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Ruffy41
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My New AMV - New Editor Started here.

Post by Ruffy41 » Sat Jul 31, 2010 10:37 am

Hello, Boys & Girls, im a new editor here on the .org and i just wanted too start off with saying hi, and i can't wait too start and share my AMV's and my stuff with you guys. Please don't be that harsh too me, im kind of new, but ive been making videoes since 2006. But i didn't dare starting on the forum. So here i am. and here is my video, please give me your opnion. and i hope you enjoy it. :]


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OtakuGray
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Re: My New AMV - New Editor Started here.

Post by OtakuGray » Sat Jul 31, 2010 11:10 am

id say work on your scene selection. I get the concept but it was lacking and didn't really wow me at all.
Your transitions were alright.
I'll let other people worry about the text in the beginning lol im not really one to critique typography.
If you intended to lip sync then you should look at this: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/ ... psync.html
Not sure what else to say but i give this a 3/5. :|
godix wrote:Like this one amv. It was all like woosh, zoom with effects. And I was all like whoa awesome. Then that guitar thingies popped up and went dun dun DUN dun then those box thingies went zooming by and twirling around and shit. Oh god, then the hexagons popped up and I was like 'I just got a stiffie'. Then there was the circle with those thingies going around and I blew my load.
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Re: My New AMV - New Editor Started here.

Post by Grylvak » Sun Aug 01, 2010 5:09 pm

I likes it =o

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Re: My New AMV - New Editor Started here.

Post by CodeZTM » Sun Aug 01, 2010 5:09 pm

I was wondering how long it'd take for somebody to edit with this song. :lol:

/snags and reviews

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Re: My New AMV - New Editor Started here.

Post by Cyrix » Sun Aug 01, 2010 5:59 pm

Pretty good for a first AMV. The footage and mood of the music go together well, but as with any Eminem song the lyrics are very specific (and usually about his life) and its weird having a lot of the video having nothing to do with the lyrics, though it seems you matched them when you could. Besides that, it's basic but it works - simple cuts and fades, but you edited to the music well and I don't recall any cuts that felt awkward.

The ending is a little weak and anticlimatic, but I haven't seen the anime so I don't know what you could have done differently there.
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