WIP - Next Yesterday AMV (Clannad)

[LordICE]

Hi everybody! This is my first post on the forum, although I registered several years ago.
I came to ask of you some advices and opinions on my newest AMV, regarding the continuity and composition of it (of course, you can emphasize any other flaws you might find). The AMV is based on Clannad + After Story and tries to propose a new version of the original story, in which Tomoya relives some more or less pleasant memories, remembering all the mistakes he has committed in the past. At the end, he finally gets the chance to correct what was done (much like in After Story original ending), but at that point he has two completely different ways to fix this. Either he forgets about Nagisa by completely ignoring her, or gets a second chance in which he might or might not make the same mistakes.

I need some opinions on the linearity, composition and song choice (how well the song fits the video). Also, what do you think about the choice of effects (are they to pronounced or improper in some areas), and what did you manage to understand from from this AMV, ignoring the above description.

As a final note, the clip posted here is less then half the quality of the original. I encoded the file so it can be downloaded more easily.

Video: Clannad and Clannad After Story
Audio: Ayumi Hamasaki and Jun Maeda
Next Yesterday (RS LINK)

Thanks in advance!

[LordICE]

This one is done, so I decided to go on and upload my AMV.

Cheers!