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BaR0N
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My very first AMV

Post by BaR0N » Mon Oct 03, 2016 7:48 am

Hi Guys. I am new here. 2 Days ago i started making AMVs. this here is my first AMV and i want to know what i can do better. And yeah, i know that its not good xD .. (sry for my bad english :P)





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exkcal
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Re: My very first AMV

Post by exkcal » Mon Oct 03, 2016 3:14 pm

It started okay but it just got to the point where it was just one 1 minute + scene pasted over the last part of the song. That makes the amv super not engaing to watch. If you have more moments like when Asuna or whatever the fuck her name is engaging the fight sync well with the song the amv would have been way more enjoyable. Also I had a hard time taking the video seriously due to the song, it's hard to get a sense of danger or whatever when i am listening to a song about " a danger up in this club ". Nice try for your first amv. Your source was good and had no subtitles and it is evident that you have some sort of sense of synchronization.

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Re: My very first AMV

Post by BaR0N » Mon Oct 03, 2016 3:21 pm

Thank you for your Opinion. :)!

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RayizerAMV
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Re: My very first AMV

Post by RayizerAMV » Tue Oct 04, 2016 8:47 am

yeah you can sync the clips very well from just the gleam eyes fight scene and not over using the effects which is great. I like the flash/zoom in/out tho.

I personally think there isn't much things you can do since the amv is based on krito vs the gleam eyes so prephap you could use a shorter version of music (around 1 min) since 3 min is just too much since there is not much scenes that you could put into the amv from just the gleam eyes fight scene.

There were also a lot of parts in the amv is just the orginal scene flowing with no editing and just play along with the song - i mean 5-10 sec is good but over 20 second isn't that fun to watch. The clip you edit is just short fight scene therefore it's diffcult to make it engaging due to lack of scene. Anyway, if you want to create a amv with 3-4 min song , then you need to include other scenes and not just the Gleam Eyes part so that you can edit and sync better with the song without leaving a 20 second ish of orginal clip from the gleam eyes scene flowing around and doing nothing :P So to do better you have to add a mixture of scenes from other episodes and not just from the gleam eyes scene especially with a long song that is almost 4 minute .

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Re: My very first AMV

Post by BaR0N » Tue Oct 04, 2016 10:42 am

RayizerAMV wrote:
I personally think there isn't much things you can do since the amv is based on krito vs the gleam eyes so prephap you could use a shorter version of music (around 1 min) since 3 min is just too much since there is not much scenes that you could put into the amv from just the gleam eyes fight scene.

There were also a lot of parts in the amv is just the orginal scene flowing with no editing and just play along with the song - i mean 5-10 sec is good but over 20 second isn't that fun to watch.
Yeah, thats true :D Its exactly what you say :D If you had recognized, i´ve used 2 same Scenes because i dont had much scenes to work with :D But that was my first idea, so i tried to do my best out of it :P

Thank you for your Opinion :)!

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