Please critique my Air Gear AMV!

Crucifixjel · Post by **Crucifixjel** » Thu Sep 20, 2007 7:30 pm

Please critique my Air Gear AMV...by leaving opinions on the AMV and not on this thread...

Title: Littlerazorblade
Song: Littlerazorblade by "the Pink Spiders"
Anime: Air Gear
Hardware: PC
Software: WinAVI Converter and Premiere Pro 2.0
Format: WMV

This was my first lip-syncing AMV, my 3rd AMV created since last year of November. And I heard from a lot of people saying that the song match with the anime and plus the song was very catchy...so please critique...

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=137405

Scintilla · Post by **Scintilla** » Thu Sep 20, 2007 7:38 pm

Just out of curiosity, if you didn't edit it with Windows Movie Maker, why did you decide to encode it as a .WMV?

Crucifixjel · Post by **Crucifixjel** » Thu Sep 20, 2007 7:45 pm

Scintilla wrote:Just out of curiosity, if you didn't edit it with Windows Movie Maker, why did you decide to encode it as a .WMV?

I'd try .avi or mp4 or even mpeg but my computer just doesn't like encoding things in any of those formats without messing up the quality...I blame my computer...can't wait to get another one...

But please critique....thanks...

post-it · Post by **post-it** » Thu Sep 20, 2007 8:19 pm

.. not to shabby ^__^ .. your not new to editing in way/shape/form!!! . . ? a Jr High Band ?

.. in the Middle of it, there was a Riff' and the girls were just looks ( at nothing ) -- bad form!

.. Adding the words to the screen during a passage -- unnecessary video clutter!

The Song worked quite well with the Video. I see nothing wrong with just two errors in Judgement!

.. keep it up

4/5 overall - well done ^_^

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Thu Sep 20, 2007 8:32 pm

I always love seeing good air gear amvs. video had some flaws but they didnt keep it from beind unenjoyable good job

4/5

Crucifixjel · Post by **Crucifixjel** » Fri Sep 21, 2007 10:41 am

post-it wrote:.. not to shabby ^__^ .. your not new to editing in way/shape/form!!! . . ? a Jr High Band ?

.. in the Middle of it, there was a Riff' and the girls were just looks ( at nothing ) -- bad form!

.. Adding the words to the screen during a passage -- unnecessary video clutter!

The Song worked quite well with the Video. I see nothing wrong with just two errors in Judgement!

.. keep it up 4/5 overall - well done ^_^

...could you critique my AMV by leaving opinions...cuz it helps me personally...haha...and to see where my strengths and weaknesses are by the rating process available on the opinions on the AMV...and plus...it helps me keep track of it...

Crucifixjel · Post by **Crucifixjel** » Fri Sep 21, 2007 10:41 am

shinodude wrote:I always love seeing good air gear amvs. video had some flaws but they didnt keep it from beind unenjoyable good job

4/5

...could you critique my AMV by leaving opinions...cuz it helps me personally...haha...and to see where my strengths and weaknesses are by the rating process available on the opinions on the AMV...and plus...it helps me keep track of it...

Scintilla · Post by **Scintilla** » Fri Sep 21, 2007 5:18 pm

If you're looking for ops specifically, I suggest checking out the Opinion Exchange board; that's what it's for.

Megamom · Post by **Megamom** » Sat Sep 22, 2007 12:19 pm

Good AMV, very good edition!

4/5