...GaavTheDemonDragonKing wrote:oh ya you shlould also have Vegeta in their cause he is the Strongest Sayin out there. He can single handedly take on EVERY SAYIN IN THE UNIVERSE!!
You'll need a complex villain.
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If you want a villain that's sure to win make sure he follows the rules on http://www.eviloverlord.com/lists/overlord.html
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Examining existing animes to figure out what ingredients would make a good anime is a reasonable idea, but weapons, powers, spells, and abilities are the most useless things you could look at. Why don't you try character archetypes, character dynamics, and plot patterns?
Take a look at this thread:
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/phpBB/v ... e&start=30
Take a look at this thread:
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/phpBB/v ... e&start=30
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Chloe_666
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When you have a hero and an evil one they should be related somehow like they are brothers ore old friend ore something like that. I realy like it when fights becoe personal.
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(Just want to say my two vids are online
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=39955
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please give opinions because they are my first two online)
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Good point. :Thumbs up:sunandshadow wrote:Examining existing animes to figure out what ingredients would make a good anime is a reasonable idea, but weapons, powers, spells, and abilities are the most useless things you could look at. Why don't you try character archetypes, character dynamics, and plot patterns?
Take a look at this thread:
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/phpBB/v ... e&start=30
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I don't know if it's what he means, but it's not what I want. Once characters get too powerful, the anime tends to get boring. They try to solve this problem by introducing stronger opponents, which results in shows like DBZ which become formulaic and predictable (and thusly remain boring).EvaXephon wrote:I remember some sort of attack in a Gundam movie that could defeat anything mechanical, because it was a trillion nanomachines, or something like that.
...Is that the sort of thing you want?
...some shows deserve to be cut off sooner (one-two seasons seems about ideal)
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Well I have read this whole thing and near the end 9 things were repeated. it only added about 20 more lines. anyway I found no flaws in anything he had read. This guy is crazy
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If I don't miss my guess:EvaXephon wrote:I remember some sort of attack in a Gundam movie that could defeat anything mechanical, because it was a trillion nanomachines, or something like that.
...Is that the sort of thing you want?
The Moonlight Butterfly from Turn A Gundam?
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Hmm, I tend to start stories with the villain in mind:
First, s/he must always wear black or sometimes gray. It's just a given. Villains only wear other colours to trick the hero. Maybe a little yellow "have a nice day" button to add some character.
Now, do we want a villain with magic powers or insane weaponry or a combination of the two?
First, s/he must always wear black or sometimes gray. It's just a given. Villains only wear other colours to trick the hero. Maybe a little yellow "have a nice day" button to add some character.
Now, do we want a villain with magic powers or insane weaponry or a combination of the two?
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Alright then. The Collection I got a perfect plot for you than. Here it is!!
The year is 2074, it has been 26 years since man has been going to planet to planet searching for resources and other life forms. Earth has been running out of natural resources for quite awhile. 35 years ago is when they desperately needed it. Then sometime around that year, scientists found a substance that drifted from space and crash landed on Earth. This changed mankind forever!
After two years they been studying it they found out it destroys garbage and creates a fuel that could last a car for 500 million miles! Not just that but also it cleaned the atmosphere, and the oceans. The world was overwhelmed by it. All what it looked like was a dark blue crystal. It was about 32 inches tall and 16 inches wide. Later on they found a substance that was growing from the bottom of the crystal and found out it was a substance from Saturn. This crystal would lead to the end of mankind.
This crystal had power beyond anything you could think of. They called this crystal “Pure Energy”. But this Pure Energy absorbed too much that it gave back what it took. It blew up do to the idiotic of mankind. Great power comes with great destruction. The crystal blew up and took 23% of the Earth with it. Many species became extinct, the atmosphere was ruined. The world had 50% of water, 20% of land, and 30% of wasteland.
Do to this mankind had to find new resources and fast or our earth would be doomed. During the time that the Pure Energy was still their they were working on a project known as “Space Travel”. Scientists from around the world all came together to make a spaceship 1/10 of the size of the moon suitable for 80 people to travel in for 25 years. Two days after the explosion of the Pure Energy, without hesitate they launched the spacecraft which was named “Hyper Cruiser I”. The mission was to go to Saturn and to collect 200 Pure Energy and bring them back. But they knew that they couldn’t use too much, because when they did it turned darker blue and more darker then stated flashing.
After they collected the Pure Energy they went back and restored Earth and even made it 200% better than the old Earth. But they did not abuse this power and kept everything clean without using the Pure Energy. But this again led to more destruction. But did not come from the Pure Energy but from man himself. The greed of Pure Energy led to destruction itself. Many people would try to steal them of any means necessary.
People who stole the Pure Energy would start clans, and other major organizations to fight to make the future theirs. These people would even destroy their very own trust worthy friends just for power of Pure Energy. They used the Pure Energy to construct unbelievable machines that were easy to make but very powerful. In doing so they destroyed military units and civilians just for power.
The world wide government did not allow this to go on much longer. They made machines of their own to stop them from stealing any more. But this did not stop them from trying to get their hands on them. Many people would join the government so called Confederate Forces due to money to help their families, but was a very hard job when nearly every day their would be a break-in of clans would try to steal them. It was very dangerous when both of their weapons and technology was equal. But this was not the end, when the clans were running out of Pure Energy they started building space vehicles to gather Pure Energy’s on Saturn. Due to this the Confederacy made blockades but wasn’t enough. This went on for a long time until they started constructing outposts in space then from that to buildings. Around this time the Confederacy was to strong for the clans. So the clans all joined in one and was known as the Trakeins! The civilians couldn’t stand it no more. Many people died in the battle against the Confederacy and the Trakeins and so they fought back. 24% of the civilians came together and made a clan known as Tonn.
The object of Tonn was to protect the civilians from the battles of the Confederacy and the Trakeins. The Confederacy laughed at the Tonn. They thought it was a joke so they sent in a small force to shut it down but was overwhelmed that their technology was more advanced when they were just new at it. When they figured out that their force fell they knew that the Tonn could easily destroy them. They tried to start an alliance but it backfired. After that they tried to stop the Tonn in their growing stages and lost 36% of their forces. When this happened the Trakeins took it as an opportunity to end the Confederacy but Tonn stood in their way and destroyed 34% of their forces. After that the Tonn was never heard from again.
The year is 2053 still nothing from Tonn but the battle between the Confederacy and the Trakeins is still going on. Both organization has many space barracks around in the solar system. The Confederacy has three leaders. Alexander Mectis, Shmite Takaguro, and Zlex Crono. Also they have a prime leader Shiro Tanoki. On the Trakeins side they have but two and only two leaders. Kay and Key. They both control different kinds of forces, which are Megaton Force (Kay’s) and Zeroton Force (Key’s). Do to the time that has passed by, the technology is way more advance than anything you can dream of. Now the 2 different Forces have built androids and robots to do their fighting for them, but still are easy to make. The biggest and important battle that is going on is the battle for Saturn. For 6 years they have been fighting for Saturn but a few weeks ago they found out more was on Jupiter but buried in caves. Over 600 million androids and robots for the Confederacy has been destroyed, and 20 thousand troopers were killed on or in space on Saturn. For the Trakeins they lost over 700 million robots and androids and 10 thousand troopers were killed on Saturn. The Trakeins lost the battle but the war was not over. They accidentally dug to far in Jupiter's surface when they were trying to build outposts their, and found a mine of Pure Energy. Their scientist has reason to believe that the Pure Energy first came from Jupiter and when Saturn crashed into Jupiter some of it fell into Saturn and the rest was buried on Jupiter. During the battle for Saturn the Trakeins purposely lost to press their luck and research on Jupiter. That was not the only thing they found.
