(WiP) Beta version of a story-like AMV. Feedback appreciated

[hiddenhole]

Link to the video

With this amv I'm trying to create a self-contained story that starts and ends within the chosen music track.

The video is pretty much complete, but I'm looking for specific feedback to polish it and get it ready:
Does any part of the story look confusing? Are key elements missing?
How does the pacing/flow of the video feel? Are there scenes or transitions that look clunky/awkward?

Any other kind of feedback/suggestion is still appreciated.

[TritioAFB]

To be honest your story is extremely linear. It's well made, since it's been a while I last watched Naruto Shippuden and I can understand what's happening in the video but then again: Too linear. It could get boring at certain point since there's no real climax in it