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Bahamutt_Zero
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Post by Bahamutt_Zero » Fri Jun 27, 2008 3:22 pm

ok, here go my second AMV ^^
I divided in 2 parts of 2min, because I used 2 versions of the song ^^
The part one is more dramatic
The second part I have made with more action

I hope you enjoy

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CodeZTM
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Post by CodeZTM » Fri Jun 27, 2008 4:23 pm

Pretty poster. :O

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Post by Phantasmagoriat » Sat Jun 28, 2008 1:12 pm

They were both neat videos, and I left you quick comments on both.

I don't come across many videos like these. very unique ;)
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Post by Bahamutt_Zero » Sun Jun 29, 2008 7:31 am

Thanks man ^^

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Post by Niotex » Sun Jun 29, 2008 10:10 am

They both need allot more polish imo. Not to mention that I feel as if Part 2 is sub par compared to 1. Its clear that Part 1 is a more "M@D style" video as 2 is more "AMV". The contrast between the two is too big for me to enjoy the continuation. As for the progression of the story and your way of handling it.. It felt too "pre-chewed" at times. The constant text dialog is a must for this kind of video but it seriously over compensated for not having lyrics. A good example of this would be P1 - 01:24/01:28. This is simply too much and distracts from the video. The use of Evolution in this case doesn't bug me as much as I would have initially thought had I known prior to viewing.

P1 6.5/10
P2 5.5/10
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Post by Shui » Mon Jun 30, 2008 6:16 am

Both were very good ! :up:

Very special, I think you've done a good job.

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