Four days later after they started mining Pure Energy they found creatures the size of a bear standing up. It had spikes coming out of its body and its arms were just claws. They could withstand heavy fire. It took 16 bullets to take this thing out. Their was no meaning of what this thing was but it had one thing on its mind...Destroy! Later they found out their where more of them so the Megaton Force was to defend the minors and the Zeroton was to attack the Confederacy. They knew they couldn’t fight 2 different kinds of enemy at once. So then it was decided. They had to press everything they had to destroy this new race to secure the Pure Energy. As they went deeper they found out their were different kind of these creatures. Their were 6 different known species and named all 6 of them.
1 Defenders- 7 ft, 225 lb, huge claws, brown, hard-like shell.
2 Attackers- 9 ft 350 lb, huge spikes forming from the back, 3 spiked claws, red
3 Seekers- 5 ft, 175 lb, horns growing from the head, long claws, very fast, green
4 Destroyers- 10 ft, 500 lb, huge horns growing from the head, spikes growing on chest and arms, with mouths on the end that spit of fire, black
5 Acid demons- 6 ft, 200 lb, winged flying creature, spits out acid, blue
6 Assassin- 15 ft, 750 lb, huge creature with a hard shell, huge hand with huge spikes with poison on them, gray.
THE YEAR IS 2074! THE TIME IS NOW!
“So general Alexander Mectis when do you want the next shipment of the Pure Energy in” said the captain of the bridge. “General” said the captain. “Quiet” said the general. “Capitan what do you think of the view of Saturn” said the general. “What I think really matters to you” said the captain? Of curse, we are on the same team here so everyone is equal. Anyone that deserves this should be equal. Deserves what general. Being here on a desert rocky plant! I’m sorry sir. Don’t be everyone is equal as I said. We are so far away from home. Since we successfully rid Earth of the so called Trakeins we should be enjoying ourselves, but we can’t. Why is that sir? Cause were at war and it’s not over till the enemy is destroyed. I see. Besides the Trakeins might not be a threat. Why is that sir? Their has been another race attacking the Trakeins. I see? But we could lose the war as well. How sir? Some time ago their was another major clan. Their was? You wouldn’t know but I still remember it. What sir? When we were attacking the Trakeins on Earth many civilians died, more then our men and the Trakeins men. So they took action. Around 20% of civilians joined up and made a clan known as Tonn. We thought it was a joke, but we chose a wrong clan to mess with. What happened sir? They destroyed many of our forces and the Trakeins. Then they left and never heard from them again. But I still remember the leader of the clan. Who was it sir? It was a guy named Tonn. Hahahah what kind of a man would name a clan after himself. You fool this clan could of destroyed us but didn’t! Tonn, that man he spared my life. I remember it like it was a dream always haunting me. I knew why he let me live. Why sir? He knew I was defeated, he knew he destroyed me in another way. But I know one day I will verse him again and I will win. Receiving Transmition! Captain there has been an explosion at 4 of the main mine fields. There is no Transmition coming from the 4 areas. The Prime General wants your fleet and troops to send in 20% of your guys to search all areas. End of Transmition! Captain you heard it. Send in the troops and prepare for battle! All right all you scum I am your sergeant on this mission. We have reasons to believe that 4 of our mining bases has been attacked. Our mission will be to secure base Sarhara. This base is located 8 miles from one of our head courtiers. Is their any questions. Good then we move out.
All right move out and secure this sector. Sergeant we have a problem. What’s the problem trooper. It seems everyone is gone, its like no one was ever here. That’s impossible there was 90 people here they couldn’t just vanish. (machine guns start to fire.) Sergeant there everywhere. Where! There all around us! Where! There invisible use the heat sensors! Oh my God. Everyone fall back there are too many of them. Trooper get contact to base. Mayday, Mayday we are under heavy attack! requesting air support and lots of reinforcements. Receiving Transmition The reinforcements are denied but we can send in air support. Ok just give us everything you can give us. Will do, your ETA will arrive in 1 minute End of Transmition. All right troops defend the base till air support arrive. (Machine guns and rocket launchers are firing.) Give them everything you got. What the hell is that! New plan everyone abandon base! Fall Back Now! Sergeant to late air support has arrived. Launching T- 3’s. (Explosion all around the base destroys everything.) (Air support lands.) Is there anyone alive. I said is anyone alive. Shit what the fuck was that John. Hell I never seen anything like that before. Lets get the Hell out of here. Wait, come back. Look someone's alive. What happened here Sergeant. They where everywhere. What where. It was creatures but wasn’t creatures. What? Tell General Zlex Crono. Tell him what? Machines but creatures. (The sergeant died.)
General Zlex Crono you have got a message from one of General Alexander Mectis units. Good bring him in. (Solutes and says.) Sir one of your sergeants gave me a message to tell you. What’s the news Commander? The sergeant’s name was Tony Kris, he died trying to secure one of the mining base that was attacked yesterday. What, he can’t be dead, not now he wasn’t supposed to die. Did you know him sir. Yes he helped me get this far by finding some strange item, but he took the blame by telling he disobeyed the Prime General’s order and I got this job. I see. What did you want to tell me. He told me to tell you that the things that attacked him was creatures but not creatures. Then he said that they were machines and creatures at the same time. So that what it was. What sir. The item we found was a part to a powerful weapon but it was a living creature, but a machine. So that what it was. What was trooper. We saw a huge creature pop out of the ground and was about to fire in space. They said it was aiming at the Prime Generals space station and would of destroyed it. Hmm. What General? These creatures could be the same thing that has been on Jupiter. Receiving Transmition to All Confederate Forces. Know this we are the Tradons, but in your language means Bloody Death! We are here to take resources and destroy anything that stands in the way of our mission. Everything and one will Die! nothing will survive except for us! End of Transmition. I guess we now know our new enemies. Receiving Transmition. General, The Prime General has ordered a meeting at his space station tomorrow at 1400 hours. End of Transmition. Now then you are dismissed commander, but first what is your name. John Sumit. Ok then your now dismissed.
