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Re: free critical opinions~

Post by Nya-chan Production » Thu May 13, 2010 7:05 pm

You can go through all any of my videos ^^
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Re: free critical opinions~

Post by OtakuGray » Thu May 13, 2010 9:33 pm

okay i went through and found one i could critique :amv:

Also, i think im done for now, so no more opinions :wink: hehe
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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Re: free critical opinions~

Post by gotegenks » Fri May 14, 2010 1:37 am

OtakuGray wrote: lol ill check it out. |:>

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*completely agrees with Exsphere ofc* :book:
if there were bad scene choices in your opinion, it wasn't caused by my supposed incomprehension of flcl, this video wasn't about naota or shinji at all, it had a specific story in my mind not having to do with either of them. The animes were tools, not subjects.

if it's a 4/5 why'd you put a 7 instead of an 8? :cry:

thanks though, good op, appreciate it. :mrgreen:
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Re: free critical opinions~

Post by simofc90 » Fri May 14, 2010 6:35 am

OtakuGray wrote:okay i went through and found one i could critique :amv:

Also, i think im done for now, so no more opinions :wink: hehe
ops sorry I didn't notice it
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Re: free critical opinions~

Post by OtakuGray » Fri May 14, 2010 12:50 pm

gotegenks wrote:
OtakuGray wrote: lol ill check it out. |:>

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*completely agrees with Exsphere ofc* :book:
if there were bad scene choices in your opinion, it wasn't caused by my supposed incomprehension of flcl, this video wasn't about naota or shinji at all, it had a specific story in my mind not having to do with either of them. The animes were tools, not subjects.

if it's a 4/5 why'd you put a 7 instead of an 8? :cry:

thanks though, good op, appreciate it. :mrgreen:
Well, i have a problem with fooly cooly amvs, mostly because there seems to be a major lacking in scene choice and story comprehension....so i tend to batter on that a lot lol :|

If you weren't focusing on those two characters, you have to remember that they still have original stories/mindsets attached to them and explaining a vague story with two very deep characters may throw off the audience (like it did for me) but i still like the concept and so i can understand where your coming from. :book:
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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Re: free critical opinions~

Post by Nya-chan Production » Fri May 14, 2010 3:09 pm

gotegenks wrote:
OtakuGray wrote: lol ill check it out. |:>

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*completely agrees with Exsphere ofc* :book:
if there were bad scene choices in your opinion, it wasn't caused by my supposed incomprehension of flcl, this video wasn't about naota or shinji at all, it had a specific story in my mind not having to do with either of them. The animes were tools, not subjects.

if it's a 4/5 why'd you put a 7 instead of an 8? :cry:

thanks though, good op, appreciate it. :mrgreen:
7 or 9 can mean 4/5 - because 10 point scale is kinda something else than 5 point scale |:
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Re: free critical opinions~

Post by GH » Fri May 14, 2010 4:19 pm

Nya-chan Production wrote:7 or 9 can mean 4/5 - because 10 point scale is kinda something else than 5 point scale |:
it's fractions.
a 3.5/5 equals 7/10.
4/5 equals 8/10.
4.5/5 equals 9/10.

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Re: free critical opinions~

Post by Nya-chan Production » Sat May 15, 2010 1:29 am

1/5
2/5
3/5
4/5
5/5

I don't see any 3.5, 4.5 or 2.5864239 in there.
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Re: free critical opinions~

Post by OtakuGray » Sat May 15, 2010 1:35 am

ROFL alright, ima play mod here.

STOP IT. UR ALL ...LIKE...TOTALLY TALKING TOO MUCH. :nono:


... :ying: that was fun.
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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