WIP -- Black Butler AMV: Story of Alois Trancy (Voices)

[Earl of Bassington]

Hey, this is my first go at AMV'ing, so I need a lot of pointers... I used Adobe Premiere CS5 and Dream Theater's "Voices". I am looking for filter tips and general criticism. I know this probably isn't the best put together thing, but I am trying my hardest to really capture emotion above all things. I think the ending turned out very nice, but I am looking for a good effect for the snare/bass beats when the scenes transition. ALSO THE AUDIO MAY BE PRETTY LOUD, I'M NOT SURE.

Again, opinions, critisismsmsms and pointers! Without further ado...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UAF9H0Qu ... e=youtu.be

https://www.dropbox.com/s/5zkemfmkzdnj4 ... Teaser.avi

I really like how the ending turned out, BUT MIND YOU, this is a 9 minute song, this is JUST for the first minute. It took me about 2 hours to get this done, I think that's pretty okay for a first timer. TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!