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Post by OtakuForLife » Mon Jul 04, 2005 9:21 am

http://st26.startlogic.com/~amvoffce/IchBeta.avi
(after many attempts superfusion I prefer the no-fx verison)

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Post by SuperFusion » Mon Jul 04, 2005 1:51 pm

I'll just comment on it =|

In late 00:00 to 00:02, there's no timing at all from what I've seen.

Then at 00:02 to 00:03, it seemed like you let the clip drag on since that last scene change. I'd suggest timing the constant beats as well instead of just timing one of them and wait for the next set to come in. Looked as if you got lazy. =/

In late 00:03, you only timing that clap noise, which looks like a lack of effort, once again. ;_;

At 00:04, even though you timed the person's body movements, I didn't notice it until I actually had to pause the screen. So I'm not sure how you could make that look better. Maybe if you faded into the scene a little earlier and then the people will be able to see what you did.

Late 00:04, you once again just timed one of the constant beats instead of all of them.


I really think you need to do the fade out idea I showed you last night. Your timing for the clap noise is good, in my opinion. But the constant beats are your main problem. You completely ignore them after the first beat in the set begins. Though, I think the body movement and timing was perfect at 00:15. There isn't any need to edit that part since it looks nice and is perfectly viewable. To me, all you have to do is time those constant beats with a black flash and the segment will look cool. Don't take my criticism to heart, man. :O

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Post by OtakuForLife » Mon Jul 04, 2005 4:32 pm

No biggie I'll see what I can do about the early timing.

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Post by SQ » Mon Jul 04, 2005 5:01 pm

Track 16- Plc. 4 Mie Haed(Amp Live ft. Zion)- Reanimation- 7:16 - 8:00- TheFungus - Samurai Champloo

If TheFungus drops this track for any reason, I want it for .hack//SIGN. ^_^;
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Post by SuperFusion » Tue Jul 05, 2005 1:17 am

Hey, guys! I've got another beta for you! It's for my Enth E Nd track, and it's not complete because SQ hasn't started on her last 5-7 seconds, dammit!

http://www.hollowxilefilms.com/PeaceMakervid.avi


Criticism is good :)

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Post by Niotex » Tue Jul 05, 2005 7:46 am

ill work some more on my track today might do the first parts now cause those are now pretty much black...
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Post by CerebralAssamite » Tue Jul 05, 2005 8:56 am

Yeah I'll get to work soon... eventually, I deceided that I will finish the video in my sig finished before I start on this, mostly because i'm runniing out of disk space..

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Post by SuperFusion » Tue Jul 05, 2005 5:06 pm

Sorry about changing the compiler so much, but this will be the last. TheUnlimited is the one who will be compiling the project. One at a time you will upload to his server and one by one your tracks will be received.

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Post by SQ » Tue Jul 05, 2005 5:31 pm

SuperFusion wrote:Hey, guys! I've got another beta for you! It's for my Enth E Nd track, and it's not complete because SQ hasn't started on her last 5-7 seconds, dammit!

http://www.hollowxilefilms.com/PeaceMakervid.avi


Criticism is good :)
Pretty convient, dropping half your track on me. =/

Edit: http://www.putfile.com/media.php?n=Untitled6288
The more I watch it, the cornier it looks. D;
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Post by OtakuForLife » Wed Jul 06, 2005 8:51 am

http://st26.startlogic.com/~amvoffce/LPRBeta3.avi

Well after many more attempts I tried to add fx and it looked like shit.
So I decided to retime large portions of it. I think this will be my last
beta. Becuase I might start devloping nightmares about this track if
I have to reedit it again.

Other News:

Track 13- Frgt/10(Alchemist ft. Chali 2na)-
Reanimation- 5:45 - 6:09- OtakuForLife - Noir
(This ones going to take me a while)
This will be an FX track I already see it in my head.

I'll be doing
Track 18- Forgotten- Hybrid Theory- 8:32 - 9:10-
to Saikano. It has the right kinda mood for it after
careful concideration of other sources I had in mind.

Don't expect 18 for a while :)
Got a bunch of other MEPs Tracks to do.
Including wanderlust for Dark Desires.

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