Thank you, and thanks for the opinion.
Added the lyrics. Thanks for the tip - you don't always notice those things when something's familiar to you, y'know? And it is a pretty restrained song, though not as laid-back as some of the others I've worked with.
But it had a sort of overdramatic lyric ("I have spent my whole life in ruins..." struck me as Ashtonlike) and an underlying affection that I liked.
I've heard from others too that the progression I wanted to draw through the whole thing didn't turn out very clear, if at all. ^_^; Well, even so, I hope it works as a profile.
Stability - Hmm. I did plan the heck out of this for such a short and simple video, and tried to keep things consistent in many parts just to make things smoother (like after the fall down the stairs, there's the goofy fear take when he's also on the floor, although that happened several episodes earlier - etc.) If that's what worked then erm, that's a good thing. ^_^;;
As for the subtitles, well, I don't want to draw all that much attention to it, but I did notice a couple of spots where the "camera" jerks sideways because I'd cropped things strangely. (basically a shot overlaps 2 clips in the timeline by one frame, and they are cropped in two different ways.) It bothers me, but maybe only because I'm looking for things like that.
Anyway, enough rambling from me. Thanks for the feedback, and I'm glad you liked it. It's not the most complex or groundbreaking thing in the world, just a little warm'n'fuzzy sort of piece.
