The Legendary Super Saiyan - Saiyans' Story - All United

Rage89 · Post by **Rage89** » Thu Sep 13, 2007 8:45 am

Hello to all this is the first time I write a topic in this forum
I wanna give you the links for my amvs

This is my first:

The Legendary Super Saiyan

This my second:

Saiyans' Story

and this my third, the last:

All United

I hope you like them please give me opinions byezz

Beast Spear · Post by **Beast Spear** » Thu Sep 13, 2007 9:55 am

Saiyan's Story looks somewhat interesting.

I'll download that one.

Kevmaster · Post by **Kevmaster** » Thu Sep 13, 2007 9:59 am

your Links are NOT DIRECT, they are actually INDIRECT, you should change that.

Rage89 · Post by **Rage89** » Thu Sep 13, 2007 10:39 am

Beast Spear wrote:Saiyan's Story looks somewhat interesting.

I'll download that one.

ok but even the others aren' t so bad

Kevmasterflashdeluxe wrote:your Links are NOT DIRECT, they are actually INDIRECT, you should change that.

Ehm.. Sorry, I changed them

Beast Spear · Post by **Beast Spear** » Thu Sep 13, 2007 2:20 pm

That was interesting.

Good storytelling, for the most part, though I felt you spent way too much time on the Bardock part, when you actually could have done up to Goku beating Frieza if you wouldn't have put 75% of it on Bardock, but it was alright. You did kinda cover that, though not completely, in the end credits...

The thing that I didn't like though, was the OVERUSE of effects in certain points. When you used them sporadically I thought they were good, but in scenes like where Frieza is in the thrown room, you went way too crazy to the point where he just became a little effects blob. The same when Bardock finds his crew dead. You didn't need to overuse the effects there so much to me, as the editing and story was more than enough to carry it.

So, yeah, this was enjoyable though. And very damn good for a 2nd AMV. I'd give it a 4/5

Denzuko · Post by **Denzuko** » Thu Sep 13, 2007 2:32 pm

DBZ video... hmmm I'm going to be an hard sell on this. (seen too many of them on here and they all were crap or just above crap, ie 1.5/6 at best) But I'll give it a shot.

/gets - though is skeptical

Rage89 · Post by **Rage89** » Thu Sep 13, 2007 8:29 pm

Beast Spear wrote:That was interesting.

Good storytelling, for the most part, though I felt you spent way too much time on the Bardock part, when you actually could have done up to Goku beating Frieza if you wouldn't have put 75% of it on Bardock, but it was alright. You did kinda cover that, though not completely, in the end credits...

The thing that I didn't like though, was the OVERUSE of effects in certain points. When you used them sporadically I thought they were good, but in scenes like where Frieza is in the thrown room, you went way too crazy to the point where he just became a little effects blob. The same when Bardock finds his crew dead. You didn't need to overuse the effects there so much to me, as the editing and story was more than enough to carry it.

So, yeah, this was enjoyable though. And very damn good for a 2nd AMV. I'd give it a 4/5

Thanks for your comment, I don' t like videos with many useless effects too, I think you' re right but when I made the video I didn' t imagine that the effects would have been too many, I made it meaning to make the few essential..
I' ll keep your advice in my mind and I' m happy you find it enjoyable though!

Denzuko wrote:DBZ video... hmmm I'm going to be an hard sell on this. (seen too many of them on here and they all were crap or just above crap, ie 1.5/6 at best) But I'll give it a shot.

/gets - though is skeptical

Please download and see them, I' ve already found many people that found them very good. I think they aren' t crap (or just above crap

)
I' m waiting for your comment!

p.s. : sorry for my arranged english, tell me if my speech is not much clean ^^

CodeZTM · Post by **CodeZTM** » Fri Sep 14, 2007 9:08 am

I generally have to agree with Beastspear about that AMV. But for originality issues, I still have to give it a stern 3.25/5.00

But a really great AMV for your second.

Denzuko · Post by **Denzuko** » Fri Sep 14, 2007 4:33 pm

ok, so I guess you are really new because of your reply. "/gets" means that that person is already downloading it and is going to watch it.

Though, I was almost right. At lease with the first vid. But you got progressively better with them and the fact that it was more of a trillogy really worked. I'll give you more detall on my thoughts in my reviews.

I will say this, from what I saw you have great protential and I look forward to your next videos.

Rage89 · Post by **Rage89** » Sat Sep 15, 2007 8:50 am

CodeChrono wrote:I generally have to agree with Beastspear about that AMV. But for originality issues, I still have to give it a stern 3.25/5.00

But a really great AMV for your second.

thanks, but you think it' s an original video or not? I didn't understand

Denzuko wrote:ok, so I guess you are really new because of your reply. "/gets" means that that person is already downloading it and is going to watch it.

Though, I was almost right. At lease with the first vid. But you got progressively better with them and the fact that it was more of a trillogy really worked. I'll give you more detall on my thoughts in my reviews.

I will say this, from what I saw you have great protential and I look forward to your next videos.

wow, you downloaded all of them, great! But why you found The Legendary Super Saiyan so bad?
Anyway thanks for giving your opinion and I' m very happy you liked at least Saiyans' Story and All United! Byezz

(maybe I' ll dedicate my next videos to Trigun and not more DBZ... maybe..)