Sorry I didn't reply for like a week, my literal reason was because while I was almost done everything in my roo just shut off, and I didn't feel like re writing anything. On another note I'll just go ahead and write what I was going to write.Dragonrider1227 wrote:That sounds plausible. Thanks. Don't think it's needed for this video but it could work for others.
If you're curious, I use Videopad Video Editor
You don't think any of it was cheesy or too literal? I'm starting to feel like it is and not narrative enough. But then, I want to send this to an AMV contest at a convention and that has me very nervous
I don't think any of it is cheesy cause that's not how I saw it, though your best bet is that kryptonite part.
As for literal, You technically made it all literal and u can understand the words with the visuals, like the bird one, that is literal to the words, though if it were a scene were the bird wasn't the focal point' be different. I think to make some less literal and more word meaning if you switch the "I can't stand to fly scene" with the "I'm just out to find" one, the the I cant stand to fly scene become more of a word meaning. It shows the vast sky around him, and he isn't smiling, it shows the seriousness in the words.
Try Putting into a bunch of contest, you have better chance of at least finalist, which you should shoot for that, people see your videos and if you get potentially more subscribers if people like, though winning is good too, see BakaOppai's videos, they are unique and crazy good, I'm shooting to become something better then that.
It's nothing to feel nervous about, you will always have another chance, just keep working at it and you i'll get better. Good luck
