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Liquid_Polar · Post by **Liquid_Polar** » Thu Jan 23, 2003 6:55 pm

Here's a pic I drew on my comp, any tips on improvement I wanna get better at this..

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Innotech · Post by **Innotech** » Thu Jan 23, 2003 7:03 pm

thinner head, redo the eyes, the mouth, and make the head more proprtionate to a real head. Other than that its a good start

Liquid_Polar · Post by **Liquid_Polar** » Thu Jan 23, 2003 7:13 pm

umm okay but I still want that anime look and thats the way I have the eyes instead of circles like O.o though I might change it, I gotta work somethings out I think my program is restricting me from some very useful tools and effects since its only a trial ah well it makes the lines so smooth n_n

Jace Tsunami · Post by **Jace Tsunami** » Thu Jan 23, 2003 7:22 pm

It doesn't look like anime at all, once you say that's what you're going for you can KINDA see it in the hair. but other than that it looks COMPLETLEY american. I'm assuming that she's wearing glasses, you could interpret them as goggles and then it looks like something stupid that would be on the kids WB.

Sorry for being harsh, but if it looks like anime you'll know it, and you'll be happy with it. I'm just trying to help yuo realize you're really not there yet, and if you only make minor changes instead of big ones, it's not gunna get fixed anytime soon.

Do exactly what Innotech said, and it should look more anime.

Innotech · Post by **Innotech** » Thu Jan 23, 2003 7:23 pm

Heres some original pics I made of Sailor Venus on mediaminer. Im still working out details and proportions, but it shows athe typical anime proprtion and facial structure. Though like I said, I used to copy images (not trace, but freehand pictures from websites) and I recently started to try out my own original poses/drawings. I guess its coming out pretty good.
http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php?id=137908

http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php?id=138191
http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php?id=138213

Liquid_Polar · Post by **Liquid_Polar** » Thu Jan 23, 2003 8:09 pm

well thanks being harsh is okay O.o guess I can't really draw anime if I'm not japanese but I could attempt to immitate it

cool pics Innotech

AKH257 · Post by **AKH257** » Thu Jan 23, 2003 8:24 pm

meh its fine for computer work need to work on some things and stick to basic shapes
and are u using one of those computer pencil thingys

Innotech · Post by **Innotech** » Thu Jan 23, 2003 8:28 pm

Liquid_Polar wrote:well thanks being harsh is okay O.o guess I can't really draw anime if I'm not japanese but I could attempt to immitate it

cool pics Innotech

thats not true, Im getting better as you can see, and I am American. Well I have Chinese blood in my family, thus my like of anything oriental far east, but mostly its just that I have been practicing it lately. the eyes are very important to get right. you can see Minako has really large eyes and they are drawn very specifically. But there are a lot of styles to draw anime eyes. The heads are a bit oddly shaped too, but there is a specific way of drawing all that. Just look up how to draw manga/anime on the net and PRACTICe like hell

Mroni · Post by **Mroni** » Sat Jan 25, 2003 5:57 am

Liquid_Polar wrote:Here's a pic I drew on my comp, any tips on improvement I wanna get better at this..

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Make it more wackable I definitley can not wack to that! See also pics of shinobu and lum for inspiration.

Mr Oni

UncleMilo · Post by **UncleMilo** » Sat Jan 25, 2003 6:25 am

Liquid_Polar wrote:Here's a pic I drew on my comp, any tips on improvement I wanna get better at this..

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Hmmm...

I think the head needs to be rounder... it looks to flat on top.

The eyes need more work... they need more detail so they can bring out more emotion from the character.

I like the style... find your own voice and keep working! I see potential there!

-Uncle Milo

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