What an enchanting title, huh?
My first uploaded AMV on here. Please watch it and give me your opinions on it, I know I have space for improvement, even if it is little things. ^_^
Pokemon-First Movie
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Re: Pokemon-First Movie
The way you timed and edited this video was actually pretty nice. Its just a little unfortunate that your amv was more of a summary of Pokemon-First Movie and less like a stand alone video. And I guess that's why you chose to just name it "Pokemon-First Movie", but really, It was such a generic and bland title that I seriously debated with myself about whether or not I even wanted to download it.
I give this amv a 2.7 out of 5. I really wanted to give it a higher rating, but this amv really feels like just a summary of the movie. You could have easily given it a theme. And during the first 35 seconds, I really thought that it was going to revolve around mewtwo's hatred. But then out of the blue, you not only introduced Ash and friends as if the amv revolved around them, but you even showed that nameless guy that got all his Pokemon trashed within the first 10 minutes of the movie.
If this was a beta, this this could actually become a good amv. That is.....if you gave it better pacing, name, and theme. But since you submitted it as a full amv.........
I give this amv a 2.7 out of 5. I really wanted to give it a higher rating, but this amv really feels like just a summary of the movie. You could have easily given it a theme. And during the first 35 seconds, I really thought that it was going to revolve around mewtwo's hatred. But then out of the blue, you not only introduced Ash and friends as if the amv revolved around them, but you even showed that nameless guy that got all his Pokemon trashed within the first 10 minutes of the movie.
If this was a beta, this this could actually become a good amv. That is.....if you gave it better pacing, name, and theme. But since you submitted it as a full amv.........
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Re: Pokemon-First Movie
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Re: Pokemon-First Movie
Yeah I need to work on the storyline, and try to capture the mood better instead just having random scenes. And yeah, I need to think of better title's since the current one would make people think that this is a bad/nooby video lol. Thanks for the criticism, I will make sure to fix all those things in my next AMV.kireblue wrote:The way you timed and edited this video was actually pretty nice. Its just a little unfortunate that your amv was more of a summary of Pokemon-First Movie and less like a stand alone video. And I guess that's why you chose to just name it "Pokemon-First Movie", but really, It was such a generic and bland title that I seriously debated with myself about whether or not I even wanted to download it.
I give this amv a 2.7 out of 5. I really wanted to give it a higher rating, but this amv really feels like just a summary of the movie. You could have easily given it a theme. And during the first 35 seconds, I really thought that it was going to revolve around mewtwo's hatred. But then out of the blue, you not only introduced Ash and friends as if the amv revolved around them, but you even showed that nameless guy that got all his Pokemon trashed within the first 10 minutes of the movie.
If this was a beta, this this could actually become a good amv. That is.....if you gave it better pacing, name, and theme. But since you submitted it as a full amv.........
