Born for Battles - Mahoromatic (Trapt - Headstrong)

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Ra†Killer™
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Born for Battles - Mahoromatic (Trapt - Headstrong)

Post by Ra†Killer™ » Tue Jan 17, 2006 4:27 pm

I'm glad to present you my first AMV. I didn't try to make an extra class video for the first time ^_^
Don't judge it too strict, 'cause it's just first attempt.

Info:

Author: Ra†Killer™
Anime: Mahoromatic
Music: Trapt (Headstrong)
Duration: 3:03
File Size: 55 Mb
Frame Size: 512*288
Screenshots:
1) http://www.ljplus.ru/img/r/a/ratkiller_/screen1.JPG
2) http://www.ljplus.ru/img/r/a/ratkiller_/screen2.JPG
3) http://www.ljplus.ru/img/r/a/ratkiller_/screen3.JPG
4) http://www.ljplus.ru/img/r/a/ratkiller_/screen4.JPG
5) http://www.ljplus.ru/img/r/a/ratkiller_/screen5.JPG

Lyrics of the song <a href="http://lyricsbox.com/trapt-lyrics-heads ... l">here</a>

Enjoy it!
All opinions are welcome!

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Post by Ra†Killer™ » Tue Jan 17, 2006 5:03 pm

sorry.... forgot to add link to the video o_O ^_^
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=104123

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x_rex30
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Post by x_rex30 » Tue Jan 17, 2006 5:56 pm

I like the song and anime, so ill give it a download.

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x_rex30
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Post by x_rex30 » Tue Jan 17, 2006 6:36 pm

It's soo obviously downloaded footage.. that watermark was annoying.. the vid had some good timing.. some effects felt pointless, felt sort of random.. had a problem with the visual quality.. some good action.. overall not that bad for a first video! :twisted:

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Post by Ra†Killer™ » Tue Jan 17, 2006 6:46 pm

I never said that I thought about good vivid plot...No just...little of this...little of that =)

About watermark ^_^ I gave it special thanks in the end of video)

I can't agree with "pointless" and "random". I didn't try to find out how they will fit. No, vice versa, I think they are on their place...

Problem with quality...yep...it's not DVD rip, just Mpeg-4 fansub...I've tried to improve it by FX...but...it was tooooo bad from the beginning

Thanks for your Comment

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Darius GQ
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Post by Darius GQ » Tue Jan 17, 2006 7:49 pm

Finally I've upload your first AMV on org! Happy!!! :lol:

Can say only that it's a very good first video.... Like very much! Soon will show you your mistakes)))
Good luck in future!

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Warheart
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Post by Warheart » Thu Jan 19, 2006 8:11 am

Darius asked me to take a look at this and actually rex already said most of the things I'd have mentioned. But I wouldn't say that the effects were pointless since I always like eyecandy and moreover they weren't distracting. Like he said you shouldn't use subs and the timing was pretty nice that's about it.

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Post by Ra†Killer™ » Thu Jan 19, 2006 6:11 pm

To Warheart:

Thanks for your opinion man!

Next time I'll try to find video with better quality And think of some new style =))

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Kensuke156
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Post by Kensuke156 » Wed Jan 25, 2006 4:23 pm

Cool!
Glad you put this video right here!
Very good for the first time!! Additionalc information is in my OP!

Good luck in future

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dnk
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Post by dnk » Wed Jan 25, 2006 6:45 pm

Wow! very nicely done and your first vid too :D
"Morality, like art, means drawing a line someplace. "
Oscar Wilde

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