The Blümchen-Nur Geträumt MEP
- Rurounikeitaro
- Joined: Mon Dec 15, 2003 9:24 pm
- Location: Piscataway, NJ Watching: Death Note, KIBA, Sola
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- CrackTheSky
- has trust issues
- Joined: Sun Aug 27, 2006 11:01 pm
- Status: Maybe editing?
- Location: Chicago
Well, I have everything done, except Kaxi doesn't like a bunch of things so I'm going to have to alter a bunch of stuff ):<guy07 wrote: Now if we could only get something done
Just kidding, Kaxi. I don't mind. But I'm going to start working on my own project now so I may not get around to changing that stuff for a week or two. But that can count as my five-second January 5 beta, right?
- CrackTheSky
- has trust issues
- Joined: Sun Aug 27, 2006 11:01 pm
- Status: Maybe editing?
- Location: Chicago
Sure, here you go:Greggus1 wrote:Hey Sky, I don't mean to be indiscreet, but posting the tips Kaxi gave you could be very interesting for us
I don't understand 3, really. As for 5, I added a flashing border along with the sliding overlays for the last third of the video to give it more sync after I showed you and aerial my beta, so that's what he's referring to (and I agree with what he says there).Kaxi wrote:1. Please remove this "fly in" effect from the beginning, it would be better if it would just ran simple.
2. The effects plced to the "whooo" or something like that are good, but you should do something to make it a little more visible, stronger, maybe you should set the opacity higher or place some kind of color distorion on it, so it would stand out more.
3. From 0:09 to 0:16, these black flashes are too much in my opinion. Maybe you should solve this differently - maybe use a lot more scenes - scene changes - something that follows the music but not just effect sync.
4. I don't really like the transition here (0:16), the scene where the guy runs away from the girl, you should think of something else here.
5. The borders are ok, i like them, but check out if you can make them a little less simple colours, i mean, i would try to place a white glow on the borders, and after it a gradient map effect with some original colours, it may look better.
If anyone wants to see the beta I showed Kaxi, PM me and I'll give you the link.
- Aerialesque
- is actually a penguin in boots
- Joined: Fri Aug 25, 2006 6:30 pm
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- guy07
- Joined: Mon Sep 08, 2003 1:28 pm
- Status: Back in beard.
- Location: T.O.
Yeah, kaxi's good at ripping vids apart, he's a reall ass : /
lol
I finally got my net back, but realized i have to finish my beta for the VDay project first, so for now this one takes a back seat : (
Somebody HAS to use school rumble for this, it would fit perfectly, then tenchi, love hina and maybe something like the part in DBZ with crillins GF (the one with the huge jugs, ya know?), that would all work if you were still wondering about footage usage. I believe that's the sort of stuff kaxi wants in here seeing as how i'm his alter ego
lol
I finally got my net back, but realized i have to finish my beta for the VDay project first, so for now this one takes a back seat : (
Somebody HAS to use school rumble for this, it would fit perfectly, then tenchi, love hina and maybe something like the part in DBZ with crillins GF (the one with the huge jugs, ya know?), that would all work if you were still wondering about footage usage. I believe that's the sort of stuff kaxi wants in here seeing as how i'm his alter ego
- CrackTheSky
- has trust issues
- Joined: Sun Aug 27, 2006 11:01 pm
- Status: Maybe editing?
- Location: Chicago
- guy07
- Joined: Mon Sep 08, 2003 1:28 pm
- Status: Back in beard.
- Location: T.O.
- BauziOLD
- Joined: Tue Oct 17, 2006 5:16 am
- Location: Austria (uhm the other country without kangaroos^^)
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