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by EvaFan » Fri Jan 22, 2010 2:56 am
I'm pretty sure I've already commented on ex's and kaze's track in the past. I won't redl and comment again unless it's been changed or told otherwise.
Arashi-
I'm prolly gonna come off as biased when I say this but this whole thing feels rushed and sporatic, I don't know if that's just your editing style or what. A few parts that I really liked though are 0:22-0:32, 0:38-0:43, and 1:00-end. The ending is intense and great. The problem I had with everything else is lyric sync and randomness, well 0:03-0:07 is ok IMO though. Everything else cept for the brief clips of the simulated past feel like you could lift them up and move them around on the timeline and it wouldnt matter any cause they are only there for beat sync so it seems. A quick example would be in the beginning we go from him standing in water or the sky or something i can't tell, then all of a sudden to a hospital where he looks down the hallway then to a random other event that is placed somewhere near the end I think in connection to this one. There's almost no coagulation here untill the parts where you follow the lyrics pretty well. I don't know how much source you have to work with either though.
The simulated past parts work for the most part cept the hospital one, the mood and scene just didn't match there with that aggravation lyric. I don't particularly like that noise/grain you got goin on either (looks ugly, might work if done differently) but that's being picky. IMO a slighly shaded or greyscale like the one you got with edge feathering (elliptical looks better then sqaure) would probably work better since you don't use noise or grain anywhere else in the video and it's not synced to anything.
Definitley like the ending though, I can see why you won't change it.
"The people cannot be [...] always, well informed. The part which is wrong will be discontented, in proportion to [...] the facts they misconceive. If they remain quiet under such misconceptions, it is lethargy, the forerunner of death to public liberty. What country can preserve its liberties, if it's rulers are not warned [...] that this people preserve the spirit of resistance? The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time, with the blood of patriots and tyrants."-Thomas Jefferson