[WIP] - Any comments on what I have so far?

[8bitcritr]

It's still really rough, it has some black spots, some unfinished clips, and I was using 480p version of my sources(just for now) to make everything process render faster. I plan on making the final version 720. Is there anything you think doesn't fit or could be improved, maybe an idea for a new concept?

here's the link
http://filecloud.io/px3lw0rt

[madelope]

Hey I am new to this forum but I took a look at your amv and so far I really like it! The song has a very dark mood, I was thinking adding a filter or something to create more of a dark/eerie feeling throughout the amv.
Also, here are some parts I picked out that I really enjoyed and some parts I think need some work

0;09: Instead of extreme slow motion, try a freeze frame then a fade out?
1:21: Loved the timing here!
2:02 - 2:06 I think the timing could have fit to the song a little better here
2:37: Love this transition!
Also, some of the black out parts (in the first half of the amv) kind of fit! I like the abruptness of black out spots when they fit to the music

Hope this helps for now, can't wait to see the final product!!


-madelope

[post-it]

not sure what's-up but, only about 1/8th of it downloads!

[8bitcritr]

I just checked the download and it worked fine for me. idk what would cause it to stop downloading

[8bitcritr]

Video is done! what do ya think?