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Post by Rapture** » Sat May 12, 2007 5:46 am



Check it out,and please don't be too harsh :|
:D I like laughter ;DD
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Post by shinji13 » Sat May 12, 2007 6:11 am

kadaj665 wrote:wow! Thanks a lot!!

This was a pretty good video, my only complaint with this one and the first one I reviewed are.
complaint from shinji13 wrote:These videos lack lip syncing, only using a few scenes tops and yet they demand we give them a lip syncing score for them barely working for it. I refuse to give someone an easy A; being forced to either give a N/A or to give a lower grade kind of ticks me off, try to include a sizable amount of something in your video if you want to be graded for it.
This video had some great action sequences, but the video quality is kind of an eye-sore and I really didnt like the text splashed across the screen like some kind of amber alert.


I've noticed a large amount of hentai videos have already reached this thread, thats kind of odd :P I just want everyone to know that I am not specifically going for hentai videos and would actually 'rather' see regular animated videos, because they often hold a better storyline, just don't think thats all that can be posted.
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Post by shinji13 » Sat May 12, 2007 6:34 am

Kevmasterflashdeluxe wrote:uhmn..this one please?:




Thanks a lot in advance ;)
Not a bad video, and it turns out I was wrong two of the three hentai videos posted tonight contain no nudity what-so-ever. :D Which is pretty cool.

I also think this video is the second best hentai-anime based video I have seen, so congradulations on that.

shinji13 critic wrote: You should not include people talking in videos unless it is going to be lip-synced, otherwise it looks very amateur and its an eye-sore.

Also your video quality needs some work, its quite fuzzy and I saw a faint logo on the top right of the screen that didnt need to be there
Well, I finished Frostreturns, kadaj665's and Kevmasterflashdeluxe's opinions tonight, tomorrow when I get home from work I will do everything I still have left to do (unless I dont feel I can), and download the new stuff that comes in.

Thanks for stopping by everyone.
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Post by -MD » Sat May 12, 2007 6:45 am

Title: While you weren't here
Anime: Full Metal Panic TSR
Artist: Linkin Park and Toshio Matsuda
Songs: Breaking the Habit and Alone
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=143906

I heard the song is over used :shock: but if you don't mind (need help) This is technically the best I have done so far which is not good enough I think....need critic.
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Post by RanChan13 » Sat May 12, 2007 7:13 am

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=143667
Anime: Ouran High School Host Club
Song: Do you wanna
Artist Franz Ferdinand


And if you'll do a second op
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=127324
Anime: Ouran
Songs: varied
Artists: varied
I am the bone of my sword
Steel is my body and fire is my blood
I have created over a thousand blades
Unknown to Death
Nor known to Life
Have withstood pain to create many weapons
Yet, those hands will never hold anything
So as I pray, unlimited blade works.

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Post by Szwagier » Sat May 12, 2007 7:21 am

Nice to see you back in buissness :]

Well then if you want please take a look at this one:




Thx in advance for your time ;]
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Post by Superbastard » Sat May 12, 2007 9:53 am



Thanks a lot, It is really apprecicated!!
<a href="http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=137208" target="_blank">Hole In The Earth</a>, <a href="http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=154005" target="_blank">Clare is Stricken</a>

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Post by Rubix89 » Sat May 12, 2007 9:56 am


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Post by Rrezz » Sat May 12, 2007 10:00 am

eh..you really dont have to do this one >.o It is Bleach and not really an original concept..but It seems like people still enjoy the Video and re-watch it pretty often..the Opinion would be greatly apprecicated, but if you dont want to do the Video, I'd understand it.


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