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Post by GaavTheDemonDragonKing » Tue Jun 01, 2004 10:03 pm

If you don't think that was enough well then here is part 2

12 years has passed since the Tradons were put to rest and the Prime General Shiro Tanoki died from an explosion from their new weapon that hadn’t been tested. General Zlex Crono has been discharged of his duties do to the untested weapon the Prime General fired. General Shmite Takaguro has been promoted into the high General’s of the Earth Protection Forces (EPF). Tonn has been watching Earth as it advances but crime on Earth has raised 12% since the Great War. Tonn has also been watching the EPF making sure they don’t find them making them think they left the solar system. The EPF has been in two different solar systems. They have not found any new species yet but has found more Pure Energy on eight different planets. but soon they will meet something they wished never existed!
Yo Reggie how are we supposed to get this huge amount of scrap from the new weapon we tested back to the ship? There is too much to carry. Well we will have to make more than one trip I guess. Besides we can’t let the Tonn find our secret technology General Shmite has built. Yo John I don’t think some of this junk is just ours, it looks like something different. I thought they said they only destroyed a broken scout cruiser scout. Wait everything is going haywire. What the hell is that. Reggie it’s behind you. What the fuck? All units report back to the ship we have reported heavy activity out their. Let’s get out of here. John it’s firing! Dodge it and escape. I can’t its every....... aaghhhhhhh. No Reggie you guys killed him, you will not get away with that! Take this. Hahahaha. Ship number 0328 get back to the ship we will destroy it. No I will destroy it hahahaa. number 0328 don’t go mad now get back to the ship. You will die scum hahahaha... what aaaaaaggggghhhhhhh! Ok it’s clear. Fire all Giga Cannons now. What? it had no effect. Fire the heavy chain gun cannons and all missiles. Yes we get it. Captain there is a much larger ship approaching should we attack or retreat? Attack it there not that tuff. Fire all missile torpedoes and double barrel laser cannons. Sir it’s doing little damage. Fire the Mega Giga Laser’s and mini nuke missiles. Sir their shield blocked the missiles and the laser’s had no effect. Captain their are opening up something. Fire everything at that point! We can’t the system is crashing we are losing control of the ship. Oh shit, captain there preparing to fire. No what is going on here. The enemy ship was about to fire but then one of Tonn’s ship got in the way and fired a missile and destroyed the enemy ship. Captain it appears that a Tonn ship has destroyed that enemy ship. Get a hold of General Shmite and tell him what has happened here.
General Shmite we have news that one of Tonn’s ship has saved one of our retrieving ships from our test area. What was the enemy Admiral Blake? It appears to look similar to Tonn’s ship but much different in technology and the weapons look more superior than Tonn’s ship to. Well what ever this new enemy is they have tasted one of our lowest class ship in combat. It appears that our weapons are slightly more powerful than theirs as long as that was at least a middle class ship. What if it isn’t? Than we might be in some serious trouble. Now than I wished to be alone now Admiral. Yes sir. When will this nightmare ever end. It seems no matter how hard I try to eliminate a problem it just keeps on getting worse. Receiving Transmission! General Shmite the EDF has made a decision about your rank. Well what am I know? They have decided that you are now the Supreme General which means you are in control of all actions of the EPF! Congratulation General. End of Transmission!
Planet: Pluto
Area: 26 degrees north of Kelh base
Time: 22:00
Well Marshal Luther what are you going to say to commanding officer about the new Land Master that you ruined in 2 days! Will tell him it was an accident. What you don’t care what happens to us! You know you shouldn’t always yell like that. What do you mean every time you get into trouble we both have to suffer the consequences. Ya I still remember the time I was your commanding officer. You got that job by accident remember! Oh ya my bad, but you always shouldn’t worry. I go by one thing. And what's that. What ever happens, happens. Oh I can see you like that a lot. That might be the reason were here on Pluto freezing our butt’s off while the rest of our fleet are in the base all warm and cozy. You know I like to stop and chatter but I’m picking up readings of something heading 19 degrees south and heading this way. Is it any of our guys? No. then what are...... wait I hope your not thinking of what I think your going to do. Wake up the cyborgs and let’s investigate. Oh God you were. I am not going with you this time and this might be the last time I ever see you again. It’s your loss then captain Black.
Marshall Luther took a gatling cruiser with 12 cyborgs and 18 sweepers and left to find the unknown man or creature.
