Devilman Crybaby - The Distance (WIP)

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Devilman Crybaby - The Distance (WIP)

Post by ShizayaFanart » Fri Jun 21, 2019 8:51 pm

https://youtu.be/lhg9H0Lt3F0

I know this is rough, but that's why they call it a rough draft, right? I had to cut it off early because there was like another 40 seconds of instrumental, and there's not enough Devilman Crybaby to fill that. Any constructive criticism (feel free to not pull any punches) you have, especially in regards to making the ending feel less abrupt, would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
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