She and Her Cat, yay!
I was born to be a proofreader, though.
This is going to sound really bad, so I apologize in advance. I really like the opening titles, but the typos bother me.
- In song titles, capitalize every word except "the", "of", "an", "a", "and", things like that. Unless the artist has specifically set a weird capitalization for it, which I don't believe REM has for any of these (if at all). I noticed "Frequency" and "My" (in "Losing My Religion") got lost. (also, "World" in It's the End of the World, and "Her" in She and Her Cat.)
- It's "Nightswimming," no capital in the middle.
- It's "The Great Beyond," with a "the." *double-checks CD* Yeah.
- I'm guessing it's supposed to be "REM Sleep," the pun between the band's name and the sleep state, unless this is secretly all about Vash's mom.
- The type this time has some odd antialiasing or something going on around the edges.
- I like the "Sec. 1" being included. "Sec. 2" shows in a flash around the middle, though, and it's so fast that it makes my eyes think I've missed part of the credits.
As for the typeface... I... have a deep and abiding loathing for Comic Sans, and I think the whole thing would look great if it were in a simple white sans-serif like SAHC's title at the beginning. But that's a personal problem. :p
But it's mostly the typos. I
really like the choice of anime and the editing, though. I'd never have thought of that for that song, but it really works.
...this was meant to be an encouraging post, really.
I like the intro a lot apart from that.