The next Day
So Prime General Shiro Tanoki what do we do about this new race Tradons. I was just getting to that General Shmite Takaguro. It looks like everyone of you will be apart of this crises. This race has unbelievable strength. We have heard of something like this from the Trakeins. They are having the same problems where having. It seems to me that there are many of these things. During the attack 2 days ago, in the areas the Tradons where attacking there was up to 1,500 of these things. These things are very powerful to. This might have a huge affect on this war. You have something to say General Zlex Crono. Yes I do Shiro Tanoki. I have seen these things before. Yes I know that. Then you know what were dealing with. No. So we have one of their technology and we don't know what it is. Yes. So pretty much we are blind to these creatures. Not entirely. The Tradons have a cloak ability so we can’t see them. Also they have metal within them. So this makes them strong, but also can use elements around them. For example fire, water, and very strong winds, and lightning. So we might have to start an temporary alliance with the Trakeins. What! Shiro you can’t be serious! Yes I am. The Trakeins and us are having major problems with the Tradons, and they could destroy both of us if we don't do something about this. Receiving Transmition! Prime General it seems that a huge force is heading our way, but doesn’t look like it’s going to attack. Is it the Trakeins. No Prime General. Then is it the Tradons. No. Then who it. Hold on there sending a Transmition, should I put it through. Yes. Ok then.......Done. Prime General Shiro Tanoki this is Tonn! We have reasons to believe that an alien race is in the solar system and you guys are in the middle of it. Tonn you.....you.. No you will not interfere with this you just stay out of this! What you have no idea what your dealing with, and you don't want our help? You... will not interfere just go back were you came from. We are. 32 years ago we attacked both forces do to the craziness of the war, but we had found a evil transmission from somewhere far away from the galaxy, so we tried to stop it from coming here. We found out it was an alien race known as Tradons. These things could of already destroy all of us, but we held them at bay. We tried to hard. While we were trying to save humanity, you guys were fighting each other. One day they attacked us when our defense was down and they barley escaped from us. Traveling over 500 million light years to get here. We destroyed there home planet, so they were going to destroy ours. We had killed over 1,000 billion of these things but 250,000 thousand escaped and headed here. If you don’t want our help then we will destroy them and you both. The Trakeins already joined up with us and we have more than enough to destroy the Tradons, but what would the people think on Earth that their protection is not protecting them. So do we got a deal? Alright then Tonn we will do as you say but this is only temporary, then after this race is destroyed we will then destroy anyone that stands against us. What ever you say Shiro. The Trakeins will attack the Tradons on Jupiter with 5,000 of my troops and technology. And you guys will get 10,000 troops and technology against the attack on Saturn. The rest of my troops will attack their main headquarters on Mercury. Now I'm going to tell you what I have told the Trakeins. If you guys decide to turn against us then my troops will destroy you and everything you got within hours. Is that clear Prime General. Yes. Ok then let’s get started then. End of Transmition. Prime General I don’t think this is wise. Don’t be stupid Shmite Takaguro Tonn can already destroy us. We need to play along with this game until project Elimination is complete, then we can finally destroy Tonn who has humiliated us for too long. This is insane. Do you have something to say Alexander. Yes, I have met Tonn before. He spared me in the battle over 20 years ago. What you are trying to say is that you were in that battle long ago. Yes. Then you should lead this strike. What? I can’t do this. He has defeated you. Why do you think he spared your life. He wants you to get stronger so he can have a decent match. You need to awake from this nightmare that has been chasing you long ago. You need to realize that you have gain more power than he has. You need to use the rage that has been inside of you a long time ago. You need to take that and use it as a weapon to destroy Tonn. Then and only then you will realize what it means to be free. Is that clear. Yes. Good, I will send all the information about this war later so then your all dismissed. (The 3 Generals leave the spaceport and go back to their own bases.)
The next Day
General Zlex wait up. We have just received news about our positions. We will be going 70 miles northwest of the 12th base into the dunes of Shakuris. The Tonn has reasons to believe that the Tradons main base on this planet is there. Ok when do we leave. First general Alexander’s troops will secure 20 miles around the perimeter of the dunes of Shakuris. Then general Shmite’s troops will follow general Alexander’s troops to the ridge of the dunes of Shakuris. Then we will enter the enemy’s base and destroy it. Ok, but what time do we strike. At 2100 hundred hours. Ok, your dismissed commander.
The first Strike
All right troopers our equipment from Tonn is here and we will be moving out in 10 minutes. We will meet Tonn’s Troops at the midpoint. We have confirmed that there will be over 50,000 Tradons. when we get their the Tonn will launch a nuke cannon blast that will destroy their main defense. At that point we will wipe out their air-attacking structures so we can send in an air raid that will destroy many more of them. After that General Shmite's troops will go in first, then we will follow. We will go until we get to the doors of their main base. Then General Zlex troops will go in. Then we will follow their troops behind. Then we will have victory. Any questions. Ok then move out!
General Alexander’s troops moved out and met up with Tonn’s troops.
What is this, is this some kind of a joke? No it isn’t. It will only be me and two of my best men. How the hell are we supposed to kill 50,000 thousand Tradons with only you 3 and 750 of us? Easy, I will create an energy blast that will destroy their defenses. I don’t believe this, we are supposed to attack very strong nasty creatures with just this. Yes just watch. Tonn had two machines on both his hands. He held them up and a ball of energy appeared. He then launched it at the Tradons first defense but blew up more then that.
What the hell was that? That my friend was my Tonn nuke cannon. How can you create something that powerful. I didn’t. Then how did you do that with those two machines on your hands? It wasn’t that. It is just armor with my blades in it. See. How can you fire that with only your hands. It is a gift from the heavens. See I have died once before. Now are we just going to sit here or are we going to attack. Ok bravo and alpha squads come with me. The rest of you set up perimeters and protect this area we might need to fall back and you guys will cover us. I don’t think that is necessary captain. Why Because the Tradons here are all dead. What? Just look. When you were giving orders my two best men went in and destroyed them. Holy shit! Get hold of the prime general and tell them we have a problem.
The next day
Prime General Shiro Tanoki we have a serious problem. We have found out that Tonn is stronger than we could ever believe. First he can use unbelievable power that comes from him not any weapon or anything. He destroyed all of the Tradons defense then they lost control. After that two men that were with him had heavy armor and long bladed energy swords just went in at incurable speed and destroyed everything that was left. If they could do this then why do they need our help and the Trakeins help? Calm down commander I have figured this out a while ago. Tonn just wanted to show how strong they were so if we wanted to betray them they would destroy all of us in an instant. Ok well that explains that but why do we still have an alliance with Tonn. General we have an important message coming from master sergeant Lucos Duran. Prime General we have some bad news. The Trakeins have turned on Tonn but they lost and now they are gathering up all of their last forces and left heading towards us. Should we fire or stand down and let them through. Sergeant get me a hold of the Trakeins that are heading our way. Prime General we are defeated by the Tonn. Kay has died when he led the force to attack and I was backup. But we have stolen a major strange device. If you let us in I will give it to you. But you will have to help me avenge my brother’s death. Now the Trakeins are coming running to us for help how strange. Will you shut the fuck up and listen. This device has classified information about Tonn now I know you have seen a few of Tonn’s troops in action and if I know you very well I would say you would want to destroy them too. Do we got a deal?...... Yes. Let them in Sergeant and we will discuss this later commander.
Ok so what have you got to show us Key. Well we have manage to find out many dark secrets about Tonn. First he lied when he said he left to go to another galaxy to protect the Earth. Well they left to build secret and more advance technology. Another thing about them is their technology. They found a peaceful alien planet with far more advance technology so they shared each others technology. They built ultimate armor with incredible speed. Tonn created a laser sword and put it on this thing and it is unstoppable. One day when Tonn created the Tradons it was accidentally. When they mixed our atmosphere with theirs the alien species mutated into what we now call Tradons. They did this because their was just a slight difference in the atmosphere than with Earth. Tonn researched it and said nothing would happen to them but did. It was undetectable by any of their technology. This caused mutation, loss of memory, and pain. Now all they want to do is destroy. The last word that ever came out of this alien race that was mutated was from the leader of them. He said he didn’t want anyone one of them with minds to kill anything. He said if that ever occurs wipe out our specie. He didn’t want any of them living a destructive life. Tonn disobeyed that order and tried to find a cure but nothing worked. Not long after that they started to kill the Tonn. They had no choice. He made a decision that he didn’t want to make. So they started to kill the Tradons. some that were left came here to destroy Earth because that what started the mutation. This is everything what happened Prime General. Ok now that we know a little more about this maybe their is some way we can get the Tradons on our side.
Now that the Confederacy knows what Tonn has done past the years they are going to try an alliance with the Tradons. Meanwhile in Tonn’s space ship.
