EDIT: OMG YAY DIE YUFFIE DIE >D
1. I like Kiarren's screen more, sorry Chrono. ;P
2. Transition from Fruits Basket to Battle Athletes = jarring.
EDIT: maybe move the actress piece to just after Fruits Basket to before B.Athletes... I think those transitions will work better together, and then the first few pieces will flow better as well.
3. Beginning text is too far right to be centered, and I think it should zoom forward quicker and then come to a stop for easier reading. Then wait a few seconds to read it, then fade in the author.
4. I assume the missing video sections are awaiting finished copies.
5. The credits section idea looks good, just make sure there isn't actually any black between the parts in the finished product.
I also vote for an MP4 version of this. If you don't want to or can't make one, I'll volunteer for the 10 hour download or w/e and produce one

- Kira