my 3rd AMV ! Hope you like it! PLEASE MAKE ME SUFFER! kill me with your critics! and tell me everything that i have to improve!
One Piece - Capitan Heroes! - HackHaseo
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Re: One Piece - Capitan Heroes! - HackHaseo
no comments at all? im sooo popular -.- thx ppl!
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Re: One Piece - Capitan Heroes! - HackHaseo
It's your lucky day. You have been selected by #amv-review as our bonus video. Expect replies and possibly ops. But be careful what you wish for...
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Re: One Piece - Capitan Heroes! - HackHaseo
okay there are alot of problems with this video.
if you
Read <a href=http://www.a-m-v.org/guides/avtech31/>ErMaC & AbsoluteDestiny's Friendly AMV Guides Lovingly Overhauled Largely by Zarxrax</a>
then most of these problems will go away I think.
The whole thing is a tough read but if you really want to clean up the footage and make your AMVs like 1000000 times better it's definitely worth the read through.
Here are some of the things I didn't like.
The use of the Mondarian Stock transition. It looks ugly, it isn't creative and it is so incredibly obvious that and flow get's disrupted.
It;s like 1000 squares are punching me in the eyes saying HEY GRINGO LOOK AT ME.
The use of downloaded Subtitled footage.
The Subbers usually clean up the footage for you but sometimes they filter it way too much, I think that's what happened here. The subtitles remain in the video, look dumb, and distract from the editing. I really don't need flashy melting words telling me the name of Luffy's punch while I'm watching a music video.
MEGAUPLOAD
Why didn't you upload it here? You could have. (also Mega upload is an indirect link, not a direct link)
With all of this said
THE VIDEO IS NOT WITHOUT MERITS
As a matter of fact there were large sections of the video where you used simple hardcuts and fades to keep the action going and the video flowing. I thought that these were done quite well
I recognize that this is a simple action video, it doesn't require a story, and you use simple cuts to illustrate the action already in the video. I like all of this.
In conclusion, I think you will make a pretty sweet video once you get yourself some non downloaded footage, stop using the stock transitions, and most importantly take the time to read through the guide I linked.
Thanks and Good Job I hope to see you improve even further!
if you
Read <a href=http://www.a-m-v.org/guides/avtech31/>ErMaC & AbsoluteDestiny's Friendly AMV Guides Lovingly Overhauled Largely by Zarxrax</a>
then most of these problems will go away I think.
The whole thing is a tough read but if you really want to clean up the footage and make your AMVs like 1000000 times better it's definitely worth the read through.
Here are some of the things I didn't like.
The use of the Mondarian Stock transition. It looks ugly, it isn't creative and it is so incredibly obvious that and flow get's disrupted.
It;s like 1000 squares are punching me in the eyes saying HEY GRINGO LOOK AT ME.
The use of downloaded Subtitled footage.
The Subbers usually clean up the footage for you but sometimes they filter it way too much, I think that's what happened here. The subtitles remain in the video, look dumb, and distract from the editing. I really don't need flashy melting words telling me the name of Luffy's punch while I'm watching a music video.
MEGAUPLOAD
Why didn't you upload it here? You could have. (also Mega upload is an indirect link, not a direct link)
With all of this said
THE VIDEO IS NOT WITHOUT MERITS
As a matter of fact there were large sections of the video where you used simple hardcuts and fades to keep the action going and the video flowing. I thought that these were done quite well
I recognize that this is a simple action video, it doesn't require a story, and you use simple cuts to illustrate the action already in the video. I like all of this.
In conclusion, I think you will make a pretty sweet video once you get yourself some non downloaded footage, stop using the stock transitions, and most importantly take the time to read through the guide I linked.
Thanks and Good Job I hope to see you improve even further!
