SOAD2: Why's The Rum gone? (Completed. Finally.)
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First of all, the sync is mostly dead on, there is nothing wrong with it, with the exception of maybe a few parts near the end. Second, I didn't ask for feedback. I already got the feedback I needed. Third, I'm not changing it. Kev can use it if he wants, if he doesn't then whatever. It doesn't matter to me either way.Wut? inverts? I full heatedly approve. Sync needs a bit of work though. The first part quarter in particular.
Oh, not to mention your grammar is painfully bad. I had to read what your wrote 3 times to get a basic idea of what you were trying to say. Just so you know =3