Usagi Project #4: The Miracle Chapter

Adahlfin · Post by **Adahlfin** » Thu May 29, 2008 8:39 pm

This completes my "Usagi no Naku Koro ni" AMV Project.

Megamom · Post by **Megamom** » Fri May 30, 2008 11:46 am

This is a AMV?

Well, I liked the ban, does not have a basic concept, subtitles are distracting, do not have an idea or a story, the only good news is publishing is very good, the timing is also good, you have much potential, should not spend this potential in concepts that are not part of a AMV!

1/5...Mejore!

CodeZTM · Post by **CodeZTM** » Fri May 30, 2008 11:51 am

Megamom wrote: This is a AMV?

Well, I liked the ban, does not have a basic concept, subtitles are distracting, do not have an idea or a story, the only good news is publishing is very good, the timing is also good, you have much potential, should not spend this potential in concepts that are not part of a AMV!

1/5...Mejore!

Pretty much agree here.

Adahlfin · Post by **Adahlfin** » Sat May 31, 2008 2:04 am

Thanks for the constructive criticism. I guess the subtitles didn't quite work as planned. I could re-edit a textless version pretty easily and post it as an alternative. I must know, though, did you follow the rest of the AMVs in this project that lead up to this? (The others are textless except for the openings, which are in homage to the series.)

Megamom · Post by **Megamom** » Sat May 31, 2008 2:56 pm

Adahlfin wrote:I must know, though, did you follow the rest of the AMVs in this project that lead up to this?

Yes ... I look the other amvs, and the concept is interesting, but my position is the same, you have to work his ideas, and create an AMV with those ideas, is not good to leave unedited footage in a AMV is a concept that hardly anyone understands!

As I said before, you have much potential and has fresh ideas, you just need to create a good concept Apart from their ideas!