NEW AMV IN ALMOST 2 MONTHS

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Re: NEW AMV IN ALMOST 2 MONTHS

Post by Chiiisus » Thu Aug 27, 2009 5:55 pm

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I don't like Naruto but I've seen some amazing Naruto Amvs....this was not one of them...
I know that is harsh but some parts went on too long and with this song I thought I'd see much more beat sync, I even forwarded it hoping that it would get better but it never. D: I'm sorry, I just didn't like it.
XD...
But i liked your choice of song?

anthonypokemon wrote:i dont want to use effects cuz every time i do my videos turn even worse

Not all videos need effects to be good, effects aren't the only thing that makes an AMV good ^^;
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Re: NEW AMV IN ALMOST 2 MONTHS

Post by LittleAtari » Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:09 pm

-Reda- wrote:
This thread
Wow, the org is full of assholes.
anthonypokemon wrote: plz rate it and plz no negative comments
I wouldn't confuse negative with constructive. Think of it like this: When you show something here on the org that you've made, consider them to be a sample TV audience. If they boo, ask them what they didn't like. If they did like it, ask them specifically what it is they liked about it. Most comments here seem to be "Not my cup of tea", "Didn't enjoy it", or "This is terrible". They could also of course be in a more positive light like "good job, great work" etc. It's your job as the poster to press those responses further and ask exactly what it is they mean. Don't consider these comments to be "negative", but rather an opportunity to learn more about what it is your viewing audience wants; as an editor thats your job. If you don't care to entertain others and simply pursue this hobby by yourself, don't feel the need to show anyone else your work, thats your choice.

Honestly this video didn't bother me all that much. There were some technical issues that I noted from the Preview version, like the aspect ratio being wrong and some blended frames, but those are simple technical issues. I would definitely advise learning about those things before your next video. Like you said, this is your first AMV in two months, no need to just sit around those two months and do nothing. If you don't feel motivated to actually edit something, theres always the option of learning more about editing itself. This will help keep the hobby fresh in your mind and keep you active in it.

I liked the subtitles because it did make this almost feel like an advertisement for Naruto or a mock opening; if this is what you were going for then I can say you started to pull it off pretty well. I'd recommend better text or motion for your subtitles though, play around a little bit more and be creative if you're going to include text in your video, just slapping it on there doesn't really ever look good. Also, if the almost trailer feel is what you were going for, then you need to vary up your scene selection more frequently. Action scenes are cool, but maybe juxtapose those with shots of the characters themselves either going through a struggle, developing, or even just standing there. You need to capture the characters you're illustrating in their entirety, not just their more bad ass moments in the series; its cool but its not as entertaining to watch as a video that has all of those elements and not just the fight sequences.

I hope this information was constructive and not "negative", and if you'd like to respond to anything I've said in this post or further explain what it is you're trying to do, you're more then welcome. I'll keep my eye on this thread.
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Re: NEW AMV IN ALMOST 2 MONTHS

Post by hasteroth » Thu Aug 27, 2009 7:53 pm

You know it's strange.

I actually kind of agree with you.

But still.

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Re: NEW AMV IN ALMOST 2 MONTHS

Post by Castor Troy » Thu Aug 27, 2009 9:46 pm

This video is great and I'm sure you'll be dominating all these posers in contests in no time. :wink:
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Re: NEW AMV IN ALMOST 2 MONTHS

Post by gotenks794 » Thu Aug 27, 2009 11:44 pm

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Re: NEW AMV IN ALMOST 2 MONTHS

Post by -Reda- » Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:09 am

Hey assholes, instead of just laughing at making fun of someone, why don't you go watch the video and give this person some constructive feedback. I don't think you'd appreciate it if other people did this kind of shit to your release threads either.
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Re: NEW AMV IN ALMOST 2 MONTHS

Post by Panky » Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:35 am

EDITonamv:
Sorry, I didn't like it.
Using black clips at the start of the video trying to synch with the drums were a turn off for me, they weren't synched to the music.
You used way too large scenes for an AMV, let alone an action one.
I didn't like the lyrics written over the lower part of the video. Didn't quite fit.
The rest of the video wasn't good for the reasons mentioned above, it just looked like 3 random scenes with a song on the background.

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Re: NEW AMV IN ALMOST 2 MONTHS

Post by anthonypokemon » Sat Aug 29, 2009 5:45 pm

well every time i use effects it makes the video look like crap if u all look up afterdark naruto u all would understand
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Re: NEW AMV IN ALMOST 2 MONTHS

Post by Animated » Sat Aug 29, 2009 7:57 pm

anthonypokemon wrote:well every time i use effects it makes the video look like crap if u all look up afterdark naruto u all would understand
I watched it.

Damn, my eyes...


Cant you just make a decent non-naruto amv with simple fade ins/outs and about 10 times more scenes? Yes. You can.
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Re: NEW AMV IN ALMOST 2 MONTHS

Post by Radical_Yue » Sun Aug 30, 2009 12:06 am

Either this person is:

1) Incredibly young
2) Fucking Troll
or
3) Just a dipshit.


I'd say leave your opinion and go on your way. There is no point in hounding a moronic thread where a person won't listen to feedback and dives into internet sarcasm like he's a fat kid with a pool of pudding.

In the end, this thread is just going to go to shit, so enjoy it while you can :P
And I'm just waiting for someone to quote/fix't my post to "In the end, it doesn't even matter." Go for it, it'll be the exact same meaning :|

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