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Post by Nariko_sama » Sun May 13, 2007 7:25 pm

here is an original one :D

Video:How to save a life
Anime: Saint Seiya
Song: How to save a life
Artist: the fray
Creator: nariko_sama

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Re: In Memory of the Critic, Free Opinions

Post by shinji13 » Sun May 13, 2007 8:03 pm

Arigatomina wrote:
shinji13 wrote:4. In the process of going back to the number one position also to raise my usefulness count up to atleast 1000 words.
Eh, good luck with that. Once you get to the 900 useful range with that many ops given, it'll take two to three ops to raise it a single point. And only one short op for the score to drop. It's totally rigged in favor of one-time spammers. >.<

Semi-recent vid, random action/drama. Kinda flashy. Sort of.
Then at that point I can just keep moving like a slug, or I can start doing my 15,000 word opinions where I do a complete breakdown of music-videos of every 5 seconds, what I thought about it, whats wrong with it, whats good with it, how you can fix whats wrong with it, where to go to fix whats wrong with it...

Thats a bit overboard though, and I'd only be able to do like one opinion in a week lol.
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Post by shinji13 » Sun May 13, 2007 8:38 pm

Opinion Up, I am now completed with the first page! 18 videos to op now *cause two new ones came up since last post*. I probably wont do anymore today, might get one or two more in if I am up for it.
Critics Word wrote:None of my improvement points for this video matter extremely much, but a word of advice.

-Don't always think you have to match the lyrics to the footage, if there is another venue to work your magic do that instead, because sometimes to much lyric to footage syncing gets kind of overwhelming and can wear a viewer down.

This is an amazing video, very fast paced and well edited, worth watching; a good example for all you new editors and a good collection video for all you viewers.
"The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources." - Albert Einstein

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Post by shinji13 » Mon May 14, 2007 12:02 am

RanChan13 wrote:http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=143667
Anime: Ouran High School Host Club
Song: Do you wanna
Artist Franz Ferdinand
Opinion up.

I will do the second one once I get caught up and have nothing to do, there are others waiting on opinions and I am sure someone here wont be happy if you get 2 and I end up dropping out leaving them with none, I wont forget you dont worry ;)

Thats all for the day, I'll probably do some more tomorrow, until then

...See You Virtual Editor
Critics Word wrote: -Perhaps more scene changing or some basic effects to highlight the beat of the song? I felt a very upbeat personality in the song that wasn't well reflected in the video that followed.

This isnt a horrible video, a good song, but the video was kind of a drag in the end... I was a bit side-tracked by listening to the song it made me feel like the video was better than it was, but if your the same way no problem with a little bit of fake eh'?
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Post by RanChan13 » Mon May 14, 2007 1:49 am

shinji13 wrote:
RanChan13 wrote:http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=143667
Anime: Ouran High School Host Club
Song: Do you wanna
Artist Franz Ferdinand
Opinion up.

I will do the second one once I get caught up and have nothing to do, there are others waiting on opinions and I am sure someone here wont be happy if you get 2 and I end up dropping out leaving them with none, I wont forget you dont worry ;)

Thats all for the day, I'll probably do some more tomorrow, until then

...See You Virtual Editor
Critics Word wrote: -Perhaps more scene changing or some basic effects to highlight the beat of the song? I felt a very upbeat personality in the song that wasn't well reflected in the video that followed.

This isnt a horrible video, a good song, but the video was kind of a drag in the end... I was a bit side-tracked by listening to the song it made me feel like the video was better than it was, but if your the same way no problem with a little bit of fake eh'?
Thanks for the op, and take your time on the other one I have plenty of time to get it
I am the bone of my sword
Steel is my body and fire is my blood
I have created over a thousand blades
Unknown to Death
Nor known to Life
Have withstood pain to create many weapons
Yet, those hands will never hold anything
So as I pray, unlimited blade works.

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Post by -GfN- » Mon May 14, 2007 2:31 am

thanks for the op man :o

~Jannis

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Post by Schattenlied » Mon May 14, 2007 5:00 am

Hhm, in the mood for a slow song...?



I'm trying to get opinions before staring out on the next video. So, it would be much appreciated. :D

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Post by shinji13 » Tue May 15, 2007 2:47 am

Rrezz wrote:eh..you really dont have to do this one >.o It is Bleach and not really an original concept..but It seems like people still enjoy the Video and re-watch it pretty often..the Opinion would be greatly apprecicated, but if you dont want to do the Video, I'd understand it.

No offense, but I went to download your video and read your description, and I really don't have the time nor patient's to give my opinions to editors who don't take their editing seriously, drop by when you actually try.

So, skipping this video and I will be doing a few opinions right now before I hit the sack, cant sleep for some reason (which is gonna kill me tomorrow when I go to work).
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Post by shinji13 » Tue May 15, 2007 3:32 pm

Superbastard wrote:

Thanks a lot, It is really apprecicated!!
Opinion is up.
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