Here the amv : https://youtu.be/uAQQbCQBbXc
Hi its my first amv (just a beta, its not finish) and i need opignons.If there is anything wrong with this (beta) AMV please tell me, thank you!!
Anime:
Bakemonotagari
Nisemonogatari
Mirai nikki
Deadman worderland
Song: SkisM Experts
Beta AMV, Need Opignon! ExPerTs
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Tigrin
- Joined: Sat Sep 24, 2011 3:36 pm
Re: Beta AMV, Need Opignon! ExPerTs
I actually think this is not bad at all for a beta... I like the color styling and effects... the lip sync and everything is working well. Things seem to cut and hit at the right time.
I don't think the lyrics on screen are needed, it kind of cheapens it... if you're super attached to them, at least use the correct grammar (as I can hear repeatedly in the song), which is "f*** these experts" and not "this". I'm not really sure what the point of the video is (like, why these particular anime for this song) but that doesn't really matter. Anyway, nice job.
I don't think the lyrics on screen are needed, it kind of cheapens it... if you're super attached to them, at least use the correct grammar (as I can hear repeatedly in the song), which is "f*** these experts" and not "this". I'm not really sure what the point of the video is (like, why these particular anime for this song) but that doesn't really matter. Anyway, nice job.
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Mrbastientoon
- Joined: Sat Mar 28, 2015 11:07 am
Re: Beta AMV, Need Opignon! ExPerTs
Than a lot for your opignon!! (For real it "these" not "this" dam my inglish so bad..).
For the lyrics on the screen i'm working on it, i wasn't sure if dat was good or bad ty! I'm trying a lot of different text (Sony vegas is not the best for that).
I use this anime (THESE DAM FU**) for no particular reason, i'm just a fan!
Well ty for your opignons (Sr for my inglish) and if i finish this amv (the last part go pretty fast, i think i'm gona work 1 mouth for make 30 s..), do you whant your name on the generic (end) ??
Well tu very mush (Actually i'm dancing..)
For the lyrics on the screen i'm working on it, i wasn't sure if dat was good or bad ty! I'm trying a lot of different text (Sony vegas is not the best for that).
I use this anime (THESE DAM FU**) for no particular reason, i'm just a fan!
Well ty for your opignons (Sr for my inglish) and if i finish this amv (the last part go pretty fast, i think i'm gona work 1 mouth for make 30 s..), do you whant your name on the generic (end) ??
Well tu very mush (Actually i'm dancing..)
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Tigrin
- Joined: Sat Sep 24, 2011 3:36 pm
Re: Beta AMV, Need Opignon! ExPerTs
No problem, don't worry about adding my name on it, you did all the work, I just got to watch it and give it the thumbs up.Mrbastientoon wrote: Well ty for your opignons (Sr for my inglish) and if i finish this amv (the last part go pretty fast, i think i'm gona work 1 mouth for make 30 s..), do you whant your name on the generic (end) ??
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Mrbastientoon
- Joined: Sat Mar 28, 2015 11:07 am
Re: Beta AMV, Need Opignon! ExPerTs
I do a lot more for meTigrin wrote:I just got to watch it and give it the thumbs up.Mrbastientoon wrote: Well ty for your opignons (Sr for my inglish) and if i finish this amv (the last part go pretty fast, i think i'm gona work 1 mouth for make 30 s..), do you whant your name on the generic (end) ??