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painamation
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Post by painamation » Fri May 02, 2003 5:22 am

New videos up Have Ode to the black mage and my beta version of Alita Battle Angel really would like a little feedback on Alita since it's the beta version.Doesn't have to be an opinion just your thoughts I will be doing the final version in Adobe finally have it working again.

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KhalReblic23
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Post by KhalReblic23 » Sun May 04, 2003 7:13 pm

IM BACK!! who missed me?? apparently 2 pages worth of people LOL I will get to work soon, have faith 8)
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Post by KawaiiYume4o8 » Sun May 04, 2003 8:44 pm

Hello! New member, KawaiiYume4o8, here. For anyone bored and wanna see some of my newly uploaded work. =^.^= Please tell me what you think and enjoy ^^Arigatou Minna-san!! :D

X(tv)-Saving You-http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=17114

Yu-gi-oh-YAMI-http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=17035

AMG-Born to make you happy-http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=17113

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Re: Well...

Post by KhalReblic23 » Wed May 07, 2003 1:54 pm

Kyoushu wrote:Being new to AMVs, my videos aren't all that special. But I would like to know how to improve them, so I would like them to be commented on and get some constructive criticism. If you have the time, please take a look at them.

Tetsuo is Insane : http://animemusicvideos.org/members/mem ... hp?v=16438

Super Sonic :
http://animemusicvideos.org/members/mem ... hp?v=16469
done done!! :D
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Post by KhalReblic23 » Wed May 07, 2003 2:04 pm

painamation wrote:Either or it doesnt matter if you want to rate it one the site it's in my profile :arrow: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... rofile.php

Or here not like i'm winning any contest with it lol!I just do what I like or what comes to mind.

:twisted: painamation
dude....that link goes to whoever clicks it own profile, not yours LOL. But thats ok, i'll just give ya a qucik rundown right here.


Instanly smiles, good song! lol Hmm, usually the numbers speak for themselves, but i dont have any here. The vid was pretty good, I liked how you stuck to your theme the entire time. This was about Garnet and what she was going through and nothing else. I dont like when people let it trail off. I also liked the color changing you did. Only suggestion i have is...and i cant remember the gay villans name, (long time since i beat FF9) but perhaps some other footage of him, since you seemed to cut to the same exact scene each time. I think if it was for effect then maybe a slight zoom each time you see it so it feels different but more punctual. Anyways, nice vid and I'll check out some more of yours when you get the chance. If you want this on your ORG file give me the link to the vid and i'll post it there (cuz i could also use the op count) Thanks alot!
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Post by Brsrk » Wed May 07, 2003 2:09 pm

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=17135

My first AMV, I know it's not THAT good from what I've heard from last night, and Ic an kind of agree with that. The first minute or so (after the bumper) is one massive clip, it's slow, but eventually picks up, but I have another in the works and I'm going to make it sorta like Fire, but not as many special effects and more transitions (other than fading) in this new one.

Have fun and feel free to PM or e-mail me any things to improve on and such...
Pwolf wrote:that music was way to "happy" for an anime as dramatic as the kenshin ova... your an evil evil person :P :up: Pwolf
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=87528

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Post by SSJVegita0609 » Wed May 07, 2003 2:39 pm

YAY! Khal's back, got a new one for ya:

http://animemusicvideos.org/members/mem ... hp?v=16752
The best effects are the ones you don't notice.

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Post by superspike » Wed May 07, 2003 2:47 pm

*ahem* http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=17154
*ahem*

Maybe you over looked me ^_^

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