Hey all. ^_^* This is the first AMV my sister and I made, so we were hoping for some good comments and constructive criticism about it.
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=147699
Any omments you have would be great. Thanks a lot!
^_^*
Various Anime - Hum Hallelujah
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Downloaded this video after seeing your other one, and I have to say I'm almost as impressed with this one as I was with Lullaby. I love that you're editing unique concepts and succeeding...this wouldn't have been anything unique if you had focused in on one relationship, but I love that you did kind of a montage and showed a whole lot. It worked better, made it more interesting, and although there wasn't as much emotion as if you had been more focused, it still managed to do what it was meant to do.
A few gripes: The sync was off most of the time...not by enough to really bother me, but it was noticeable. Also, I wish you'd used a higher resolution...this and Lullaby are the first 320x240 videos released after 2003 that I've ever seen, I think. I don't know if you're familiar with the .org's guides, but if not you should give them a look - the guide I linked you to guarantees the highest quality possible, so read it over.
All in all though, this is an outstanding first video. I give it 4/5, but you're on the road to making some really awesome stuff in the future
A few gripes: The sync was off most of the time...not by enough to really bother me, but it was noticeable. Also, I wish you'd used a higher resolution...this and Lullaby are the first 320x240 videos released after 2003 that I've ever seen, I think. I don't know if you're familiar with the .org's guides, but if not you should give them a look - the guide I linked you to guarantees the highest quality possible, so read it over.
All in all though, this is an outstanding first video. I give it 4/5, but you're on the road to making some really awesome stuff in the future