So Commander Mitoss how is the shields power defense from the attack on the Trakeins. Well the power has decreased 42% but in 17 hours it will be back to full power. Good. I want to see all the activity that is going on the Prime Leaders space station. Also I would like you to launch two power blast to Mercury so we can keep the Tradons at bay until our power is full then we will launce many small Tonn cannon blast and send in 25 Hi-speeders loaded with Tonn bombs to destroy their heavy artilleries that the beam swords cant handle. If they run into any assassin phantoms tell them to contact air support and get the hell out of that area. We don’t want that to happen again. What will happen again Tonn. That’s right you just got this rank and you never ran into one before. The Assassin Phantoms are flying creatures that are impossible to kill. It is like trying to kill a rhino with a stick. We haven’t found any thing that could kill them except for a Tonn neutron bomb. But those bombs take 6 pure energy’s to make. Tonn can you tell me how pure energy won’t explode any more when it first exploded on Earth. When the first pure energy exploded scientists needed to find out how to make it not explode. They planted a device in it so it won’t explode but just get used up. Oh ok then. Is their anything else Tonn. Ya, tell the 25 troops that are going down to bring the Tonn cyber laser with them. But sir you know what happened last time they used that. It is a risk we have to take. The Tradons are getting stronger by the day passes. If we don’t do something soon they will be imposable to kill. Now do I make myself clear. Yes Tonn. Ok then your dismissed.
The next day.
Tonn we are ready to fire the cannons and launch the drop ships. You give the word and we will fire. Ok then FIRE! ok and done know were launching the drop ships. Drop ships launched. Their ETA is in two and a half minutes. So Tonn are you going to go down your self? No I’m going to go to my shrine and have the spirits of the old Tradons to guide Tonn into the last battle. Until I get back your in charge. Yes sir Tonn. Receiving Transmission. Commander Mitoss this is the ground units. The Tradons whole base is surrounded by Assassin Phantoms. We need major air support know. The quadrants are 0734 through 0782. We need at least 3 Tonn laser tanks in case we need to fall back. Also we will need an extended units. Ok what kind of units. 5 Tonn laser gunners and 10 Tonn chain gun men. Ok. Your ETA with all the equipment will be in 6 minutes and the air support in 2 minutes. Ok we should be all right until then over and out.
Meanwhile at the shrine. Samu Uma Sul Ga. Uhse Ma Ka Du Na. Mai Ai Sa Naka. Have you called for me Tonn. Yes SulGar. I need guidance I don’t know if we can win anymore. I think we are going to fail you. That is nonsense you know you can win. The day you were attacked and you died I brought you back. I used everything I had left to bring you back. I knew you were powerful in mind and spirit. You had something I never seen before. I gave what was left of me for you to lived. That caused me to lose control of my body so I killed my self for you. I believe in you that you have something far greater than anything your species can ever do. When I brought you back you learned something. Something that our specie never seen before. You learned how to control elements around you. Know here this you will lead your troops into battle and you will win and may the spirits of the Tradons that haven’t lost their minds to guide you to victory. We will be watching you. Tonn left the shrine and decided to take 100 more of them to the battle field and win. Mean while on Mercury Tonn’s troops are losing the battle.
This is ridicules! The Tradons have learned new skill and now they can multiply in an instant. There are to many Assassin Phantoms its like they keep coming no matter what we do. If we don’t get some reinforcements we will lose. Alright when are the Tonn laser tanks ready to fire. In 23 seconds commander. Alright I want 3 troops to fall back to the Tonn laser tanks. 8 Hi-speeders attack the Assassins that are coming from the rear. Now sergeant fire the Tonn laser tanks in 3 2 1 Fire! A huge blast destroys the main Assassin Phantoms. Look commander reinforcements has arrived. It looks like Tonn is here. Alright commander I will be taking control. I want all forces up to the Tradons base. You herd him get up their and attack. What are you doing Tonn. I'm getting ready to use the last of the powers of the free Tradons to destroy their evil side. Tonn raises his hands up once again and energy spirits flow into a circle above Tonn’s hands. Tonn then is glowing blue and then he lets it all out. A huge beam cuts and makes a clear path towards the Tradons main core destroying everything in it’s path. Then a huge explosion destroys their main core. Tonn you have done it. It is finally over. Tonn I’m picking up some major activity. Its the Confederacy ! A transmission is coming through. Tonn this is General Alexander Mectis. I am very sorry what I’m about to do but I have no choice. Something takes a part in me that wants to destroy you and so does the Confederacy. But something is telling me I’m making a bad decision. Listen Alexander what ever your about to do don’t do it. The reason I let you go a long time ago was that you. I'm what someone you chose who lives and who dies. You are not God so stop playing God. No the reason I let you live is that. Oh was it piety, or was it to leave me here with my honor destroyed. No. Than what is it. You are my brother. What? You were in the Military when I was born, before we found the Pure Energy. Then after the Explosion you joined the Confederacy. Mom didn’t want you to go and you had an argument. You didn’t want to talk to her. Father worked hard raising us and you didn’t come back. One day their was a battle in the area we moved to. An explosion killed our parents. So I started a clan to protect anyone else from dying. What is holding you back is in your blood. A knew who you were but didn’t want to tell you. You are my brother you must have been 20 years younger than me and you beat me. I was 15 when I defeated you. Everyone said I was a geniuses. Receiving Transmission. So Alexander you betrayed us. You are with him now. I see how it goes. I will destroy you both then. End of transmission. Tonn listen up they have completed project Elimination. That new weapon they built can destroy a whole planet. They got one shot until 3 hours till it recharges to fire again. The first time they won’t miss. We should evacuate this planet immediatley. Commander John Sumit get a hold of many of my troops that are willing to turn against the Confederacy and help the true protectors of civilians. Yes General. Alright Tonn we all ready to go. Hell Ya! Then get us off this planet and lets head to our new secret base on Mars. Damn our own men are turning against us. General Zlex fire the Elimination. They fired their new weapon but Tonn and General Alexander got away long before the blast destroyed the planet. Prime General their is a malfunction on the weapon. Activate cooling systems. I can’t it’s jammed. What thats impossiable! Wait we are getting a transmition. Ha so you thought it was completed, but it was I who planted that secret virus in your mainframe so it wouldn’t actavate the coolers and it would also disengage the locks on the weapon so basicly firering that weapon killed you all. What? Who told you thihs Tonn? It was none other than SulGar! What who is he? It doesn’t matter anyway, your already dead. Have a nice life. Fuck! Get the coolers down their and cool of the weapon. It’s to late Shiro. Fuck! The weapon exploded killing the Prime General, and The Trakeins. there were 52% troops was left of the Confederacy. General Zlex the Prime General’s space station just blow up. What should we do? I know this sounds crazy but what we need to do is move Mercury so it crashes into Tonn’s Space Base ship. That would be insane. It is Tonn who killed the Prime General by coming back. If Tonn hadn’t come back none of this would of happened. We need to fire up to 30,000 thousand G’s of sound waves to make it crash into it. I on it right now. It will fire in 2 minutes and 36 seconds. Good. Right now aim it 32 degrees north east and 12 degrees south west. What about General Shmite. His troops fell back to their headquarters. I guess he is planning something of his own. And General Alexander is now the enemy. He joined up with Tonn. Sir it is ready to fire. You give the word. ok Fir......... wait what is that. Sir their are firing at our ship but no damage is being made. Wait all of the systems are shutting down. Nothing is working. They are escaping sir. Is their any weapons on line. Yes but only mega and regular chain guns. Any missiles? No sir. Fine do what ever we can to stop them. Ok. All troops fire everything we got at the Tonn until everything is back on line. Get out in space with your grappler GW3’s. and hook on as many as you can. They will not escape. Sir wait their turning around. Receiving Transmission. You guys actually think you can take us out? Stand down or you will leave us no choice but to return heavy fire. Well? All troops stand down. We will get you later and we will hunt you down and destroy you! You just try Zlex.
