Hi hi! So my most recent project is super story driven, but since this my first AMV that focuses on a story I'm pretty anxious about how well I'm conveying it and would really like some feedback.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZL7O9N_WUH8
What I'm mostly worried about is making sure my first source doesn't seem thrown in there and that the transition between it and the second source makes sense. It should be a little bit jarring and sudden but you should be able to figure out what's going on. I'm just mildly worried what's going on so far doesn't make sense. All help and critique however is super appreciated!
In exchange I'll give feedback on other WIP/beta something you're working on, though if it's near or almost final it might take me a bit longer to respond.
Thanks in advance!
[WIP But also 1:1] Wired Extraction 1
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Re: [WIP But also 1:1] Wired Extraction 1
Project is finished so I no longer need feedback on this thank you!