AyAto - Charlotte [AKROSScon 2010]

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AyAto - Charlotte [AKROSScon 2010]

Post by AyAto-sama » Mon Dec 13, 2010 4:59 pm

Hey, everyone! It`s my new AMV for AKROSScon 2010. I hope you will enjoy it!

Have fun!





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Re: AyAto - Charlotte [AKROSScon 2010]

Post by Laerium » Mon Dec 13, 2010 7:00 pm

Sometimes I thought editing in some places could be somewhat faster, but enjoyed watching it a lot! :3
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Re: AyAto - Charlotte [AKROSScon 2010]

Post by AimoAio » Mon Dec 13, 2010 7:08 pm

I didn't really like the shaking to the beats near the start of the video and I think you went a little overboard with the film/grain effect in the 2nd half of the video. The leaves idea was pretty nice but that scene at 1:03 drags on waaaaay too long and although the explosions seemed to be synched quite nicely to the song, it didn't fit very well with that scene.

But apart those few points, the rest of the video had really good pacing and excellent sync.A few effects here and there looked pretty cool too and I love the drama in the story.

So overall, I'd say it was pretty awesome. :up: I definitely enjoyed watching it and good luck with Akross! |:>

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Re: AyAto - Charlotte [AKROSScon 2010]

Post by Mkid » Mon Dec 13, 2010 8:29 pm

AimoAio wrote:I didn't really like the shaking to the beats near the start of the video and I think you went a little overboard with the film/grain effect in the 2nd half of the video. The leaves idea was pretty nice but that scene at 1:03 drags on waaaaay too long and although the explosions seemed to be synched quite nicely to the song, it didn't fit very well with that scene.
x2 its was still good tho :up:
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Re: AyAto - Charlotte [AKROSScon 2010]

Post by Magnus » Mon Dec 13, 2010 9:00 pm

One of my favorite bands.
To me it didn't really fit the song too well, although the ideas and editing per say was rather cool.

good luck in the contest!
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Re: AyAto - Charlotte [AKROSScon 2010]

Post by EkaCoralian » Mon Dec 13, 2010 9:46 pm

Yesss, Wolf's Rain!

I thought this was pretty neat. I liked your use of fluttering leaves in the first quarter. : D However I thought some scenes were kind of dragged out and were more like fillers for song space, just with added beats and such (eg. when Kiba first finds Cheza and walks up to her at the pond. That seemed really long to me.)
Also I think it could've been a bit faster at one point in the chorus with 'Until the day I die', where you had Kiba in wolf form slowly walking through the streets. Amidst all of the crazy shakes, fast scenes, lighting and other coolness it just looked a bit out of place to me.

But otherwise I really did enjoy this. :'D
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Re: AyAto - Charlotte [AKROSScon 2010]

Post by Chained(E)Studio » Mon Dec 13, 2010 11:49 pm

I already posted my thoughts already on AKROSS, I think but must post again cause I really loved this D:
I haven't seen a Wolf's Rain AMV that has actually been in my taste and yours just caught it immediately.

Your scene that started at 0:45, and continued through with him and her standing in the middle of the grass. --> was awesome!!
I am not sure if you made that? I am thinking you must have cause I don't think I have seen any videos with that ever xD? I just haven't seen it really used yet if so..?

But however, I think some of the visuals(explosions) could have been better, but still I really .. loved.

Just wanna say kudos to you, and can't wait for soemthing else from you :3





ps kitty at 0:04 so cute ^O^
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Re: AyAto - Charlotte [AKROSScon 2010]

Post by AyAto-sama » Tue Dec 14, 2010 3:39 am

and continued through with him and her standing in the middle of the grass. --> was awesome!!
I am not sure if you made that?
It was my work. And it was really difficult to create this scene. Whan i had an idea to made this, i couldnt thought that it will be so difficult. ^^
And, i have to say, that it was good experience for my, and i would try to make my new amv with more of some scene.

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Re: AyAto - Charlotte [AKROSScon 2010]

Post by TritioAFB » Wed Dec 15, 2010 8:56 pm

Man I'm gonna thank you for this vid. This song was one of the firsts songs I've ever heard when first started editing but it took too much time to see a well-edited video with it. And in some way I could watch also a flashback to everything I have done until now. This one is my favorite of the 2010 con
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Re: AyAto - Charlotte [AKROSScon 2010]

Post by HydraStar » Sun Dec 19, 2010 11:27 am

Chained(E)Studio wrote:ps kitty at 0:04 so cute ^O^
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It's really a nice video, but a little boring. I wish will you do something like Blood Flower again.. It was one of my favorite videos.

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