My New Full video, would greatly appreciatte feedback

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My New Full video, would greatly appreciatte feedback

Post by ShadowzAMV » Tue Apr 08, 2008 4:13 pm

I'm known from youtoob as SSJ3Dragonfist, anyway, i was hoping that i could get some feedback on the latest full video i completed, if anyone is kind enough to do so, i would appreciatte it. Though i might have only worked on it for 4.5 Hours, advice is always welcomed :D
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Post by VRSaskayzx » Tue Apr 08, 2008 4:20 pm

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Post by Kevmaster » Wed Apr 09, 2008 12:00 am

Loved it aside from some technical problems.

8/10

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Post by -MD » Wed Apr 09, 2008 2:51 am

I like this a little bit. But I have no clue why o.o

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Post by Goketsu » Wed Apr 09, 2008 8:59 pm

you already know I love it liam <3

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Post by Scott Green » Fri Apr 11, 2008 3:35 pm

Dragonfisting Children O:

/gets

EDIT: Zomg O:
That was.... awesome!!
Omg this video was really great, it kept me interested throughout the whole thing. You made that actually in 4 and a half hours o.o
It really had a great flow and some good ideas, I enjoied it!

Now the big bad point is you quality ;_;
The audio was really like shit it sounded like a 72 kbps mp3 or a youtube ripp >_>
Also the video quality was pretty bad, and please no black bars D=
I do have to ask this now, are you able to make a re-encode with better quality and without bars? I really want to have a better version of it because i really enjoied it ;_;

I guess I'll have to give a 3.8/5

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Post by Flo' » Fri Apr 11, 2008 3:58 pm

Scott Green wrote:Dragonfisting Children O:

/gets

EDIT: Zomg O:
That was.... awesome!!
Omg this video was really great, it kept me interested throughout the whole thing. You made that actually in 4 and a half hours o.o
It really had a great flow and some good ideas, I enjoied it!

Now the big bad point is you quality ;_;
The audio was really like shit it sounded like a 72 kbps mp3 or a youtube ripp >_>
Also the video quality was pretty bad, and please no black bars D=
I do have to ask this now, are you able to make a re-encode with better quality and without bars? I really want to have a better version of it because i really enjoied it ;_;

I guess I'll have to give a 3.8/5
x2, very good job. :lol:
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Post by Emong » Sat Apr 12, 2008 5:10 am

That was a nice video but as others have said, you gotta fix the video and audio quality @.@ They were really disturbing.

I liked the mood sync and the fades you used. They fit really nicely with the music and the vocals. I appreciate you paid attention to the clips you cross-faded. Too often people just toss in cross-fades and don't really pay any attention to movement continuation and such. Could have been coincidental here also, but the cross-fades looked really smooth~

I'm not sure about the chorus parts though. While the clip selection did its job separating the choruses and the verses from each other mood and story-wise, the effects you used there were quite akward. They didn't really sync well and looked a bit messy. Not a big problem though.. Also, the ending could have worked much better with a faster pacing. I sorta liked the way you used flashes to the beats but there was a fair share of beats you left unused.

Anyway, this is one of those very few AC videos that are built of scenes rather than clips. I liked that. Not only because it's original but it made the whole video look more consistent and progressive. It started with melancholy and closed with action and victory, closely following the mood of the song. It didn't really bring any new aspects to AC but it worked very nicely anyway :up:

4/5 (I'm not counting the technical issues)

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Post by ShadowzAMV » Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:26 am

Emong wrote:That was a nice video but as others have said, you gotta fix the video and audio quality @.@ They were really disturbing.

I liked the mood sync and the fades you used. They fit really nicely with the music and the vocals. I appreciate you paid attention to the clips you cross-faded. Too often people just toss in cross-fades and don't really pay any attention to movement continuation and such. Could have been coincidental here also, but the cross-fades looked really smooth~

I'm not sure about the chorus parts though. While the clip selection did its job separating the choruses and the verses from each other mood and story-wise, the effects you used there were quite akward. They didn't really sync well and looked a bit messy. Not a big problem though.. Also, the ending could have worked much better with a faster pacing. I sorta liked the way you used flashes to the beats but there was a fair share of beats you left unused.

Anyway, this is one of those very few AC videos that are built of scenes rather than clips. I liked that. Not only because it's original but it made the whole video look more consistent and progressive. It started with melancholy and closed with action and victory, closely following the mood of the song. It didn't really bring any new aspects to AC but it worked very nicely anyway :up:

4/5 (I'm not counting the technical issues)
Thankyou very much :D Yes i know the technical issues are killing this video, my pc was having major issues and ended up being foolish and rendering straight from vegas and uploading without any compression, which i now regret :cry: I will defintely be uploading a much higher Video/Audio Quality version within the next few days, thankyou for the advice and thoughts :P
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Post by ShadowzAMV » Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:29 am

Scott Green wrote:Dragonfisting Children O:

/gets

EDIT: Zomg O:
That was.... awesome!!
Omg this video was really great, it kept me interested throughout the whole thing. You made that actually in 4 and a half hours o.o
It really had a great flow and some good ideas, I enjoied it!

Now the big bad point is you quality ;_;
The audio was really like shit it sounded like a 72 kbps mp3 or a youtube ripp >_>
Also the video quality was pretty bad, and please no black bars D=
I do have to ask this now, are you able to make a re-encode with better quality and without bars? I really want to have a better version of it because i really enjoied it ;_;

I guess I'll have to give a 3.8/5
I'm glad you enjoyed it =D
Yes the quality of both the video and audio is horrible, major PC issues caused me to make foolish choices... rest assured i will upload a much higher quality one within the next few days, i'll keep the topic posted when that happens, thankyou for your thoughts XD
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