Luther I am not talking to you to stop I’m just telling you that the EPF has been attacked by an unknown force and to tell you that it was heading this way. They have decided to send out most of their forces here to eliminate them before they do anymore damage to us. It looks like you are the closest and you won’t get any backup till 12 minuets after you intervene with them. They are also setting up a heavy blockade from reaching Gamicore. Gamicore?, but that’s only the 3rd strongest base here. I know that but it seems the scientists there had created something that this unknown enemy has been searching for. How do you know all this? I hacked into there files. I knew you had the spirit of breaking the law. I didn’t know it was in me till everything felt out of place. There is also one more thing. What’s that? I put some mini nuke rockets in the rocket cartridge in the gatling cruiser. I knew you would do something like that, and that’s why I like you being my partner. Over and out! Computer get me a visual uplink to sector 42. Let’s see what we got here. What the fuck is that? Computer release all available attacking units. Code is 54039. All units released. What Luther saw was unbearable. They looked liked demons from hell. Not only that they were wearing very strong armor with weapons that are very powerful. I just hope these things aren't strong as they seem. All right all units attack! As they attacked the enemy Luther knew that he was in major trouble if backup does not come within 3 minuets. What my squad isn’t even making a scratch on the enemy. Computer switch the weapons on the droids to lasers. and change the weapons on the sweepers to mini rockets. If bullets don’t effect them maybe that stuff will. Yes it’s working. It looks like the enemy is about to attack now. Computer switch the mode of the units to defensive. What no? It just destroyed all of my units in one shot. Marshal Luther the enemy is heading this way. Alright computer launch the nuke rockets now. Nuke rockets will launch in 3 2 1 fire. 13 seconds till impact. Computer switch the mode to defend against a small nuke blast. Now let’s see if this is effective. Prepare for impact in 6 5 4 3 2 1. Visual contact in 12 seconds. Ok now let’s see if destroyed it. No! It’s still coming. Fuck I’m out of energy cells and nothing I got can defend me. Oh well what ever happens, happens. Marshal I am picking up 3 unknown units heading this way. I will patch transmission now. Back away from the Urathadon and will destroy it. I Alright computer put on thruster mode and head backwards. I don’t know how far this will get me away from that thing. All right units 04 and 09 fire the Tonn cannon’s and aim for it’s legs. I launch the Tonn Bomb and destroy it. All right captain it’s clear to fire. I am the Marshal of this area I would like to know what is going on, who are you guy’s. Unit 09 look out behind you. There are two Flame Winged Imp on your tail. Unit 04 take care of it while I finish off the big guy. This is the last time or I will fire upon you. Who are you guy’s. We are Tonn. And can’t you help us a bit here. We just saved your lives. I’m sorry but I have no ammo. Marshal we have one weapon left that is online. Why didn’t you tell me that before? You never asked. Oh well what is it. A hyper cannon. That would work great marshal. Fire it at the flying demons. You got it. Firing in 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 firing now. Good a direct hit. What it’s putting itself back together. Marshal now it is vulnerable to bullets fire your chain guns before it regenerates. Alright I’ll give it all I got. Take this! Ya I did it. To get to cocky Marshal! What? it’s destroyed but whats that?. Alright unit 09 go and retrieve it. Hey what are you guys doing? Alright this area is secured let’s get out of here. Hey wait. What was that all about. Oh well, I should get back to the base.
Marshal Luther by disobeying a direct order you are here by down graded back to a drill sergeant until you can prove yourself worthy to me. Is there anything you would like to say. Yes in matter of fact there is. I don’t care what you do to me or anything else. One thing you should know is that there will come a day were everyone here will be destroyed by a much higher then us. Even higher than Tonn. And then what are you guys going to do about it. Nothing that’s what you would do. What you guys need is more people like me. Because I get the picture more than anybody here. That is Enough! You are now dismissed! No you know what I quit! Guards after... Wait commander let him go. How far do you think he is going to make it out there. He couldn’t withstand that kind of coldness and there is no place for him to go. You know your right, guards let him go. Mr. Luther you are granted that request but you know we are low on supplies and you probably won’t make it out there, so we are letting you go with a few more things than what you got on. Commander! Commander! Gamicore is completely destroyed! The enemy launched a surprise attack on it. Tonn launched about 20 ships and 2 Warships but they failed, but they lasted long enough to get half the force at Gamicore out of there. there’s only 4 large transports, but only 12 fighters protecting it. They will be heading towards Echalo Base. The General of that base is requesting all