Dawn of the next day
General Shmite Takaguro all of the troops are here. We have 126,000 troops and 80,000 androids and cyborgs. We have 19 bases on Saturn but 32% of the Pure Energy is left their so what should we do. Admiral Blake we need to contact Earth and contact the Earth Defense Forces (EDF). We need to tell them what happened here. What about Tonn. They are gone again. Who knows when they will be back. We have no one else to fight. Their is peace in the galaxy once again. What are we going to tell the EDF about blowing up Mercury and it crashing it into Venus destroying two planets. We have to tell the truth I guess. The Prime General went to far to destroy Tonn and lead to his destruction. We should get out of blame by then. And also I we had nothing to do about project Elimination. It was classified to us. They treated us as the lowest ranking force. So now we just go back to Earth and explain what has happened.
Mean while on Mars.
So Tonn what are we going to do now. I have contacted SulGar and he is pleased that everyone of them are good and peaceful once again. He also said that their spirits will be protecting us when another specie try’s to destroy Earth. It’s like they will be watching us while were watching Earth. Than I guess our work is done. No there is still one more thing we have to do. What’s that? Contact the EFD and tell them we will stop attacking them until they change their mind and attack us. They have destroyed half of their own forces accidentally and I guess they won’t be attacking us for a while.
Tonn and General Alexander made plans for further development and decided to confront the EDF about their plans for what they are going to do and they excepted it and I am going to say it again Great Power comes with Great Destruction.
The End
The year is 2074, it has been 26 years since man has been going to planet to planet searching for resources and other life forms. Earth has been running out of natural resources for quite awhile. 35 years ago is when they desperately needed it. Then sometime around that year, scientists found a substance that drifted from space and crash landed on Earth. This changed mankind forever!
After two years they been studying it they found out it destroys garbage and creates a fuel that could last a car for 500 million miles! Not just that but also it cleaned the atmosphere, and the oceans. The world was overwhelmed by it. All what it looked like was a dark blue crystal. It was about 32 inches tall and 16 inches wide. Later on they found a substance that was growing from the bottom of the crystal and found out it was a substance from Saturn. This crystal would lead to the end of mankind.
This crystal had power beyond anything you could think of. They called this crystal “Pure Energy”. But this Pure Energy absorbed too much that it gave back what it took. It blew up do to the idiotic of mankind. Great power comes with great destruction. The crystal blew up and took 23% of the Earth with it. Many species became extinct, the atmosphere was ruined. The world had 50% of water, 20% of land, and 30% of wasteland.
Do to this mankind had to find new resources and fast or our earth would be doomed. During the time that the Pure Energy was still their they were working on a project known as “Space Travel”. Scientists from around the world all came together to make a spaceship 1/10 of the size of the moon suitable for 80 people to travel in for 25 years. Two days after the explosion of the Pure Energy, without hesitate they launched the spacecraft which was named “Hyper Cruiser I”. The mission was to go to Saturn and to collect 200 Pure Energy and bring them back. But they knew that they couldn’t use too much, because when they did it turned darker blue and more darker then stated flashing.
After they collected the Pure Energy they went back and restored Earth and even made it 200% better than the old Earth. But they did not abuse this power and kept everything clean without using the Pure Energy. But this again led to more destruction. But did not come from the Pure Energy but from man himself. The greed of Pure Energy led to destruction itself. Many people would try to steal them of any means necessary.
People who stole the Pure Energy would start clans, and other major organizations to fight to make the future theirs. These people would even destroy their very own trust worthy friends just for power of Pure Energy. They used the Pure Energy to construct unbelievable machines that were easy to make but very powerful. In doing so they destroyed military units and civilians just for power.
The world wide government did not allow this to go on much longer. They made machines of their own to stop them from stealing any more. But this did not stop them from trying to get their hands on them. Many people would join the government so called Confederate Forces due to money to help their families, but was a very hard job when nearly every day their would be a break-in of clans would try to steal them. It was very dangerous when both of their weapons and technology was equal. But this was not the end, when the clans were running out of Pure Energy they started building space vehicles to gather Pure Energy’s on Saturn. Due to this the Confederacy made blockades but wasn’t enough. This went on for a long time until they started constructing outposts in space then from that to buildings. Around this time the Confederacy was to strong for the clans. So the clans all joined in one and was known as the Trakeins! The civilians couldn’t stand it no more. Many people died in the battle against the Confederacy and the Trakeins and so they fought back. 24% of the civilians came together and made a clan known as Tonn.
The object of Tonn was to protect the civilians from the battles of the Confederacy and the Trakeins. The Confederacy laughed at the Tonn. They thought it was a joke so they sent in a small force to shut it down but was overwhelmed that their technology was more advanced when they were just new at it. When they figured out that their force fell they knew that the Tonn could easily destroy them. They tried to start an alliance but it backfired. After that they tried to stop the Tonn in their growing stages and lost 36% of their forces. When this happened the Trakeins took it as an opportunity to end the Confederacy but Tonn stood in their way and destroyed 34% of their forces. After that the Tonn was never heard from again.
The year is 2053 still nothing from Tonn but the battle between the Confederacy and the Trakeins is still going on. Both organization has many space barracks around in the solar system. The Confederacy has three leaders. Alexander Mectis, Shmite Takaguro, and Zlex Crono. Also they have a prime leader Shiro Tanoki. On the Trakeins side they have but two and only two leaders. Kay and Key. They both control different kinds of forces, which are Megaton Force (Kay’s) and Zeroton Force (Key’s). Do to the time that has passed by, the technology is way more advance than anything you can dream of. Now the 2 different Forces have built androids and robots to do their fighting for them, but still are easy to make. The biggest and important battle that is going on is the battle for Saturn. For 6 years they have been fighting for Saturn but a few weeks ago they found out more was on Jupiter but buried in caves. Over 600 million androids and robots for the Confederacy has been destroyed, and 20 thousand troopers were killed on or in space on Saturn. For the Trakeins they lost over 700 million robots and androids and 10 thousand troopers were killed on Saturn. The Trakeins lost the battle but the war was not over. They accidentally dug to far in Jupiter's surface when they were trying to build outposts their, and found a mine of Pure Energy. Their scientist has reason to believe that the Pure Energy first came from Jupiter and when Saturn crashed into Jupiter some of it fell into Saturn and the rest was buried on Jupiter. During the battle for Saturn the Trakeins purposely lost to press their luck and research on Jupiter. That was not the only thing they found.
Four days later after they started mining Pure Energy they found creatures the size of a bear standing up. It had spikes coming out of its body and its arms were just claws. They could withstand heavy fire. It took 16 bullets to take this thing out. Their was no meaning of what this thing was but it had one thing on its mind...Destroy! Later they found out their where more of them so the Megaton Force was to defend the minors and the Zeroton was to attack the Confederacy. They knew they couldn’t fight 2 different kinds of enemy at once. So then it was decided. They had to press everything they had to destroy this new race to secure the Pure Energy. As they went deeper they found out their were different kind of these creatures. Their were 6 different known species and named all 6 of them.
1 Defenders- 7 ft, 225 lb, huge claws, brown, hard-like shell.
2 Attackers- 9 ft 350 lb, huge spikes forming from the back, 3 spiked claws, red
3 Seekers- 5 ft, 175 lb, horns growing from the head, long claws, very fast, green
4 Destroyers- 10 ft, 500 lb, huge horns growing from the head, spikes growing on chest and arms, with mouths on the end that spit of fire, black
5 Acid demons- 6 ft, 200 lb, winged flying creature, spits out acid, blue
6 Assassin- 15 ft, 750 lb, huge creature with a hard shell, huge hand with huge spikes with poison on them, gray.
THE YEAR IS 2074! THE TIME IS NOW!
