[AuN - Deshi] Seventh heaveN - A Eureka seven amv

[Bakadeshi]

loved it, i found me a really complex story-like meaning in it, that i'm really not sure if it was on purpose or not, but either way, I loved it.

on purpose, yes. original? no ;p Its basically the plot of the movie, just like EXsphere said, but with all the unnessisary characters and extra plot stuff cut out. I just made it about Eurika and renton fighting against the world to be together.

pretty basic man. My issue with this is most of the video went in the order as the movie plays, so it made it really predictable. Just didn't seem to stand out for me at all.

Yep. If youve seen the movie, it will be predictable.

It was like a beautiful story

Thanks!

I also agree that the mood was good, I liked that =D Also some aprts were pretty well done in my opinion.
All in all I also agree with AimoAio, it was good for this short amount of time but it was lacking of something, like a highlight in the vid ;O

Over all I still liked it

Thanks! yea I kinda think so too. Its def not one of my best works.

I do still like Attack...I'll check this out.


Edit:

There were definitely parts of the video I enjoyed, however, I do agree with the comment about this feeling like a beta. A lot of it just doesn't feel fine tuned enough, a lot of cuts are off sync by 2-3 frames etc. Also, on the parts of the song where the screaming comes in, the video really lacked ferocity. Overall it just feels incomplete to me.

Odd, The sync should be fine... sure its not the 720p file lagging a bit? ;p That being said, as I had said earlier, there are a few things i had wanted to fine tune in this, (the ferosity thing you mentioned being one of them) but I lost the project files.

Still glad you enjoyed some of it.

Why do a lot of video mosaics?

not sure what your talking about? Maybe you having the weightp issue....try the xvid:
http://www.aunstudios.com/downloads/1/( ... _480p].AVI

Meh...
Still waiting for another awesome Bakadeshi vid...

hello stroboscope =_= not enough inner sync

Theres lots of internal sync. Especially in the fighting parts.

Overall a "meh" amv, but don't get discouraged. Keep practicing, and you'll improve. Take these suggestions:
*Don't use random scenes
*Make the video relate to the music more/give it a story that follows the music.
*Don't randomly speed up scenes.
*Try making smother transitions, as opposed to just having one scene follow another.

1: Not random scenes, the scenes follow the story of renton and eurika fighting against the world to be together.
2: This is proabbly a more subjective topic, but in this one I choose to follow the music more losely as far as lyrics go, and stick with a more linear story and sync mood wise.
3: Yea I agree this is a problem of this vid that I wouldve liked to tweak if I had not lost the project files.
4: Thats the particular style of this video, as I said, the sync style was experimental ;p

Well, I adore this song. I wasn't very fond of the speedups or the lack of high pace footage during the high pace songs, but it had a pretty good overall feel to it, and I can dig it.

Thanks, yes I agree on the speedups. after watching it again after so long ago editing it, I can see alot of glaring ones that bother me too. Glad you still dug it.

The mood was great, but I couldn't get rid of feeling I'm watching a draft, a beta version. There aren't many E7 vids out there anyway, and even less a good ones, so this one is closer to the top of the list. I like it, but could have liked much more I think.

Thanks, the mood was the biggest thing I was going for. If I find the project files some point in the future maybe I tweak and release a more polished version.


Thanks for the comments

[Otohiko]

Hey, I like your simpler stuff, make more of it! There's definitely a few flaws with this video in terms of pacing and some sorta-lazy editing, but there's also lots of very good stuff. Ditch the strobes and tighten up the editing a little, but keep this sort of style for future reference.
A solid 4/5 video if I had to put a number on that.

[gotegenks]

maybe not storylike, but i felt a really complex interpretation of the lyrics is what i meant >_<

[Koys]

That's great

[Lockstock]

This is the best video I have seen in quite a while now. Well done.

[Shatterd]

Whoa great job i really likes the amv i didnt like certain parts of it but tword the end it was good.I like the effects and the song worked really good with the video goodjob.

[EkaCoralian]

Well I can never pass up an E7 AMV. ^3^

/gets

EDIT: Hm... it wasn't really my cup of tea per se, but that doesn't mean it was bad. I liked the light flashes at the beginning, and especially the timed flashing from 0:53 - 0:55 , but I just couldn't get into it all that much. It might've been some of the clip selection: I tend to listen to lyrics a lot and compare them to the clips used when watching AMVs, so clip selection always ends up being a large factor when I rate or comment on an AMV.
Nice work, though.

[Ileia]

Ah, it seems you have the curse that I do...losing project stuff from AWA videos.....it's happened to me every year but one! The video itself didn't really stand out to me, but it did present the story well enough. Also, shame on you for forcing me to watch a spoilerific video so that I could judge it fairly. Shaaaaame.

[dreamawake]

I do still like Attack...I'll check this out.


Edit:

There were definitely parts of the video I enjoyed, however, I do agree with the comment about this feeling like a beta. A lot of it just doesn't feel fine tuned enough, a lot of cuts are off sync by 2-3 frames etc. Also, on the parts of the song where the screaming comes in, the video really lacked ferocity. Overall it just feels incomplete to me.

Odd, The sync should be fine... sure its not the 720p file lagging a bit? ;p That being said, as I had said earlier, there are a few things i had wanted to fine tune in this, (the ferosity thing you mentioned being one of them) but I lost the project files.

Still glad you enjoyed some of it.

Naw, no lag from me. I'm on an AMD Phenom II X4 920 2.8ghz with 6gb of ram so I'm more than capable of playing the file. I just felt like quite a few cuts were off by 1-2 frames, especially in the beginning with all the fast cuts going on, like it didn't change scenes at the right moment, and when it did it was a few frames late etc. It could just be me nit picking, but I noticed it and figured I'd leave a post.

[Kevmaster]

I thought Joey was being just a fag, but this is def off-timing. Also didn't seem like a Deshi vid considering It could have been one of those videos people send me on youtube.