bases to send reinforcements. Then the General said if we lose the main transport with the Mecha Droids then this war is lost. What is this Mecha Droids private. These things are highly classified to anyone, but now it’s under attack and we can now know about it. It is a secret weapon that was aborted 29 years ago. These things couldn’t be built right, but now one of the scientist did it and now they started it up again. These Mecha Droids are so powerful it will be the new strongest weapons we have. 2 days ago they were shipping energy straight from the pure energy to the Mecha Droids, but was under attack by an unknown force. Now they have to bring the Mecha Droids to the energy. Alright then Send 30 Fighters and 6 Warships and 10 Shield Protectors. And private get my ship ready I’m going out. You see Commander I told you something like this would happen. I thought you were dismissed. Ya I’m going.
Luther I heard what happened to you. What are you doing here Jack-Hammer. I quitted. What? Why did you do that. You gave a good speech back there. Oh that, I was just talking from what ever I thought of. Ya but it was so good 17 other troops quit because of you. They knew that you were right. Now do you see what I’ve done. Me it was you that never knew what you were doing. Besides we are all waiting on you orders General Luther. What? We decided to team up with you and begin our own army. I managed to smuggle out some equipment. Besides I know of an abandoned base from the Trakeins 49 miles from here. It might be out of date in their technology but they have lot’s of weapons their. Not to mention they have airships and heavily armed vehicles their. Plus I have found out they were hiding a secret weapon their since the Great War. That should boost up our army. Their still might be some Pure Energy’s their. That’s great in all but what about our troops. We only have 19 troops in this army. Not a problem We know many people that want some action more than us. On Mercury their are many assassins and gangs their. They are just waiting for someone to kill. I can manage to get a transport down their and get at least 750 people. And if that’s not enough the Trakeins had land transports that can carrier 150 Androids in them. Their are about 27 of them all loaded with them. Well I got to say I’m very impressed. So what are your orders General? Let’s held out to base.
Blue 09 take my left wing, Blue 04 take my right wing. Switch your modes to scanner and find out how far away the Transports are. Yes sir. It is about 4 and a half miles sir. Alright switch to defense mode cause we wont be attacking for a while. Sir I’m picking up ground activity. It looks like our guys are in trouble. Get contact with them. Alright bringing it up now. Sir we are under heavy attack by the enemy. The Transport need more fuel and they need to land here, but were ever we go they follow us. They now what were doing and we need to put an end to them here. Alright send 6 bombers from the warships to bomb them in groups. Send out the 3 shield protectors to defend the base. Land 4 Warships and unload ammo to troops. 15 fighters come with me. Everything else stay back and protect the base.
High Admiral Blake it has come to my attention that one of our newest and most effective secret weapon is under attack. It has been 2 and a half hours since Gamicore was completely destroyed. 4 large transports made it out of there with all the Mecha Droids. It appears that the transports are nearly out of fuel. What I need you to do is take a large defense force to Pluto and guard the Mecha Droids from this new enemy. Over and out.
Alright I can see the Transports now. Blue 09 take 6 fighters and cover the left side. Blue 04 take 6 fighters and cover the right side. the other 3 follow me. Finally reinforcements has arrived! You guys has been the first since we left! What? Were is everyone else? They were attacked. Oh God. Could there be that many of them? Commander of this fleet the enemy has been following us, but hasn’t been attacking lately. That seems very strange. What if they are leading us straight into an ambush. That's what they may be doing, but we have to take that chance we don’t have any more time left. I know what to do. You 3 fighters follow me. Where are we going commander? To scan a 5 mile radius of the area till we get to the fueling area. I see what were doing now. Amm sir it seems a large strike force is heading this way! I can detect 3 very big ships way bigger than the warships. Also about 20 warship sized and hundreds of attackers. It looks like the Tonn sir! This might be good do to the fact they helped us at Gamicore. Sir I just got a transmission that the fuel base was just destroyed. But that can’t be Tonn is heading from that direction. Wait sir it looks like they are attacking themselves. What have they gone mad? Sir I’m getting a message from one of their ships. Listen the enemy has taken over nearly half my fleet by mind control. We can’t help you guys right now so get the hell out of here now. What should we do captain? Fall back to the transports. We will have to find a new plan. Sir one of Tonn’s ship is heading this way. You and your fleet in a matter of minutes we will lose the fight. I’m going to open a portal to our main base here on Pluto. You guys will have to go through to live. Alright we will have it your way. All ships fall back and head to the portal!
