FIRST EVER AMV - Need some ffeedback

[Feided AMV]

I'm new to AMV, I would really appreciate if you check out my first AMV and give me some feedback on what's wrong with it, what's right and where I can improve on. Thank you

Link to my first video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ueGZHPb3rso

[exkcal]

Didn't get a chance to watch much of it but off the bat I have to say, ditch the intro! Maybe use a song that isnt used as frequent as the one you chose. Il put more once i get a chance to watch it again and I am at my pc.

[RayizerAMV]

Like the second comment, the intro was bad - ruin the video ( it's better to keep it short and get straight to the point). Better of having about 5 sec intro. Hardly any syncing , it was just like a music just placed on some scenes and that's all. Also i was first person to edit that music since starset requested it from before (before the music was offically release) xD I personally think you should have done more work to it especially the first 44 seconds then after that you can explode it with the action , then it would work well with the overall video.