“So general Alexander Mectis when do you want the next shipment of the Pure Energy in” said the captain of the bridge. “General” said the captain. “Quiet” said the general. “Capitan what do you think of the view of Saturn” said the general. “What I think really matters to you” said the captain? Of curse, we are on the same team here so everyone is equal. Anyone that deserves this should be equal. Deserves what general. Being here on a desert rocky plant! I’m sorry sir. Don’t be everyone is equal as I said. We are so far away from home. Since we successfully rid Earth of the so called Trakeins we should be enjoying ourselves, but we can’t. Why is that sir? Cause were at war and it’s not over till the enemy is destroyed. I see. Besides the Trakeins might not be a threat. Why is that sir? Their has been another race attacking the Trakeins. I see? But we could lose the war as well. How sir? Some time ago their was another major clan. Their was? You wouldn’t know but I still remember it. What sir? When we were attacking the Trakeins on Earth many civilians died, more then our men and the Trakeins men. So they took action. Around 20% of civilians joined up and made a clan known as Tonn. We thought it was a joke, but we chose a wrong clan to mess with. What happened sir? They destroyed many of our forces and the Trakeins. Then they left and never heard from them again. But I still remember the leader of the clan. Who was it sir? It was a guy named Tonn. Hahahah what kind of a man would name a clan after himself. You fool this clan could of destroyed us but didn’t! Tonn, that man he spared my life. I remember it like it was a dream always haunting me. I knew why he let me live. Why sir? He knew I was defeated, he knew he destroyed me in another way. But I know one day I will verse him again and I will win. Receiving Transmition! Captain there has been an explosion at 4 of the main mine fields. There is no Transmition coming from the 4 areas. The Prime General wants your fleet and troops to send in 20% of your guys to search all areas. End of Transmition! Captain you heard it. Send in the troops and prepare for battle! All right all you scum I am your sergeant on this mission. We have reasons to believe that 4 of our mining bases has been attacked. Our mission will be to secure base Sarhara. This base is located 8 miles from one of our head courtiers. Is their any questions. Good then we move out.
All right move out and secure this sector. Sergeant we have a problem. What’s the problem trooper. It seems everyone is gone, its like no one was ever here. That’s impossible there was 90 people here they couldn’t just vanish. (machine guns start to fire.) Sergeant there everywhere. Where! There all around us! Where! There invisible use the heat sensors! Oh my God. Everyone fall back there are too many of them. Trooper get contact to base. Mayday, Mayday we are under heavy attack! requesting air support and lots of reinforcements. Receiving Transmition The reinforcements are denied but we can send in air support. Ok just give us everything you can give us. Will do, your ETA will arrive in 1 minute End of Transmition. All right troops defend the base till air support arrive. (Machine guns and rocket launchers are firing.) Give them everything you got. What the hell is that! New plan everyone abandon base! Fall Back Now! Sergeant to late air support has arrived. Launching T- 3’s. (Explosion all around the base destroys everything.) (Air support lands.) Is there anyone alive. I said is anyone alive. Shit what the fuck was that John. Hell I never seen anything like that before. Lets get the Hell out of here. Wait, come back. Look someone's alive. What happened here Sergeant. They where everywhere. What where. It was creatures but wasn’t creatures. What? Tell General Zlex Crono. Tell him what? Machines but creatures. (The sergeant died.)
General Zlex Crono you have got a message from one of General Alexander Mectis units. Good bring him in. (Solutes and says.) Sir one of your sergeants gave me a message to tell you. What’s the news Commander? The sergeant’s name was Tony Kris, he died trying to secure one of the mining base that was attacked yesterday. What, he can’t be dead, not now he wasn’t supposed to die. Did you know him sir. Yes he helped me get this far by finding some strange item, but he took the blame by telling he disobeyed the Prime General’s order and I got this job. I see. What did you want to tell me. He told me to tell you that the things that attacked him was creatures but not creatures. Then he said that they were machines and creatures at the same time. So that what it was. What sir. The item we found was a part to a powerful weapon but it was a living creature, but a machine. So that what it was. What was trooper. We saw a huge creature pop out of the ground and was about to fire in space. They said it was aiming at the Prime Generals space station and would of destroyed it. Hmm. What General? These creatures could be the same thing that has been on Jupiter. Receiving Transmition to All Confederate Forces. Know this we are the Tradons, but in your language means Bloody Death! We are here to take resources and destroy anything that stands in the way of our mission. Everything and one will Die! nothing will survive except for us! End of Transmition. I guess we now know our new enemies. Receiving Transmition. General, The Prime General has ordered a meeting at his space station tomorrow at 1400 hours. End of Transmition. Now then you are dismissed commander, but first what is your name. John Sumit. Ok then your now dismissed.
The next Day
So Prime General Shiro Tanoki what do we do about this new race Tradons. I was just getting to that General Shmite Takaguro. It looks like everyone of you will be apart of this crises. This race has unbelievable strength. We have heard of something like this from the Trakeins. They are having the same problems where having. It seems to me that there are many of these things. During the attack 2 days ago, in the areas the Tradons where attacking there was up to 1,500 of these things. These things are very powerful to. This might have a huge affect on this war. You have something to say General Zlex Crono. Yes I do Shiro Tanoki. I have seen these things before. Yes I know that. Then you know what were dealing with. No. So we have one of their technology and we don't know what it is. Yes. So pretty much we are blind to these creatures. Not entirely. The Tradons have a cloak ability so we can’t see them. Also they have metal within them. So this makes them strong, but also can use elements around them. For example fire, water, and very strong winds, and lightning. So we might have to start an temporary alliance with the Trakeins. What! Shiro you can’t be serious! Yes I am. The Trakeins and us are having major problems with the Tradons, and they could destroy both of us if we don't do something about this. Receiving Transmition! Prime General it seems that a huge force is heading our way, but doesn’t look like it’s going to attack. Is it the Trakeins. No Prime General. Then is it the Tradons. No. Then who it. Hold on there sending a Transmition, should I put it through. Yes. Ok then.......Done. Prime General Shiro Tanoki this is Tonn! We have reasons to believe that an alien race is in the solar system and you guys are in the middle of it. Tonn you.....you.. No you will not interfere with this you just stay out of this! What you have no idea what your dealing with, and you don't want our help? You... will not interfere just go back were you came from. We are. 32 years ago we attacked both forces do to the craziness of the war, but we had found a evil transmission from somewhere far away from the galaxy, so we tried to stop it from coming here. We found out it was an alien race known as Tradons. These things could of already destroy all of us, but we held them at bay. We tried to hard. While we were trying to save humanity, you guys were fighting each other. One day they attacked us when our defense was down and they barley escaped from us. Traveling over 500 million light years to get here. We destroyed there home planet, so they were going to destroy ours. We had killed over 1,000 billion of these things but 250,000 thousand escaped and headed here. If you don’t want our help then we will destroy them and you both. The Trakeins already joined up with us and we have more than enough to destroy the Tradons, but what would the people think on Earth that their protection is not protecting them. So do we got a deal? Alright then Tonn we will do as you say but this is only temporary, then after this race is destroyed we will then destroy anyone that stands against us. What ever you say Shiro. The Trakeins will attack the Tradons on Jupiter with 5,000 of my troops and technology. And you guys will get 10,000 troops and technology against the attack on Saturn. The rest of my troops will attack their main headquarters on Mercury. Now I'm going to tell you what I have told the Trakeins. If you guys decide to turn against us then my troops will destroy you and everything you got within hours. Is that clear Prime General. Yes. Ok then let’s get started then. End of Transmition. Prime General I don’t think this is wise. Don’t be stupid Shmite Takaguro Tonn can already destroy us. We need to play along with this game until project Elimination is complete, then we can finally destroy Tonn who has humiliated us for too long. This is insane. Do you have something to say Alexander. Yes, I have met Tonn before. He spared me in the battle over 20 years ago. What you are trying to say is that you were in that battle long ago. Yes. Then you should lead this strike. What? I can’t do this. He has defeated you. Why do you think he spared your life. He wants you to get stronger so he can have a decent match. You need to awake from this nightmare that has been chasing you long ago. You need to realize that you have gain more power than he has. You need to use the rage that has been inside of you a long time ago. You need to take that and use it as a weapon to destroy Tonn. Then and only then you will realize what it means to be free. Is that clear. Yes. Good, I will send all the information about this war later so then your all dismissed. (The 3 Generals leave the spaceport and go back to their own bases.)
