Laugh Story: A Head aka This guy actually edits?

[Mol]

Lacks in sync too much for me to enjoy this, still not bad as first.

[BaQuM]

Lacks in sync

[Mol]

Lacks in sync

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[Emotive]

Lacks in sync

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[Mol]

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[Kosmit]

As all said before, story is pretty well told
Amv becomes more interesting as the pace of the song is growing
For a first amv it's rly good stuff!

The story was obvious even though I hadn't watched the anime, the flow was commendable for a first video and I liked your build-up a lot, it actually got quite intense towards the end.

A very good first overall.

Thanks!

Lacks in sync too much for me to enjoy this, still not bad as first.

You just wouldn't be yourself if you didn't critisize...

Oh, and since when did this topic become a flame war?

Let the flaming begin.

...oh

[DaikashiSan]

Wow, the song choice was excellent and the pacing it has is insane.

The video follows a nice slope, at points the editing slows down and fits the song so well, and when it builds up and escalates, it becomes really quick paced and just right.

The story seems simple, yet it works so well. I'm not really sure, but besides remapping time and all that, it doesn't seem like you actually used any effects. In which case, kudos to you for such an epic video.

[Mol]

Lacks in sync too much for me to enjoy this, still not bad as first.

You just wouldn't be yourself if you didn't critisize...

I blame community. Stalking ppl for sync wtf?
Anyway that's the only thing i can bitch about in your first so it's not that bad i guess
Stuff like mood can come later. D:

[Amatuer]

Amazing stuff, pretty well set out and well put in.
The music sort of matches it even though theres no vocal.
Only problem I find is that it feels slow. Rather than a 3 min vid, felt like 5.
Still its great stuff.

[Kosmit]

Wow, the song choice was excellent and the pacing it has is insane.

The story seems simple, yet it works so well. I'm not really sure, but besides remapping time and all that, it doesn't seem like you actually used any effects. In which case, kudos to you for such an epic video.

Glad you enjoyed it. And no, besides one or two blurs and minor colour corrections I didn't really use any effects.

Amazing stuff, pretty well set out and well put in.
The music sort of matches it even though theres no vocal.
Only problem I find is that it feels slow. Rather than a 3 min vid, felt like 5.

I'm honestly surprised with the amount of positive feedback this video's been getting. As for the length - it's probably the music's fault or something.