What I've Become - AMV to contest

[maelyss]

Hello, so I made my 2nd AMV as I said. This time I had a light story line. I had also 3 weeks a dead line because I decided to push myself and apply for an AMV contest but saddly I decided a bit late.

I had to learn a lot of things in After Effects, something more in Premiere, in Cinema4D and Audacity from scratch.

It was a great expierence but will be much greater if you'll give me an honest feedback what to improve.


There are some mistakes I currently know but realized them later, could not solve them or did not have time, these are:

Too loud 2nd part - Invincible song (I realized that at the contest with stage reproductors)

The target looks like it drew a kid (I know that and I knew that from start but I don't have a point how to make it look better, if someone has an idea..?)

It looks a bit weird at 2:04 part, when Ace stops walking at the 3rd repeat, but just my opinion (again, don't know how to make him walk at all scenes xD)

When Zoro is thinking about people who wants to protect it is laggy, it is because I f... I was dumb and made a mess on my timeline so I had to make it "this long" aaand had to slow that too much, my biggest shame of a video to me

Luffy fade in after Zoro's thinking is so cheap (at this point I did not have much time)

Flag lag (... I don't know what to say to my defense except of time, I'm dishonored x'D)

Also after that flag part scenes are too long, lack of action and everything (last 1 or 2 days I had)

Thanks for reading!