General Shmite I located the transports, all of the sudden they disappeared from scanners. So they were destroyed? No if it was then it would show it as red when all the systems are down or has been destroyed. Do you think it could have been captured? No they would have self destruct if that happened. Then there is only one thing. Whats that? The Tonn has sent it to an area with there new device that can make portals. I new they would do something like that. They have been sneaking around our bases then just disappearing. Their is another problem General. What’s that? There has been a handful of troops that has quit our forces and has started to mix old technology with new technology making it nearly as powerful as the stuff we have. We can’t send any of our troops to investigate do to our own problems with the missing transports and this new enemy. We will have to wait until things have calm down here. Yes General.
General Luther, the base has been up and running at 200% sir. Good, what about the weapons and armor. We have upgraded all the stuff making it 30% stronger than the old stuff. Good. What about the new troops? We have sent 2 Hi-Speed transport to pick them up. They should be here by tomorrow morning. Very good. Yo Jack Hammer how is the Mega Destroyer coming? Damn it! We are going to have to replace everything. I just can’t build this thing right! What can I do to help you? Get me a few beers and these things on this list. Ok. Yo Charley come here. Yes General. Try to find these parts. Yes sir! (General Luther walks over to the Fridge and grabs a six pack.) Here you go Jack. Thanks. After this thing is finished I’m going to pilot this thing. Are you for real. Ya I figured this is an ultimate weapon and it’s going to need an outstanding pilot for it. You are right about that. But just this won’t do. I’m going to need you to make 3 more of these things but I want them to have a mind of it’s own. Are you joking! Do you know these things can disobey us if they want. Not what I have planed. Whats that? They will be the guardians of this powerful machine. One will be a defense Guardian. Which means it will have very strong armor and have a very powerful shield but the weapons wont be strong. Another one will be an attacker Guardian. Which will have strong armor and have a light shield and the weapons will be very strong. The last one will be a combat Guardian. Everything will be equal. Whoa! This is some very serious stuff. If you can get me 6 good mechanics I can teach them everything thing I know and they can help me. Alright you got it.
Is everyone ok? Blue 09 here I’m good. Blue 04 here me too. It seems everyone else made it here safely. There's Tonn’s base should we land? We have no choice were in their territory now. Incoming confederates forces we are not here to fight. We are making a temporally alliance. You got my word Tonn soldier. Wow captain look at it. It is so big. I don’t think any of our weapons could last against that. I just hope they don’t attack us. Yea I here you. Confederates forces you are requested to land at entrance 2. We will give you all the supplies you need to make it back safely and repair your ships. Thank you soldier. You should be ready to leave in 45 minuets. Make yourselves at home.
General Shmite we have set up headquarters at Mount Kill. We have set up over 200 supreme tanks with plasma cannons attached to them. Why have you done that. It seems that this enemy has a leader. Their is a huge ship that from what we know is controlling all of their troops. If we can destroy that then all communications and their scanners will be lost. How do you know all of this. We have captured one of the little devils wondering around in the snow storm. From our technology we have found out that they are machines but something else I can‘t describe, They are already dead. Why wasn’t I informed of this! They sense what we think so they can find out much about us. Only very few people know about this. Where is it now. We had to kill it. Why? It controlled one of our trooper and turned him against us. If these things live then we will die. Now do you get it? Yes. Anyway we set it up 8 miles away from our main headquarters just as a precaution. You don’t think it will work? We are not 100% sure but we have to try. What if we can use Giga Cannons and the Mega Beams then we can destroy it. Sir we cant do that. Why not? It will take at least 3 days to get it ready and they'll be attacking by tomorrow. Then get it done before they get here. I’ll try.
High Master Raid it seems that the EPF forces are falling to project X. I knew that this new High General couldn’t cut it, even if we are testing our new weapon on them. Send out my Elite forces to watch over them and make sure everything falls into place. This will give Mr. Shmite a bad reputation and will be forced off his rank which will make me leaders of both Forces. But Master what if they succeed before our forces get their. Then I’ll have to find a new way to bring him down. That will be all.
