Valentine MEP 2012 - Phase 1

[TritioAFB]

Sorry if I haven't left an Op Mkid, been busy. Code, if there are not any change you want to make to this version, consider this one as the final

[AngelDragoon]

Quick critiques if anybody want 'em!

Mkid:

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I agree, the upbeat atmosphere is great! I like the pacing in this. The few things I can think to change would be the font in the beginning, (it is a little hard to read...maybe add a shadow?), and the upper push transition at :25. Seems a bit out of place since it's not used in the rest of it. Otherwise, love it!

Code:

Spoiler :

Pacing is muuuch better in this one. The only thing that seems a little strange is at 1:25-1:31, since it seems to go by a little too quickly those first two clips and then two slowly with the last two. Other than that, awesome stuff.

SatoshiSakura:

Spoiler :

Yay for the fixed up lip-sync! XD While it's a pretty strong piece still, there's two things that caught my eye technically. One was the font; it seemed like it was a little lower than centered and while it's not that big of a deal I figured I'd mention something. Also, in the transition of 1:25-1:26, it seems like a clip from another scene got caught in there for a split second. But perhaps it's the dissolve playing tricks on me.

Project Beta:

Spoiler :

Cute beginning and I can see where it's going, but uh...the track between mind and the one following...the one with the blue haired girl. Is it suppose to be extended, a transition, or just a really, REALLY short track? D:

If I missed anybody, (or if anybody else wants some input), let me know! D:

[TritioAFB]

Actually you won't believe me who made that track xD

But yeah, although short I don't have any other option since the changes of beats from your part to mine are very high, so that track is supposed to be a transition

[AngelDragoon]

I see the predicament... Perhaps then transitions should be added between every track? Maybe with the upcoming editor/song/anime or quotes about love or something? Just to add a little more cohesion, because that blue haired girl reaaaally stands out to me from the rest of the video. XD;

[TritioAFB]

lol for real? I thought nobody was going to notice her u.u

[AngelDragoon]

Not that it's a bad thing, it just...well...yeah. The transitioning from a 2 minute track to something short to two more consecutive longer tracks just makes me keep thinking, '...Why was she there again? D:' Perhaps it will look different with a longer beta, but it's all up to you how you want it.

[CodeZTM]

Newer beta up.

[TritioAFB]

Code: Man, seems you did what I expected. Good You can extend the final now

Mkid: different o previous versions, this one now looks fine, I think is ready

[SatoshiSakura]

Quick critiques if anybody want 'em!



SatoshiSakura:

Spoiler :

Yay for the fixed up lip-sync! XD While it's a pretty strong piece still, there's two things that caught my eye technically. One was the font; it seemed like it was a little lower than centered and while it's not that big of a deal I figured I'd mention something. Also, in the transition of 1:25-1:26, it seems like a clip from another scene got caught in there for a split second. But perhaps it's the dissolve playing tricks on me.

Thank you! And really? The font looked pretty centered to me, but I'll have another look at it and fix it. Yeah, you're right about the transition part there, I was too lazy to fix it because I noticed it after the render and figured I'd fix it later.

I'll try to have everything done by tomorrow.

[TritioAFB]

Hurry my people, I'm like crazy downloading all the files I can right now, and start doing fixes.

Angel, after listening Code's song, I think I'll do a change in the next version. After all Code's part also fits to yours