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Post by ShadowzAMV » Sun Feb 24, 2008 6:18 pm

I thought it was sexy, the text was well synced and i liked the blur outs on it.. some laziness in the issue of repeating Masks, but other than that, it was quite sexy over all :D I liked the Flow. 8-)
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Post by guy07 » Sun Feb 24, 2008 8:33 pm

blabbler wrote:
guy07 wrote:Psh, you guys just don't understand Neverends artistic intent.
I'm fairly confident that's limited to making a minimum of fifteen videos a day while [b]farting in niwas face[/b].
Corrected for much justice lol

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CrackTheSky
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Post by CrackTheSky » Sun Feb 24, 2008 10:21 pm

Eh, I thought it was pretty good. Short, fun, the effects worked for me as did the text, I have no real complaints. I suppose you could have done something more creative than reusing the same masks, but I honestly didn't even notice that until I read some of the comments in this thread.

Gets a :up: and 4/5 from me.

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Post by Kalium » Tue Feb 26, 2008 7:15 pm

I'll be blunt.

I don't like this. It feels like effects are being substituted for substance. Lots of effects. The first half the video felt like a regurgitation of the early chunks of Ergo Proxy. Then there was the segment with nothing but text that made me nearly stop watching and delete the video for that alone. Finally, the last segment, which made no sense at all to me.

Technically well done, however.

Oh, I'd prefer it without the text. It was really annoying.

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Neverend
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Post by Neverend » Tue Feb 26, 2008 11:18 pm

Il never make a video again :|

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Post by Kevmaster » Wed Feb 27, 2008 9:01 am

Neverend wrote:Il never make a video again :|
YAAAAY!

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Post by RatQuiRit » Thu Feb 28, 2008 3:32 pm

I thought it was a nice AMV. The effects were nicely done, but the text kinda bothered me.
I gave it 4/5 anyway, I'm not used to give more than 3, so yay !

Oh, and the music used is I wish, remixed by Skazi, the original version of I wish made by Infected Mushroom is a lot slower than this one :p

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Post by ScorpionP » Thu Feb 28, 2008 5:58 pm

Heh, very good looking fx for the first time usage, although I can't really see much originality in them :P
And :up: for Ergo Proxy =O
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omegaevolution
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Post by omegaevolution » Fri Feb 29, 2008 11:06 am

very nice for your first effects vid indeed. I think the part with the words was good, but it was a bit empty, like I would have liked if it had a background showing what the words said, or stuff lol. Anyway, I like, and no, its not the shortest vid in history :o

4/5
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Post by Funky-kun » Fri Feb 29, 2008 11:09 am

I disliked the typography, and the video looses its attraction in the second part. Not a bad starter with effects though.

3/5
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