General Luther we have done it. The ultimate weapons are finished. All the troops are here also. Very good. We have 1,253 troops. We have 6,000 cyborgs and androids. We have 40 fighters, 36 tanks, and 6 carriers, and 24 transports. and 8 huge transports. You have done an outstanding job. Since you got me these mechanics I can get everything done 5 times faster. Are you going to stop here or try to make many more powerful weapons? Well their has been one more thing I have been working on. I have been studying this new enemy and I have found out a few things. First these things are not even alive. We are fighting dead creatures. They have powers to take control of just about everything. But once it has taken allot of damage it will have to regenerate it’s lost energy. I have come up with 2 things. We use this new high shield to keep it away from the base, or we destroy it’s energy source. Ok where is it’s energy source coming from. I have classified them in two groups Seekers and Sumner. We destroy the Sumner then we destroy the Seekers. But there is one more group. The High Sumner. They revive the Sumner's. Then their is someone controlling their movements. There is only one of them. That is the Overlord. Ok then I think we will attack them using your method but just in case can you make that shield?
All troops report to battle stations repeat, All troops report to battle stations. What’s going on Tonn? It appears our base has been found. Get your men and get out there. Only God knows what will happen if this base falls. Yes Tonn. Get in your ships guys. Why what’s going on? We are under attack and they need everyone they can get. Alright sergeant how many are there. 100,000 little fuckers on foot 10,000 flying mother fuckers and 1 huge mother fucker. How far is there distance. 3 mile radius. There coming from all sides. Launch all the bombs and missiles from the base and fire 10 hell missiles. I want the Flame Tanks and Fire droids on the first line then the siege cannons and drone shooters. Then on the third line marines and plasma gunners and all ground vehicles. All air troops attack in one direction clearing a path for the transports to escape. The jet fighters and FX-2 bombers protect everything else.
Alright listen up my name is High Admiral Blake because I served Earth for a very long time. And that is what you are going to do as long as I’m here. No one will back down or quit. We will fight till death. Now we have just got a radar scan that their is a major battle going on. It seems like the Tonn is attacking the enemies base or the enemy is attacking their base. We have to help the Tonn do to the fact they have captured the Transports. After we help them win they will have to give him back. If they don’t we will have to attack and destroy them. We will honor our commrads who has fought for not only Supreme General Shmite but for the sake of humanity. Now everyone move out.
Marshall Luther it seems that the battle for Tonn’s survival has appeared and the confederate forces are helping the Tonn. Should we join in the battle? Hell ya we have no choice but to do it. Let’s get these Golems up and running. I want 20% of everything out to the battlefield. Yo Luther we have found an old bomb shelter beneath this base. In it we found heavy armed snow speeders and next to them was a ST-00 the strongest tank vehicle they had. Good we can use them too. Everyone let’s go and kick some ass!
Tonn they are 1.5 miles from base and it looks like we took out 60% of ground units and 30% of air units. We might not be able to hold them off. Fire the beam lasers from this base to take out most of the air units. Launch 3 Mecha Airships and get them prepared to launch all of there mini nuke missiles. Tonn there are 500 of them on each ship! I know. The impact will destroy this hole base! That’s why were going to have them blow up behind the enemy. I get it now. I will take out the Armored Lancer and destroy as many as I can. Tonn are you sure you want to use that thing again. Yes I am sure. No I won’t let you. Yes you will. Last time you used it, it went out of control and killed 60 of our best men. Then it killed 800 innocent people and wrecked their city and our base. Major we have no choice but to use it. If it gets to deice shoot it down. Tonn I encourage you to reconsider. I can’t my mind is made up. General Alexander do something about this. I can’t. He has chosen his own path. It would be best if we can help him out as much as we can. But that is all I can do about it. Tonn went down to docking bay and got into the Armored Lancer. General Alexander there are many confederate forces heading this way. Great just what we need more people to fight.
This is High Admiral Blake. We are here to help you but we expect are transports back. If you don’t we will crumble the rest of your forces that are left. Now fire all long range weapons at the enemy. We fight from back here. Admiral something isn’t working. What do you mean captain? Nothing is responding. We have no control over anything. Damn! it’s that thing it’s doing it. Good thing I was preparing something to do in this situation. Shut down all major systems down and put up the flame wall. After that is done switch to all backup generators and then launch all of the weapons. Yes sir.
