Happy World! amv W.I.P. advice gratefully recieved.

bob790 · Post by **bob790** » Fri Nov 05, 2004 5:58 am

I would be grateful for any constructive comments positive or negative relating to my current project.

This is my first AMV for while, it's also the first I've made using downloaded footage. The picture quality is not great and has been kept even lower for the purpose of W.I.P opping.

file: http://amvtest.minotaur.cc/Beta.avi
user: amvbeta
pwd: elle
filesize: 17Mb
anime: Happy World!
song: Pathway to Paradise

time to next beta: 4 days

Thank you in advance.

keeso · Post by **keeso** » Fri Nov 05, 2004 5:28 pm

yup i`ll op that , and for exchange op this

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=51394

keeso · Post by **keeso** » Fri Nov 05, 2004 6:06 pm

Guess i`ll have to give my opinion to here.

The beginning was excellent , there was good lip synccing. But why did it stop, it just suddenly stopped , you should have lip syncced the whole amv. There was maybe too much random scenes, place them to right places.

I see that this is beta version, and i saw that now. (dammit!) But after all please give your op about my amv

And if this is going to be your first amv , not bad at all

If you work hard and you should spend time with it.

=great amv

Op this ^^ http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=51394

Maverick-Rubik · Post by **Maverick-Rubik** » Fri Nov 05, 2004 6:45 pm

I don't think he said this was an exchange, keeso.

At least, most WIP threads aren't...

bob790 · Post by **bob790** » Sat Nov 06, 2004 6:10 am

keeso wrote:Guess i`ll have to give my opinion to here.
The beginning was excellent , there was good lip synccing. But why did it stop, it just suddenly stopped , you should have lip syncced the whole amv.

Do you have any idea how long that would take? How stupid it would look and what a waste of effort that would have been?

keeso wrote: There was maybe too much random scenes, place them to right places.

That is completely unhelpful. Which scenes are random, where should they be to be better placed?

keeso wrote:I see that this is beta version, and i saw that now. (dammit!) But after all please give your op about my amv

Hence "W.I.P" in the title rather than "exchange" as the sticky explained.

keeso wrote:And if this is going to be your first amv , not bad at all If you work hard and you should spend time with it. =great amv

Not my first, just my first for a month or two. If you (or anyone else) have any useful suggestions on how to improve it before I release it. I'd be grateful.

keeso wrote:Op this ^^ http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=51394

Sorry. This is a WIP op thread. I'll do an exchange thread when I put the finished video up. If you want I'll PM you to tell you I've put the thread up.

keeso · Post by **keeso** » Sat Nov 06, 2004 7:05 am

yup , np

i`ll op it then