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destroyer437
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Need opion about my latest WIP(work in progress) AMV 1:1

Post by destroyer437 » Wed Aug 17, 2016 1:13 pm

here is what i have done so far with it i hope everyone enjoys it :)



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my second edit
Last edited by destroyer437 on Mon Aug 22, 2016 11:53 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Kanadajinn
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Re: Need opion about my latest WIP(work in progress) AMV 1:1

Post by Kanadajinn » Wed Aug 17, 2016 9:38 pm

I thought you could have synced the music with the action a bit better. It seems a lil random. Maybe try choosing scenes that flow with the music naturally. I'd like to see the finished product, though.

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Re: Need opion about my latest WIP(work in progress) AMV 1:1

Post by destroyer437 » Thu Aug 18, 2016 6:43 am

ty i will keep that in mind ^^

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Prof_Finn
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Re: Need opion about my latest WIP(work in progress) AMV 1:1

Post by Prof_Finn » Tue Sep 06, 2016 9:02 pm

Yeah I'd say just make the cut more on-beat with the music and you'll be good.
Also at about 0:55 there's a fraction of a scene that needs to go, it creates a weird flashing effect like a subliminal message whereas it's probably just something that got left in on accident.

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Re: Need opion about my latest WIP(work in progress) AMV 1:1

Post by bowieee » Wed Sep 07, 2016 6:58 am

Did you update this at any point? Curious to see the current version as you obviously love Shin's work as well. (;

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