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Again Jazz offers Instant trade opinions....

Post by Jazzman » Sat Nov 06, 2004 12:17 am

Yep...if you opinion my vid

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=52119

You will get if not INSTANT or as quick as humanly possible, a quick opinion back....



Simply leave a link to your vid once you opinion my vid

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Post by Wong » Sat Nov 06, 2004 1:25 am

link is in sig, and please read comments before you watch, so you don't look at it like...wtf?
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Post by Wong » Sat Nov 06, 2004 1:27 am

btw...am in process of oping your vid
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Post by Wong » Sat Nov 06, 2004 1:54 am

Your op is up.

I remember trying to DL this vid a couple weeks ago...am glad you got it up and running now
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Post by Jazzman » Sat Nov 06, 2004 11:32 am

You op is in the works....and by the way on your op thanks alot for the comments and Ill improve my vid with them greatly it is after all my second vid....

But on a artistic wavelength......you said the scenes didnt match .....Read the lyrics...no better yet print them out....and watch the video....

For Example the part you said where the old man splits to three and stare out all grimaced match the lyrics.."He’s battled constantly
This fight he cannot win

This fight he cannot win
A tired man they see no longer cares
The old man then prepares
To die regretfully "

Especially since "The old man then..." Is exactly the point we see him preparing to make the final move....ummm what else...

Even the smallest bit, like in the begining seeing him young as hokage...IT literally was the second " Made a vow unto his own" being sworn in.....

I realize now that the cues aren't blatantly obvious...So sue me if people gotta think LOL....and yea your Op is in the works as I speak

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Post by Wong » Sat Nov 06, 2004 6:11 pm

see...no offense to you, but this is similar to what we were disscussin on a thread in General.

You are right...your scenes for the most part did fit, but even though they fit the lyrics...you can't be hopping from setting to setting, and expect people to follow you, because like me...they will either get lost...or be thinking through that whole section.."How the hell did they get here? and how the hell did he hurt his arm? He was kicking their ass on the roof...and now he is all messed up in some trees? wataf?"

This is a point i have made before, simply matching scenes with lyrics does not give your vid more stability. When you lyric sync, it has to not only show the feeling and emotion in that scene, but it can't leave the viewer wondering why you used that scene. Its like telling a story to your friends. All of it might be tied in somehow, but talking about your story, then jumping to what a friend did in the meantime, then back to your story just leaves people bored, and lost.

A lot of what i meant about scenes not matching was mostly your filler. And if it was not filler, then i appologize, but if you were trying to lyric sync the entire song, then i am sure it got lost somewhere in the translation. I enjoy when a vid is lyric synced, and i am sure it takes a lot of time and patience to do when you have to choose clips and thier placement for the overall integrity, but i think it is when someone tried to lyric sync their whole vid with limited footage that i end up felliung like i jsut watched a bunch of random scenes. It is not nessecary to lyric sync every clip, but build up to points, and then come in with a clip that totaly syncs the lyrics, and still somehow shows a steady progression from what just happened moments ago.

I did nto mean to insult your work, because i would not have thought of that idea for a tribute....with that song either, but i think you tried to take your concept to the next step, and it did not come out as well as it could have.

Once again, it was a nice vid, those were just my issues with it.
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Post by Kaiba57 » Sat Nov 06, 2004 8:22 pm

I just finished watching your vid and posted an op.

Could op this vid:

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=52601

thanks in advance :D
My newest vid: [The Legend of Kyoto]

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Post by Jazzman » Sun Nov 07, 2004 12:45 am

Posted and thank ya kindly for your Op ^_^

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