Alright now let’s see what this thing can do. Armored Lancer turn to combat mode! Let’s cut these guys down to size. Slashing Blade Attack! (The machine went at incredible speed and destroyed at least 200 of them in one strike!) Whoa this is even powerful than the last time I used it. (Over and over again it attacked repeatedly) Whoa ok than I think I have done enough damage for once.
Major get over here! What is that thing. It looks like one of Tonn’s weapon ultimate weapon. This thing could destroy all of our forces in a few minutes. Should we destroy it? Yes! Fire all powerful weapons at it. Yes sir. Launching all weapons now.
What the. Who’s doing that? Tonn consider us as your enemy's now. We can’t let you have that much of strength. All units attack the Tonn base! Sir only the hi-beam weapons are working. We are just wasting everything else. Ok then only fire all hi-beams and anything stronger. Sir that machine is protecting the Tonn base. Its blocking all the attacks. Send out close combat units then to destroy it. Their interception will take place in 2 min. Until then protect the units from those creatures. I want air support and hi-speed ground units to protect them. Use the guided cannon raid to take out enemies ahead and have the air units to bomb the enemies as well.
Marshall Luther over that next ridge is the battlefield. Ok then switch all units to attack mode. Get me patched through to the Tonn base. This is General Luther of the Black Reapers. We are here to support you in anyway we can. Who the hell are you? Are you with the Confederacy? No we are against them for they are our enemy’s as well. We have discovered more than what meets the eye. They were using us as their pawns. They were trying to mutate us into strong creatures but they died during the process and this happened. We did everything as we could not to give away what we knew. As by General Alexander this day we are now allies! Now listen up the enemy is trying to free their leader we caught earlier today. They were taking over the Confederacy to destroy us as they were programmed to do. Their is a huge building in the center of our base. That is where it’s being held. We need you to keep’em from getting their. Over and out. You heard the man. set up all long range weapons here and set up a small base camp around them. The Golems are coming with me. All air units help the Tonn. All ground units protect this base. Send 3 transports of 75 cyborgs to the second line and have them progress to the front line. I am going to take out that huge flying mother fucker.
Shit I can’t take more damage! Tonn we are doing the best we can. It’s just the confederacy is firing their weapons everywhere. Oh no it’s happening again. The armored lancer is running wild! Everyone get out of the way. General Luther Tonn’s powerful machine is going haywire, you must get it under control. How do I do that? There is a cell pack in the back. Just take it out and it will shut down. you got it. Tonn do the best you can from getting that thing under control so it wont attack me so I can help you. Who the Hell are you! I am here to help you. That is all you need to know right now. Whatever it is do it fast. I can’t get through. The armored lancer is using it’s powerful blade keeps on slashing trying to destroy the Golem’s. Now I got it. Take this! General Luther has destroyed its cell pack. Alright, now that’s all left to do is to take out that summoner. Defensive Golem give me a boost. The defensive Golem launched the Mega Destroyer into the air. With this blade of mine you shall fall into eternal destruction! Kronnan Strike!!! Mega Golem landed and the Summoner spit in two and fell to the ground.
General Tonn the creatures are crazed and confused. Now is our chance to take out the confederate forces. Launch the Dark Destruction weapon now! The ground started to shake then the ground opened up and a huge cannon raised up. Preparing to fire in 15 seconds......10 seconds.......5..4..3..2..1..Fireing now. Six huge bolts of lighting came from the cannon and shot up into the sky and a ring of fire appeared. The sky started to darken and the fighting stopped. Everyone was looking around. Then it started to rain huge meteors and large lightning bolts of fire came crashing down into the heart of Admiral Blake’s forces.
All units retreat back to HQ!!! I repeat fall back to HQ!!! Admiral we have lost 80% of our forces. We have to withdraw back to our main base in space. Damn!!! We were so close to. Well than I guess we are going to need permission from General Shmite and authorize a nuke blast from our new secret weapon.
