect you were going for.
Some of it felt too busy for its own good and there were some cuts that interrupted the flow (between 1:31 and 1:36, for instance) and the looped footage called attention to itself in a way that broke the illusion of the whole video.
On the whole I thought it was nice, I imagine you could make an AMV in this style that's really good if you weren't constrained by the theme you imposed on yourself here. You've made 40 videos in the last 15 years (none seen by me yet) so odds are you've already done this at some point along the way.
Some of it felt too busy for its own good and there were some cuts that interrupted the flow (between 1:31 and 1:36, for instance) and the looped footage called attention to itself in a way that broke the illusion of the whole video.
On the whole I thought it was nice, I imagine you could make an AMV in this style that's really good if you weren't constrained by the theme you imposed on yourself here. You've made 40 videos in the last 15 years (none seen by me yet) so odds are you've already done this at some point along the way.
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ZaCloud
- Joined: Thu Jul 12, 2001 10:04 pm
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Re: Make Myself Believe (Fireflies)
Wow, thank you for the review. I appreciate it. 
Can't say I've made something comparable to this one yet, not worth watching anyway, but hopefully I can more in the future. :3
Can't say I've made something comparable to this one yet, not worth watching anyway, but hopefully I can more in the future. :3
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Replay Studios
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Re: Make Myself Believe (Fireflies)
Not bad. I like alot of the scene selection ^^