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Post by nemesisENFORCER » Mon Apr 05, 2004 9:40 pm

here's my video my first and only video


http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=34838


thanks

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Post by madbunny » Tue Apr 06, 2004 1:10 am

Op posted. Could have been better. With all the time you spent on your effects, you could have cleaned up the footage, and killed the subtittles with a blur program. Still, you've got some skill though.
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Post by madbunny » Tue Apr 06, 2004 1:20 am

Bakadeshi [AuN Studios] wrote:madbunny you realy are mad! more opinions? you must be bored silly ;p
feel free to op any of my other 3 vids, I havn't gotten a breakdown on these yet, although I know alot thats wrong with them already since I've improved. but getting another persons input would be helpfull aswell. Click the smileys ;p
:oops: - Romantic (Spirited Away)

:wink:
- Light Romantic, Fun (Ranma)

:lol:
- Humor, Parody (Trigun / Cowboybeepop)
Take your pick ;p

Actually it doesn't take that long. I just do them ten at a time. Download them with a sequential number to the front IE: 0036-AunLaputa-Run away with me....
What takes a long time is when I get an excellent video like the last one of yours, and I try to find some way that it could have been made better. Normally I don't do long time sequence breakdowns either. I may do yours one at a time, with some others in between so that I don't get bogged down if you don't mind.
You should get the first one sometime tonight.

Oh, and . Hopefully others will see this post and take the hint.
thanks for labeling the genre of each video
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Post by nailz » Tue Apr 06, 2004 7:20 am

flint_the_dwarf wrote:That's what preview is for, retard.
hey, I wrote you a poem, flint:

Roses are red
They have thorns
I heard you like cock in your ass
The size of Hellboys Horns.
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Post by Flint the Dwarf » Tue Apr 06, 2004 7:53 pm

Hey, I wrote you a poem

Hey
I wrote you a poem
:?
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Post by madbunny » Wed Apr 07, 2004 1:29 am


Good choice of song to use for a character profile!
"now your messing with the son of a bitch!"
Your choices show some imagination, and definate potential.

There were some real problems with the editing in the video, I offered ideas to try.
In every Commentary, I try to offer not just my opinion, but ideally ways to improve the video. Hopefully it helps.
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Post by theocide » Wed Apr 07, 2004 8:44 am

Veldrin: I agree. Man this wedding was like having sex with theocide. Fast and makes you cry.

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Post by madbunny » Wed Apr 07, 2004 4:05 pm

Bakadeshi [AuN Studios] wrote: :oops: - Romantic (Spirited Away)
First one is done.
I'll get your others probably today or tonight.
Only three problems that I could really single out in the video here:

1) color wasn't as contrasty is it could have been resulting in a washed out look. This however worked ok given the 'dream' quality that the video was going for.
2) The video content is so powerful that the song just can't hold up to it.
3) it ended.
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Post by madbunny » Wed Apr 07, 2004 4:28 pm

flint_the_dwarf wrote:I liked your other review, so you can review Consequences of War, in my sig. ^_^
OP has been posted.

The battle descriptions near the end were really effective for me.
I didn't like the song much though, seemed like something a hippie in a VW bus with flowers on it would play on the way to a peace rally.

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Post by Flint the Dwarf » Wed Apr 07, 2004 4:36 pm

Ouch. :( And insult to my music is like a spear to my face.
Kusoyaro: We don't need a leader. We need to SHUT UP. Make what you want to make, don't make you what you don't want to make. If neither of those applies to you, then you need to SHUT UP MORE.

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