General Tonn it seems they are retreating. What about the other confederate forces we rescued earlier? We will let them go. What do we do about General Luther and the Black Reapers? I will need to talk with General Luther due to the fact he helped us and I amazed of that weapon he has that finally took down the Armored Lancer. Get a hold of him and tell him I want to talk to him. Then there is one more thing. What is that. The transports that was here had top secret weapons aboard that they wanted. Well whatever it was we can still destroy it but not now.. Now since their Summoner is destroyed and their isn’t any energy flowing through those creatures, retreat all units to base and send out the Blade Runners. Receiving Transmission Tonn the Super Predator has escaped and we can’t track it. All we know is that it is somewhere in the eastern bridge between sectors 11-23. I want all personal to block all exit’s in those areas and to scout the outside perimeter. When I get their I aspect 3 teams of 8 on sector 11 and sector 23 preparing to advance when I get their. By the way shut down all power in those areas. It has a cloaking ability and can sneak up on us. Yes sir over and out. Well this might be the most fun I might have all day.
Alright now leaders of these teams I want every inch of this placed searched. We are dealing with a high class A fighter. General Tonn, General Luther wants to talk to you, do you want me to patch it through? Yes. I need you to make it quick General Luther. Ok we have found out a way to make the Pure Energy stronger than it already is. What do you mean? Well for one thing we have been using it only one way and that is absorb. We have found out it can fuse with items itself! We have found no way to destroy the Pure Energy with any weapon and you say somehow you can use it as armor! Well than I guess their is more to this than meets the eye. General Luther I will get contact with you later. I have something more important to deal with right now. So you can stay here until I am done, Over and out. Now here is the plan Teams A-2 through Team C-2 will start at the other end and Teams A-1 through C-1 will start at this end with me. We will all meat up at sector 17 which is half way. If any of the teams come in contact with it contact all teams. Now then all teams advance. They began to search for the super predator unaware of it’s mysterious powers it has.
Alright I guess this is where we split up. Team A-1 take the left. Team B-1 take the left. Team C-1 follow me. As Tonn took Team C-1 through the sector he noticed something different about the sector. It seemed out of place even though he design and built all of the bases and been through them many times. It looks like we made it at the end of this sector and nothing. Incoming message from B-2 We have found it running through sector 21!! Incoming message from A-1 I found it in sector 14!! Incoming message from C-2 It’s here in sector 19!! What is this? how is it possible? Tonn this is General Alexander. I’ve just noticed that Team A-2 has diapered on scanner. Last seen in sector 20. What is going on here. Incoming message from B-2 It’s taken out my Team. Theirs many of them but only 1 is real. It has mutated! It is stronger and faster! I can’t hold out here much longer. General Alexander what sector was he last seen in? sector 18. All Teams go to sector 18. Ignore all other creatures. If confronted with a fake, kill it and move on. They walked on until they came to the end. All that stand in their way was a door until Tonn has reached the sector of the Team B-2 was last seen in.
Alright now arm your weapons I’m going to open the door. Receiving Transmission General Tonn, General Luther of the Black Reapers is heading towards your section. I will patch you through to him. General Luther what are you doing? I am here to help you. I think you should check out my new armor and weapon in battle. Listen this is a serious problem. I have no time for games. What? I think you will need my help. Besides I’m right behind you. End of Transmission. How did you get past our defense? Well first of all this new armor is the most powerful stealth suit ever and second you shut down all power in this area. Anyway shouldn’t we move on. He blew off the key code panel and the door opened. What the hell? The creature grabbed General Luther and intoxicated him with it’s venom and throw him against the wall. Fire!!! Give it all you got!!! Without hesitation it jumped up through the base and took flight in the air. Tell all air attacking units to shoot it down. Well I guess we did all we could do here. Now we have a much greater threat we have to deal with. Call down the medic to this sector and get ready for a badly injured person supposedly poisoned. Yes sir. They ran him down to the emergency room and quickly got him into an operating room. Well how is he doing? He has suffered from savior blood loss, broken left arm, bruised legs and a mild concussion on his head. He is unconscious and will probably wake up in 4 hours. Is there any kind of poison in him? No. When he was attacked the creature picked him up and this black substance went down from his hand into Luther's wound. I can run more tests on him then but I’m telling you there is no sign of any trace of this substance you speak of near or away from his wounds. Just run some more tests and get me as soon as possible if something comes up. Receiving Transmission. General Tonn me and my squadron has completely destroyed the creature. After it took off from the base it landed 12 miles and we fired the Tonn Proton Bombs and blew the holy fuck out of it sky high. Ok don’t get to excited there. Over and out.
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Post by DalerMehndi » Tue Jun 01, 2004 10:06 pm

