It's like it shrunk when uploaded to youtube
I personally like the changes, but I think a second opinion would be helpful.
Also, if you want, I can edit up to like 2:30 and show you kinda the changes I'd implement, I guess. And if you like it, you just implement it on your own end or I can discuss what to do, I suppose.
Edit: I see what the issue is. Your source material is working against you. The scenes you need only last for roughly 1 second which sucks but that means you may need to improvise a bit when editing. I'll show you what I mean soon.
Edit 2: Okay, I got up to like 0:45 seconds but I think that's enough to show what I mean. On one note, though, you picked the best/worst anime for this song. xD The scenes just do not want to stay scenery for very long and they just want to move right on to the next scene >.< But I definitely applaud you for the scenes you did choose. Very creative. Anyway, here's my idea, hope it helps out.
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