TwilightChrono wrote:@Dar: Hmmm.......Well, I think it could stand for more scene changes to the beat. Maybe a little more speeding up in general. The flashes you used I'm not too fond of either, and the lip flap at 12 looks like it should be removed. I don't know if you are going with a specific theme here but to quote LA, There isn't a whole lot of time to make an epic storyline to follow so it's best to keep it simple. I think just some minor tweaking and it would be good for a final. Just implement the changes I suggested and it should be fine. Cuz, I just feel it's way too slow still. Maybe I need an opinion from the other editors.
Agreed " looks at the blaitant word for word convasation i juat discused with TC typed befor him )