i didnt bother reading anything but theres one thing it MUSThave...


PRON, HENTAI, NEKKIDNESS, SECHS, ETC...

whatever you wanna call it, its always a good thing to have :roll:
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Post by EvaXephon » Tue Jun 01, 2004 10:09 pm

First thing I'd like to say:
Heero_Yuy84 wrote:The Moonlight Butterfly from Turn A Gundam?
Yes, I think that's it, because although I didn't see the movie, I remember that the name of the attack had 'Buttefly' in it.

Second thing I'd like to say:

I was going to say EXACTLY what DalerMehndi just said, but he beat me to it :evil: This is the second time today that's happened to me! Gotta get faster!
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Post by DalerMehndi » Tue Jun 01, 2004 10:16 pm

EvaXephon wrote:First thing I'd like to say:
Heero_Yuy84 wrote:The Moonlight Butterfly from Turn A Gundam?
Yes, I think that's it, because although I didn't see the movie, I remember that the name of the attack had 'Buttefly' in it.

Second thing I'd like to say:

I was going to say EXACTLY what DalerMehndi just said, but he beat me to it :evil: This is the second time today that's happened to me! Gotta get faster!

lol, sorry :twisted:
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Post by EvaXephon » Tue Jun 01, 2004 11:20 pm

...Um...Gaav...What was up with the stuff you posted? I didn't read it all, but I read some. What I did read, well, for lack of a better term, "sounded too American" to be anime. The way the characters acted...that just didn't seem like anything that'd be in anime. Or, at least, it didn't seem like anything I'd seen in anime before. I agree with El Banana that "The next thing we really need is a funny drama/action mindf*ck anime with a fluffy mascot, guns, swords, knives, lasers, on giant robots that aren't really robots set in the past but really in the future." but, Gaav, what you posted was such a far cry from anime, it didn't seem to belong. I'm not trying to be mean or anything...

...Also...who made that? Did you write that? What is it supposed to be? There are no quotation marks or proper grammer or anything. Did someone go in and remove them all? Why would someone do that? I'm sorry for not knowing these things, but I wish you'd explained the post before or after you posted it...

I think that more people would read it if it didn't hurt my eyes to look at it @_@; A giant block of text. Blargh!
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Post by Kalium » Tue Jun 01, 2004 11:22 pm

It's a famous list that's been circulating the 'net for years. I suspect it originated somwhere in the tangled morass of Usenet.

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Post by El Diablo Rojo » Tue Jun 01, 2004 11:23 pm

Man I lost that Gaav guy at "It is the year 2074". Why would anybody read that. I think the thread was asking for ideas, not for your life story and then some and then again. Man, and I thought I was pathetic.

However, since we are giving plot ideas, here's one thats going to blow you out of the water. Its a story about a guy, right, and he's got this gun, right......thats it.

Now if you don't like that, then try this. There's this girl, right, and she's got this gun..... You've got the chills, don't you. Me too.

Now, add some PRON(and I do me PRON) and Hentai or something to that and you've got yourself a number one seller. I don't think it needs the provocative material, but thats just my opinion. I think its good enough without it. I'm so lonely.
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Post by Aussie_angel5 » Wed Jun 02, 2004 1:47 am

I didn't read it all either (waaaay too long), but I'd have to agree with other reply's that you need to do something about the punctuation... No offence or anything...

You know, the world doesn't revolve around hentai. There's more to anime than that... You sick minded people!

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Post by Merm » Wed Jun 02, 2004 11:52 am

DalerMehndi wrote:i didnt bother reading anything but theres one thing it MUSThave...


PRON, HENTAI, NEKKIDNESS, SECHS, ETC...

whatever you wanna call it, its always a good thing to have :roll:
No it doesn't. It can be a perfectly good anime without any. . . um. . .fan service. . . :evil:
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Post by Merm » Wed Jun 02, 2004 12:05 pm

For the main characters, you might need a party because it can give you more flexibility. Personally, I think you might be trying to bite off more than you can chew by not even assigning a genre. You can't really have an "ultimate plot ever" because people have different tastes. Possibly having completely different episode types every time might help, kind of like Abenobashi or Excel. :(
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