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[Gaurry]

Sennin, dispute has begun with your opinion on that what unoriginality of your video is not constructive criticism.

[Nya-chan Production]

Well,

not bad for overused source.

is not a constructive criticism, because it's pretty much saying "I don't know what to write here"

[jrob156]

Loved it, still love it, and will always love this lol awesome amv sennin

[Gaurry]

Nya, when there is nothing to comment, no need to write long comments. No? Or you think constructive criticism it when only praise and then put 3 or 4 for vid?

[Nya-chan Production]

I think constructive criticism is providing exact good and bad points instead of general statements.

Also the only things you can give no constructive criticism to are absolutely subjective things (like love etc) and nothing, IMO :>

(oh, and this has nothing to do with score, I don't know why you even mention it)

[Nya-chan Production]

As for the vid itself:

I wasn't sure you didn't upscale at first (it looked blurry), but I checked and there's BR out, so I suppose you used that and added blur/shaking - wasn't bad.
Very nice idea with the tint in the beginning and VERY clever use of flashbacks.
Main thing - even when it got a little chaotic (probably on purpose) in the second half, it was still pretty clear what the conflict was - you have fairly good storytelling skill.

What I didn't like was the fact that I didn't know much how the

Spoiler :

girl died in the end. I suppose she was somehow shot while doing something with that killed group (conspiracy or something of that kind). Maybe it was intention or maybe I'll notice it after rewatching more times, but I found it kinda weird, given how much focus was put on it.

Very nice work for a first full-length, though, I give it 5/5 for the quality, sync and mainly storytelling.

[MycathatesyouAMV]

Very good work. One of the best amvs Ive seen this year. Very good emotional feel to it. The editing, the song, and the footage all fit really nice together. 4/5 overall 5/5 for a first full amv.

Also: regarding the argument going on in here, since when are sources the major factor in originality. I know a couple original Naruto/LP videos.

[SeNniN]

Loved it, still love it, and will always love this lol awesome amv sennin

Thanks, jrob, now upload your sexy videos.

As for the vid itself:

I wasn't sure you didn't upscale at first (it looked blurry), but I checked and there's BR out, so I suppose you used that and added blur/shaking - wasn't bad.
Very nice idea with the tint in the beginning and VERY clever use of flashbacks.
Main thing - even when it got a little chaotic (probably on purpose) in the second half, it was still pretty clear what the conflict was - you have fairly good storytelling skill.

What I didn't like was the fact that I didn't know much how the

Spoiler :

girl died in the end. I suppose she was somehow shot while doing something with that killed group (conspiracy or something of that kind). Maybe it was intention or maybe I'll notice it after rewatching more times, but I found it kinda weird, given how much focus was put on it.

Very nice work for a first full-length, though, I give it 5/5 for the quality, sync and mainly storytelling.

oh, wow, now that's what I call a constructive criticism. Thanks for watching, Nya-chan.
As for the ending...

Spoiler :

Actually he kills her when he realizes that she was among the ppl that were behind the coups d'état, which drove the kid to his death.
Overflowing with tears looking back on that day, he shows no sympathy for her and kills her.
If you notice near the end when she drops there's a bit of smoke from the gun fire.

Very good work. One of the best amvs Ive seen this year. Very good emotional feel to it. The editing, the song, and the footage all fit really nice together. 4/5 overall 5/5 for a first full amv.

Also: regarding the argument going on in here, since when are sources the major factor in originality. I know a couple original Naruto/LP videos.

Thanks for watching, and whoa "One of the best amvs Ive seen this year"

I just wanted to thank everyone for taking their time out to watch, and comment on this video.
I wasn't expecting anywhere near this much feedback from you guys, so thanks a lot.
If anyone has the time to OP this video would really appreciate it! Thanks everyone!

[Nya-chan Production]

Ah, I see, that makes sense, then, thanks a lot for explaining :>

[SeNniN]

Ah, I see, that makes sense, then, thanks a lot for explaining :>

np, and thanks for the comment.