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kain2983
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Post by kain2983 » Tue Jun 15, 2004 2:49 pm

Hey could you give me a review on the video in my signature
It is an Action, Character Profile, Comedy
A standard reveiw would be fine with me.
Thanks
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Post by genestarwind21122 » Tue Jun 15, 2004 3:36 pm

Hey madbunny it's me Gene again. Hey can you op my two newest amv's

Fighting For Your Love ( Dramatic/Serious/ Romantic/ Sentimental/ Upbeat Rhytm)

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=33238

Belldandy's Memories (Romantic / Serious/ Sentimental)

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=36086

I know you said they couldn't be of the same Genre but Fighting For Your Love is a big mix of things really and is one that I would like you to review. As for Belldandy's memories this in my opinion is really a very touching video. For Fighting For Your Love Iwould like a 2 since it has 47 ops now. And for Belldandy's Memories I would like a 3 if you could. Thanks.

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Post by madbunny » Tue Jun 15, 2004 8:24 pm

Tsunami Jones wrote:Hey, if you could op the video in my signature, it'd be appreciated. The vid is mainly drama/action with a bit of romance. And as for the type of op, your "standard" op type will be fine. Thanks!
Your op has been posted.
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Post by Onyyx » Tue Jun 15, 2004 9:01 pm

Heya you crazy rabbity guy. As I recall you've already seen my Innocence loved video, so how bout a review? Op it any way you like, whatever strikes your fancy. :)

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=37326

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Post by madbunny » Tue Jun 15, 2004 9:24 pm

Brain-Carnival wrote:Yeah i know that Vid has many ops, but i would really appreciate a detailed op (u left one of the best reviews id ever gotten on my Ghost in the shell AMV) .
I'm gonna op ur "witch hunter robin " AMV in return (that after afternoon)^^

Greetz, Brain-Carnival
Your op has been posted. This definately a powerful and moving peice. While it has it's flaws, I have yet to see a dramatic video of this caliber until now. Thank you not only for making this video, but for suggesting that I watch it.

As to the review, the music lacked the internal complexity and progressively excalating rythymms of your other one so I couldn't comment on your matching as much. I did try to focus on the artistic and stylistic elements. Feel free to PM me if you have a question or complaint about the review.
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Post by drunkencell » Tue Jun 15, 2004 11:24 pm

The Trigunator (trailer video)
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=28042

Lupin, the wanted man (comedy/character profile in need of a better title)
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=41094

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Post by LantisEscudo » Wed Jun 16, 2004 9:09 am

Could I please get a Standard on my Drama/Romance video Gods and Mortals?

Thanks.

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Post by greenjinjo » Wed Jun 16, 2004 9:58 am

I shall capitalize on your generousity :D

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=40747 for a more of a serious type of video

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=33776 for a comedy

However you want to review them is fine, and either one or both are fine, your call :D
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Post by inthesto » Wed Jun 16, 2004 11:49 am

LEECH ALERT LEECH ALERT

First video:

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=37102

In theory, it's supposed to be an action video, but uh....well, it's tough to say. It's rather light on action elements, and most of the video is really just flapping mouths during an instrumental, so I tend to categorize this as "drama." I wanted a story-based idea, but a lot of people didn't seem to dig it the way I did.

Second video:

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=39366

This video is somehwat similar to my other one in that it tries to be story-based, but this one centralizes around the self-discovery of a character much more. Or at least, that's what I wanted. This one is much heavier on the action element, but the fact that it's eight and a half minutes long accounts for most of that. Also, the visual quality is absolutely shitty. I'm already aware of

If it's not too much to ask, while I would like feedback on technical aspects (most notably, how my subtitles work), some comments on how the story flows and how well I managed to get the point across would be nice too.

And I swear, one of these days I'll leave a (serious) op for Alive.

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Post by inthesto » Wed Jun 16, 2004 11:51 am

AWARE OF THAT

God dammit, too much time on the internet impacts your lingual abilites.

Also, just to be clear, even though I asked for story-comments, there's no need to leave a tier-4, or even a tier-3 review.

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