The next Day
General Zlex wait up. We have just received news about our positions. We will be going 70 miles northwest of the 12th base into the dunes of Shakuris. The Tonn has reasons to believe that the Tradons main base on this planet is there. Ok when do we leave. First general Alexander’s troops will secure 20 miles around the perimeter of the dunes of Shakuris. Then general Shmite’s troops will follow general Alexander’s troops to the ridge of the dunes of Shakuris. Then we will enter the enemy’s base and destroy it. Ok, but what time do we strike. At 2100 hundred hours. Ok, your dismissed commander.
The first Strike
All right troopers our equipment from Tonn is here and we will be moving out in 10 minutes. We will meet Tonn’s Troops at the midpoint. We have confirmed that there will be over 50,000 Tradons. when we get their the Tonn will launch a nuke cannon blast that will destroy their main defense. At that point we will wipe out their air-attacking structures so we can send in an air raid that will destroy many more of them. After that General Shmite's troops will go in first, then we will follow. We will go until we get to the doors of their main base. Then General Zlex troops will go in. Then we will follow their troops behind. Then we will have victory. Any questions. Ok then move out!
General Alexander’s troops moved out and met up with Tonn’s troops.
What is this, is this some kind of a joke? No it isn’t. It will only be me and two of my best men. How the hell are we supposed to kill 50,000 thousand Tradons with only you 3 and 750 of us? Easy, I will create an energy blast that will destroy their defenses. I don’t believe this, we are supposed to attack very strong nasty creatures with just this. Yes just watch. Tonn had two machines on both his hands. He held them up and a ball of energy appeared. He then launched it at the Tradons first defense but blew up more then that.
What the hell was that? That my friend was my Tonn nuke cannon. How can you create something that powerful. I didn’t. Then how did you do that with those two machines on your hands? It wasn’t that. It is just armor with my blades in it. See. How can you fire that with only your hands. It is a gift from the heavens. See I have died once before. Now are we just going to sit here or are we going to attack. Ok bravo and alpha squads come with me. The rest of you set up perimeters and protect this area we might need to fall back and you guys will cover us. I don’t think that is necessary captain. Why Because the Tradons here are all dead. What? Just look. When you were giving orders my two best men went in and destroyed them. Holy shit! Get hold of the prime general and tell them we have a problem.
The next day
Prime General Shiro Tanoki we have a serious problem. We have found out that Tonn is stronger than we could ever believe. First he can use unbelievable power that comes from him not any weapon or anything. He destroyed all of the Tradons defense then they lost control. After that two men that were with him had heavy armor and long bladed energy swords just went in at incurable speed and destroyed everything that was left. If they could do this then why do they need our help and the Trakeins help? Calm down commander I have figured this out a while ago. Tonn just wanted to show how strong they were so if we wanted to betray them they would destroy all of us in an instant. Ok well that explains that but why do we still have an alliance with Tonn. General we have an important message coming from master sergeant Lucos Duran. Prime General we have some bad news. The Trakeins have turned on Tonn but they lost and now they are gathering up all of their last forces and left heading towards us. Should we fire or stand down and let them through. Sergeant get me a hold of the Trakeins that are heading our way. Prime General we are defeated by the Tonn. Kay has died when he led the force to attack and I was backup. But we have stolen a major strange device. If you let us in I will give it to you. But you will have to help me avenge my brother’s death. Now the Trakeins are coming running to us for help how strange. Will you shut the fuck up and listen. This device has classified information about Tonn now I know you have seen a few of Tonn’s troops in action and if I know you very well I would say you would want to destroy them too. Do we got a deal?...... Yes. Let them in Sergeant and we will discuss this later commander.
Ok so what have you got to show us Key. Well we have manage to find out many dark secrets about Tonn. First he lied when he said he left to go to another galaxy to protect the Earth. Well they left to build secret and more advance technology. Another thing about them is their technology. They found a peaceful alien planet with far more advance technology so they shared each others technology. They built ultimate armor with incredible speed. Tonn created a laser sword and put it on this thing and it is unstoppable. One day when Tonn created the Tradons it was accidentally. When they mixed our atmosphere with theirs the alien species mutated into what we now call Tradons. They did this because their was just a slight difference in the atmosphere than with Earth. Tonn researched it and said nothing would happen to them but did. It was undetectable by any of their technology. This caused mutation, loss of memory, and pain. Now all they want to do is destroy. The last word that ever came out of this alien race that was mutated was from the leader of them. He said he didn’t want anyone one of them with minds to kill anything. He said if that ever occurs wipe out our specie. He didn’t want any of them living a destructive life. Tonn disobeyed that order and tried to find a cure but nothing worked. Not long after that they started to kill the Tonn. They had no choice. He made a decision that he didn’t want to make. So they started to kill the Tradons. some that were left came here to destroy Earth because that what started the mutation. This is everything what happened Prime General. Ok now that we know a little more about this maybe their is some way we can get the Tradons on our side.
Now that the Confederacy knows what Tonn has done past the years they are going to try an alliance with the Tradons. Meanwhile in Tonn’s space ship.
So Commander Mitoss how is the shields power defense from the attack on the Trakeins. Well the power has decreased 42% but in 17 hours it will be back to full power. Good. I want to see all the activity that is going on the Prime Leaders space station. Also I would like you to launch two power blast to Mercury so we can keep the Tradons at bay until our power is full then we will launce many small Tonn cannon blast and send in 25 Hi-speeders loaded with Tonn bombs to destroy their heavy artilleries that the beam swords cant handle. If they run into any assassin phantoms tell them to contact air support and get the hell out of that area. We don’t want that to happen again. What will happen again Tonn. That’s right you just got this rank and you never ran into one before. The Assassin Phantoms are flying creatures that are impossible to kill. It is like trying to kill a rhino with a stick. We haven’t found any thing that could kill them except for a Tonn neutron bomb. But those bombs take 6 pure energy’s to make. Tonn can you tell me how pure energy won’t explode any more when it first exploded on Earth. When the first pure energy exploded scientists needed to find out how to make it not explode. They planted a device in it so it won’t explode but just get used up. Oh ok then. Is their anything else Tonn. Ya, tell the 25 troops that are going down to bring the Tonn cyber laser with them. But sir you know what happened last time they used that. It is a risk we have to take. The Tradons are getting stronger by the day passes. If we don’t do something soon they will be imposable to kill. Now do I make myself clear. Yes Tonn. Ok then your dismissed.
The next day.
Tonn we are ready to fire the cannons and launch the drop ships. You give the word and we will fire. Ok then FIRE! ok and done know were launching the drop ships. Drop ships launched. Their ETA is in two and a half minutes. So Tonn are you going to go down your self? No I’m going to go to my shrine and have the spirits of the old Tradons to guide Tonn into the last battle. Until I get back your in charge. Yes sir Tonn. Receiving Transmission. Commander Mitoss this is the ground units. The Tradons whole base is surrounded by Assassin Phantoms. We need major air support know. The quadrants are 0734 through 0782. We need at least 3 Tonn laser tanks in case we need to fall back. Also we will need an extended units. Ok what kind of units. 5 Tonn laser gunners and 10 Tonn chain gun men. Ok. Your ETA with all the equipment will be in 6 minutes and the air support in 2 minutes. Ok we should be all right until then over and out.
Meanwhile at the shrine. Samu Uma Sul Ga. Uhse Ma Ka Du Na. Mai Ai Sa Naka. Have you called for me Tonn. Yes SulGar. I need guidance I don’t know if we can win anymore. I think we are going to fail you. That is nonsense you know you can win. The day you were attacked and you died I brought you back. I used everything I had left to bring you back. I knew you were powerful in mind and spirit. You had something I never seen before. I gave what was left of me for you to lived. That caused me to lose control of my body so I killed my self for you. I believe in you that you have something far greater than anything your species can ever do. When I brought you back you learned something. Something that our specie never seen before. You learned how to control elements around you. Know here this you will lead your troops into battle and you will win and may the spirits of the Tradons that haven’t lost their minds to guide you to victory. We will be watching you. Tonn left the shrine and decided to take 100 more of them to the battle field and win. Mean while on Mercury Tonn’s troops are losing the battle.
This is ridicules! The Tradons have learned new skill and now they can multiply in an instant. There are to many Assassin Phantoms its like they keep coming no matter what we do. If we don’t get some reinforcements we will lose. Alright when are the Tonn laser tanks ready to fire. In 23 seconds commander. Alright I want 3 troops to fall back to the Tonn laser tanks. 8 Hi-speeders attack the Assassins that are coming from the rear. Now sergeant fire the Tonn laser tanks in 3 2 1 Fire! A huge blast destroys the main Assassin Phantoms. Look commander reinforcements has arrived. It looks like Tonn is here. Alright commander I will be taking control. I want all forces up to the Tradons base. You herd him get up their and attack. What are you doing Tonn. I'm getting ready to use the last of the powers of the free Tradons to destroy their evil side. Tonn raises his hands up once again and energy spirits flow into a circle above Tonn’s hands. Tonn then is glowing blue and then he lets it all out. A huge beam cuts and makes a clear path towards the Tradons main core destroying everything in it’s path. Then a huge explosion destroys their main core. Tonn you have done it. It is finally over. Tonn I’m picking up some major activity. Its the Confederacy ! A transmission is coming through. Tonn this is General Alexander Mectis. I am very sorry what I’m about to do but I have no choice. Something takes a part in me that wants to destroy you and so does the Confederacy. But something is telling me I’m making a bad decision. Listen Alexander what ever your about to do don’t do it. The reason I let you go a long time ago was that you. I'm what someone you chose who lives and who dies. You are not God so stop playing God. No the reason I let you live is that. Oh was it piety, or was it to leave me here with my honor destroyed. No. Than what is it. You are my brother. What? You were in the Military when I was born, before we found the Pure Energy. Then after the Explosion you joined the Confederacy. Mom didn’t want you to go and you had an argument. You didn’t want to talk to her. Father worked hard raising us and you didn’t come back. One day their was a battle in the area we moved to. An explosion killed our parents. So I started a clan to protect anyone else from dying. What is holding you back is in your blood. A knew who you were but didn’t want to tell you. You are my brother you must have been 20 years younger than me and you beat me. I was 15 when I defeated you. Everyone said I was a geniuses. Receiving Transmission. So Alexander you betrayed us. You are with him now. I see how it goes. I will destroy you both then. End of transmission. Tonn listen up they have completed project Elimination. That new weapon they built can destroy a whole planet. They got one shot until 3 hours till it recharges to fire again. The first time they won’t miss. We should evacuate this planet immediatley. Commander John Sumit get a hold of many of my troops that are willing to turn against the Confederacy and help the true protectors of civilians. Yes General. Alright Tonn we all ready to go. Hell Ya! Then get us off this planet and lets head to our new secret base on Mars. Damn our own men are turning against us. General Zlex fire the Elimination. They fired their new weapon but Tonn and General Alexander got away long before the blast destroyed the planet. Prime General their is a malfunction on the weapon. Activate cooling systems. I can’t it’s jammed. What thats impossiable! Wait we are getting a transmition. Ha so you thought it was completed, but it was I who planted that secret virus in your mainframe so it wouldn’t actavate the coolers and it would also disengage the locks on the weapon so basicly firering that weapon killed you all. What? Who told you thihs Tonn? It was none other than SulGar! What who is he? It doesn’t matter anyway, your already dead. Have a nice life. Fuck! Get the coolers down their and cool of the weapon. It’s to late Shiro. Fuck! The weapon exploded killing the Prime General, and The Trakeins. there were 52% troops was left of the Confederacy. General Zlex the Prime General’s space station just blow up. What should we do? I know this sounds crazy but what we need to do is move Mercury so it crashes into Tonn’s Space Base ship. That would be insane. It is Tonn who killed the Prime General by coming back. If Tonn hadn’t come back none of this would of happened. We need to fire up to 30,000 thousand G’s of sound waves to make it crash into it. I on it right now. It will fire in 2 minutes and 36 seconds. Good. Right now aim it 32 degrees north east and 12 degrees south west. What about General Shmite. His troops fell back to their headquarters. I guess he is planning something of his own. And General Alexander is now the enemy. He joined up with Tonn. Sir it is ready to fire. You give the word. ok Fir......... wait what is that. Sir their are firing at our ship but no damage is being made. Wait all of the systems are shutting down. Nothing is working. They are escaping sir. Is their any weapons on line. Yes but only mega and regular chain guns. Any missiles? No sir. Fine do what ever we can to stop them. Ok. All troops fire everything we got at the Tonn until everything is back on line. Get out in space with your grappler GW3’s. and hook on as many as you can. They will not escape. Sir wait their turning around. Receiving Transmission. You guys actually think you can take us out? Stand down or you will leave us no choice but to return heavy fire. Well? All troops stand down. We will get you later and we will hunt you down and destroy you! You just try Zlex.
Dawn of the next day
General Shmite Takaguro all of the troops are here. We have 126,000 troops and 80,000 androids and cyborgs. We have 19 bases on Saturn but 32% of the Pure Energy is left their so what should we do. Admiral Blake we need to contact Earth and contact the Earth Defense Forces (EDF). We need to tell them what happened here. What about Tonn. They are gone again. Who knows when they will be back. We have no one else to fight. Their is peace in the galaxy once again. What are we going to tell the EDF about blowing up Mercury and it crashing it into Venus destroying two planets. We have to tell the truth I guess. The Prime General went to far to destroy Tonn and lead to his destruction. We should get out of blame by then. And also I we had nothing to do about project Elimination. It was classified to us. They treated us as the lowest ranking force. So now we just go back to Earth and explain what has happened.
Mean while on Mars.
So Tonn what are we going to do now. I have contacted SulGar and he is pleased that everyone of them are good and peaceful once again. He also said that their spirits will be protecting us when another specie try’s to destroy Earth. It’s like they will be watching us while were watching Earth. Than I guess our work is done. No there is still one more thing we have to do. What’s that? Contact the EFD and tell them we will stop attacking them until they change their mind and attack us. They have destroyed half of their own forces accidentally and I guess they won’t be attacking us for a while.
Tonn and General Alexander made plans for further development and decided to confront the EDF about their plans for what they are going to do and they excepted it and I am going to say it again Great Power comes with Great Destruction.
The End
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